STRAWBERRIEZ Posted July 2, 2002 oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii that was sooooooooo ILL sista. naw, naw, hell naw, walahi u got some mad azz skills girl. POTENTIAL iz what ama call u now yo. LoOoL :eek: IF i could rap i would go ahead, but nah, i'll learn (someday ) ya, did u read my suggesstion in the Poetry Forum? Nothing about your raps, hell naw...lol. i just said u and LEAMANTE and umm...dem ( forgot names, i'm human here) should hook up 2 make ONE OFF DA HOOK ILL BLAZIN' MADAZZ JOINT, thats some seeeeeeeeeerious tingz right there yo. walahi. send me a email about that jam ting. kinda dont get where and tingz. holla at me sis, i mean...POTENTIAL. soul_somqueen@hotmail.com :rolleyes: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SOSO_SOMALI Posted July 3, 2002 hey girl not bad, very impressive, i did'nt know u rapped though, i thought poetry was it. ya, i wanted to go ONE ON ONE. i see your online, so check me out babygirl: SOSO_SOMALI *.VS.* RAP MISTRESS sweetcheeks you get mangled amidst my war sword.. you try and call my bluff n get strangled with the phone cord.. i stay raw, flem blood at least six spits per take.. i let go of spears quicker than justin timberlake.. whats ya fate? its tha sward, rope or gun.. u kicked raps to khalid mosque, and still got applause from none.. a born bum, find ya body ligiments floatin in the sea.. you spit garbage to an extent where ya audience feel debris.. i'm hellah dope like the devil sniffin coke.. if you're a spectacle, then i'm a ****in telescope.. my style is a terrorist , the taliban couldnt' harbour it.. destroy an emcee,, like the ex-arsonist.. heads ask how to refer to me? the word is boss.. i sitcom/sit calm, then kick bars like characters in Oz. mid ku dar Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RaP_MiStReSs Posted July 3, 2002 looooool, firstly, thanx for the comment. FINALLY, i have a battle to enter here, been long but nice 2 wait namean?..lol so u say u fight with your words eh??? You can't fight man..maybe I should just let these *******s rest/ 17 mc?you must've thought MC meant to Master Chess/ Let's compare clips..warya you got bare hits, I can spare wits/ Your @ss like popular opinions..Homosexu@ls share it/ I swear kid..I smack the nerds who's flows lack the burn/ Hope to take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns/ Every dap is earned, my poised drops make your boys stop/ Stuffs Illmatic down his throat, wack still comes out his voicebox/ I destroy hot..that's why you're still alive and breathing/ Would've bit my shit already, but your flow's barely teething beat you so hard for not "talking the walk" that your "knees spit"/ keep going..... 1 ~~RaP MiStReSS~~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SOSO_SOMALI Posted July 3, 2002 i'm definitely feeling that, but i PRAY that were just playyin' with eachother about the cursin' sweety. I got too much mad luv to hate on you. CONTINUATION.... yah shits wack...yah work gave me eye trauma for days/ he tryda help me see his verse..but gave me visual a.i.d.s/ nuclear concept shakes..unwillingly make yah body move/ dudes such a side kick, i thot his name was a karate move/ manic drop with resins…why verses make bombs spread/ Yah bones get more broke than pimps when yah moms dead/ eras my dad?..shottim..see how much of a ******* manic is/ our odds of losing are 0-2, like you records after this/ spit ink like bullets in yah eyes...spread it and dye/ il call you a taggof..look in the mirror and see why/ holla back sweetcheekz Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RaP_MiStReSs Posted July 3, 2002 HEY SWEETY, HELL NAW I AINT MEANIN' WHAT I SAY, JUS' DA FACT DAT ITS ILL, NOT DAT ITS TRUE OR NOTHIN'. continuation.... fact is, when the track hits, I leave you mcs backless/ Blast you with classics..I'm off the hook like eskimo jackets/ Go practice..screw crew drops..I'm asking "who's hot?"/ UnsignedHype, the one who leaves MCs strapless like tube tops/ So fu<k your nines and shotguns, rhymes you ain't got none/ you mc's dope lines are missing like dealers' when cops come/ A hot MC? your not one..all multi's and no real insults/ Tries to make pens halt..but drops wack shit on impulse/ I uplift like Fenholt..readers are made dumber by your shit/ Your "metaphors" couldn't hurt me if you "introduced me to four clips"/ Just forfeit warya..Your scores get split with Foreman hits/ Quit borin' kids..Like potters with nubs, you ain't formin' shit/ So drop the microphone..and stay off beats like injured cops/ You just pinchin' gods while I shatter teeth like dentures dropped/ You can't clench a spot like grasping full sprite cans/ I crush "ideas"..that's why you say I'm boxing with "light hands"/ hehehehehehehehehehe this is getting funny and fun. keep spittin' abowo...looool 1 ~RaP MiStReSs~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hibo Posted July 3, 2002 KIKIKIKIKIKIKIKIKIKIKI HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE the line that killed me rap mistress was when u said : ""Just forfeit warya..Your scores get split with Foreman hits "" keeo dis $h!t goin' yoll, your both good. this is soooooooo funny. just MY word LAtez Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blood_thug Posted July 4, 2002 what was that all about? it had good flowin' yoll, but why the sudden stop????? look who listened and actually "forfeited"..looooooooooooooool BUN FYA 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SOSO_SOMALI Posted July 4, 2002 what up people hell naw i aint forfeited to the sweet girl. she may be good, but not that good i had 2 go that moment, so unfortunately u had to miss me like dat. no time to waste now, b4 i have to go again, so ama break it down for you. 1 MORE THING SWEETY, I WANNA STOP DA DISSIN' AND START SOME DEEP THINGS, FEEL ME GIRL? I DONT WANT THIS TO END UP UGLY NAMEAN? so heres my story : Sweet Shani, It seems that I been caught up in a world of Situations Made of Decision makin from Facin this Generation And im Pacin… Cuz Shani I don’t feel like Chasin these *****es who feel like Racin The Dehydration got me dried up feelin like a Raison… And im Blazin… to BE PrePared for this all out Invasion Against me in this Occupation…cuz any conversation I have ends up bent-blade Back Stabbed with Crusaders KidNapped and Dragged to the back seat of a Cab And Capped inside of a Black Wrapped Bag Just to be brought back to ya Pad in a Blood Bath As I stand there and laugh… at all that’s happened since Time Pass Through a Wine-Glass waking up to a Fine-Ass ASKin myself…Where-Was-I-At… but **** it Why-Ask If it Happened, cuz if it did I would still be in jail Rappin With the sound of my Adams-Apple makin you Mad Again So fu<k you! This is the devil and im Glad-to-Sin Killing off Hansom-men after iv Had-some-Gen Shani, I’m making careful Decisions…planning perfect Incision slices With a Vision of cutting you up this ditching-the-scene With-the-speed of a Lambergeen…shaded in Amber-Green Hammering on the Gas, eating a Tangerine as the Cops-Pass… then suddenly Stop-Fast, to Wipe-my-Ass with a Police-Badge Wrapped-in-Cash That I Grabbed when I went for the Mask of the b!tch at Last nights Bachelor-Dance Seeing you cut up from a Glance Of where the other Officers-Stand …..wow shadow you ******* crazy…WHAT?…. Maybe iv been as Crazy as Amin@'s father Shady Lately But only in the concerns of Dating Why don’t you buy me something shani The only thing im saying… so Before A ***** comes to me with a open hand it will BE OVER Wrap her into a pretzel, and Clamp her hands to her Shoulders Shit…I TOLD HER tAg Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RaP_MiStReSs Posted July 4, 2002 HEY HEY ISKA WARAN ALL MY WIL' OUT SOMALI CATZ. I HOPE "ILLAHI MAHADIISA" WOULD BE YOUR RESPONSE 2 THAT, WORD. ok Im dissin a couple cats from another "world".....(not serious though,i never hate on my somlai brothaz, heard? "Madd Magan" and "Seriouz" Sanjabe, iLL ni99az, but cant reach DIS. what were yoll THINKIN'.....ACTUALLY..WERE U?????? qaxoti'z you get checked so fast from the steps Im takin, your neck is breakin..so dont try an test my patience, your expectations ya think you'll come out of this alive? your heart barely beatin, tell the shedan I said hi.. with your remarks and your filth, the only way that you'll be seen is on a carton of milk.. WARYA, wa wareerte, so just iidhaf, stop the hating "sanjabe" is on guskaga while Im concentrating man its qaxoti style, too many ridin my "dick".. but once I show em I got "balls" , they hidin from it cuz its a mans world,***** slapped, chinchecked, knocked out from my nuts the only reason your alive, ya dropped out from a slut opps did I say slut, I shoulda said a loose b!tch.. piss me off and I'll snap you in half like a toothpick oh shit, no... wonder why it hurt bein you.. ya just pissed off ya couldnt be in our crew ya might think I'm weak, I'ma wolf in sheeps clothing.. you aint throwin punches cause ya only keep poking.. I'm off the hook, juss like a coat from the rack.. tryna drown "sanjabe", but he float from the fat.. ya both tryna rap but ya hopeless at that, the only thing ya prolly good at is smokin the xashiish and the crack.. I'm dope and I'm back, spittin quick with double clips.. multi- syllable rhymes that y'all havin trouble with.. so Ima spit this shit, **** tryna talk the beef out.. it's a fist fight, (ouch) and WARYAZ I'ma knock ya teeth out hehehehehehehehehehe ( i tried to write more deeper and critical, yet i came home like 7 in the morning, so please dont think this is something i've been working on a long time, its just a one time use TING..hehe..., waz la'isku ciyaro noh) tag back at u soso_somali brotha Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jungle_City Posted September 17, 2002 theres alot of tough skills being portrayed, what happened for the past months though???? shout out to all me MInni' Minnies....and my fabolous West Coast Representin' Peeps...word up word up..and keep goin' iLLie Rap Miss G..word up word up...WuN Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jungle_City Posted September 26, 2002 My sister, i gotts friend here thats wanting to face you, seeing your online and everything, he will be using my name however. So Please do not think it is me you are competing with, just a friend thats not registered. thats all i want to say. peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Smokey Posted October 28, 2002 >>LET ME DO LIL SHYTIN' HERE/ Y'ALL FOOLZ GET WAT DA NIGGA TRYNA SPIT IN YA EAR/HARDCORE PURE FLAMES RIPPED OUT FROM MY GUTZ/WANNA RAP?TOO LATE NIGGA, CANT CATCH UP WITH MY GUTZ/ AM ON A HIGHER LEVEL NOW YO/DROPPIN' BOMBZ AND GOING ON A FAST FLOW/MAYBE YOU HEARD IT B4/AM WALKIN' WITH FOUR NUTZ/ WHILE Y'ALL NIGGAZ WALKIN' WITH HALF NUTZ/ DONT CLAIM TO B A THUG/ WE DO HOMERUN ON U AND LIVE U WITH NO HUGZ/ HOLLA AT CRIP MADE MAFUKA WHEN U SEE DA KILLAZ/ AINT GOT SHIT TO LOSE BUT TO DIS YA NIGGAZ/ AM FEELIN' THE HOT FLOW FROM THE SISTAZ/ NEVERMIND DEM CANADIANZ FOOLZ WHO CLAIMED TO B SIZLAZ/GOT BEEF?NO TIME FOR THAT DEE/ I HANDLEZ MY SHIT OUTDSIDE & HIT YOU IN A LOWKEY/I'M A PUSHER TILL DA DAY I DIE/ HOLLA AT A NIGGA IF YOU KNOW THE GAME AND DOWN 2 RIDE/HOLD ON AM I DONE YET?/NAH,I GOTZ MO PURE FLAMES TO SMASH THROUGH YA INTER-NET/ SHORTIES WANNA COME AROUND ME SHOWIN' DEM CHURLS/AT THE SAMETIME THEY AROUND U ONLY FOR DEM DIAMONDS AND PEARLS/ ITS A DAMN SHAME/THINK B4 U POST YA FAKE SHIT,ITS DAMN LAME/ >GOT MY MIND RIGHT GURL G/ ALSO KNOWN AS DIMEZ AND WALKIN' S.T.D/ I GOT YOU WIDE OPEN NOW FOOL/ MAYBE YOU WILL HEAR FROM THIS GUTZ AGAIN CAUSE THATS ALL I DO, >HOLLA Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
poetress Posted October 29, 2002 i ain't no rapptress or nuthin, i ain't claimin nuthin, so don't come at me like that. here goes: Innocence Departs What happens when innocence departs? Does it fly off like a bird, sad, dark, and sullen as the crow? Or feel slowly 4 its exits, while blind hands stumble over surfaces Does it shrivel up and die, Or help u blossom further into life Does it break like cracks in a sore? Leaving long-forgotten, torrid memories Or is its failure 2 imprint depressions within or subconscious Why many people run 2 derive from it Innocence, is it treasured or useless? The child of the conscience Such questions r ambiguous, 4 no answers spring from them Does my mind hold answers? None of the such, 4 my innocence departed with the Icarus' luck *this one's free verse. i usually write free verse cuz i think it allows for greater use of metaphors and and other analytical comparisons. but when it comes 2 ballads, sonnets, etc. i usually write in rhyming 14 line total (italin style), with 2 6 line stanzas and a final 2 line ryhming couplet. it also helps to write using a refrain except that repeated line don't ryhme, but that's where poetic license comes into play. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Smokey Posted October 30, 2002 WUZ UP Y'ALL.THIS IS FOR THE REAL NIGGAZ WHO GOT THEIR MIND RIGHT AND THE REAL SHORTIES WHO GOT THEIR **** IN LOCK.HOLLA BACK..TO DA LADY OF THE HOUSE..DONT EDIT MY LINES YO.ONE Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ScarFace Posted October 31, 2002 ppl CAN ANYONE JOIN if so here/s mine I'll battle you on the net,// I'll battle you in the flesh// Verbally viscious// telekenetically gifted// Took a minute to exhibit and come up with mah **** // At 1000 degrees celsius I make Emcees melt// **** da record label I appear courtesy of myself and SOMALIAONLINE.COM// Whoever grabs the mic after me'll gets booed// Get everything in the club thrown at you and ya' crew// SO dont touch tha MIC>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<< rap mistress YU wanna battle just HOLLA Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites