"Rhyme Or Reason...Lyrics off da dome"

[GeelJire]

done.

 

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[GeelJire]

done

 

[This message has been edited by GeelJire (edited 01-20-2002).]

[GeelJire]

done

 

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[Universal_Thug]

Let me get me thoughts toghethah...zeen

I'll dive in the battle zone soon......

[WorldVisionChild]

Sorry to be a bitch, but I don't think this "hip hop" area is gonna be any different that the somalinet ones. 'Cuz most of the ish I read over there, in my opinion, wasn't what I would call developed. Oh and I just hope that people here will be able to take criticism, and not reply with "**** you hater" and whatnot.

 

-foundation out!

 

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When Life hands you lemons, stick 'em down your shirt to make your boobs look bigger

 

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[Hibo]

Vision

 

Ya ain't have to be negative, namean? If ya ready for a battle...let loose. Ya might loose blood here. The world is your!

 

Pz

[WorldVisionChild]

Clearly y'all need someone to critisize(sp?) your work. Lookin' back on those "battles" and "rhymes" ya'll put up on somalinet, some of those were really bad. Now, if someone tells you, that your work is bad, don't take it personal. Ask them what needs to be fixed to make your work worth readin'. Some of these ppl can be str8 up haters, ignore them. Others, like myself, would like to help y'all improve on your writing or whatnot. Critisicm(sp?) is needed. I don't care what you think, it is NEEDED. If you're serious about your work, you'd be willing to listen to what ppl have to say about your work, and consider their suggestions. That's all man.

 

(edited cuz i can't spell for shit lol)

 

--foundation out

 

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[Pig]

Originally posted by WorldVisionChild:

Critisicm(sp?) is needed. (edited 09-26-2001).]

 

Criticism or Critisicm? Improve our writing?

 

Nomads are ready to have a war with fellas like you. Get in and show your skillz...or Don't be a critic.

 

[Hibo]

Yo gj heard ya son.

now ya fallow me as tuor you to ma theory..

 

What?I'll beggin like judge gave orders/ I"hold" more mic's than news reporters/

Spit so "loud" I turn on all voice-activated tape recorders/

What son? You think I'm playing?/

I spit so "sick" I got bad breath and my teeth start decaying/

The iron-mic knight instead of dragons it's these bullshit eMCees I'm slaying/

Verbal matters produce flames when I recite my lyrical tactic sayings/

When I get mad, I explode into 1,000,000 verses/

All un-edited dissing every phucking eMCee with mad curses/

On that phuck, a$$, damn, type sh^t/

Blast eMCees put them on total intermit/

After I rhyme, eMCees get lyrically phobic/

They don't wanna rhyme no more/

You get no props in the street like a pimp with no whores/

Even on "10 white chicks, I scored/

Lyrical tongue lashing leave your throat scorned/

Every pen I touch to write a rhyme automatically becomes an artifact/

Under pressure, I'm like a 52 character password, cause I'm hard to crack/

Verbally get "high", like smoking chronic, I rep myself completely/

Spit virus filled rhymes, electronically to burn out your WEBtv/

Verses weigh 27 tons to pound lands/

They won't play me on the Radio because I distorted and exploded the AM/FM frequency band/

I frequently ran, threw many crews and they shoes/

I'm tired of battling wack eMCees cause against me, Too many lose/

Diffuse my mind, refused the time/

Sever your "chrome dome", "SYMMETRICALLY" to put "your LIFE on the LINE"/

The one who spit so "hot" it feels cold/

What the phuck you ask is that? Don't matter it sounds phat when it's told/

Like a store with no security your merchandise get stole/

Straight off the dome sh^t/

Spit on you so bad on stage make you wanna go home quick/

Talking nuff' sh^t, talk like that C@pital b!tch/

Then say some dumb shit, "oh your lucky that I can't spit"/

Nigga, don't you ever in your life think you better than me/

What the Phuck? Nigga I'll leave you with "wet bloody holes" like "pussies"

And that's exactly what most of these niggas are/

Most of them niggas don't even know that a verse can contain 16 or 32 bars/

Niggas made of glass like most jars/

At this point I'm just spitting to spit/

Whatever the Phuck I type from my fingertips/

Gets post and than you people read it/

Like "ORPUJE?OE", I don't really care if it gets critiqued/

Never meek,a genuis thick glass geek, burn holes with my pen through the looseleaf/

EMCees nowadays is non-versatile and very weak/

When you call em' out, they like immigrants talking to the cops, "they don't speak"/

Y'all should just pack you bags, leave the lounge and retire/

Y'all niggas couldn't spit "hot" shit, if I lit your rhymebook on fire/

Like most somali girls vaginas before marriage you cant' **** with me/

My name stands for Sunset's.Unlimited.Nouns.Specifically.Expresses.Terrifically/

Now at this time you be like "Damn, this nigga is ill/ You'd prolly rec me as Man-U-ill ((Manuill)/

I know I got skills, you Phuck with me I'll make you an "ENEMY OF THE STATE" like "Will"/

 

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I'm where it endz...

[Pig]

Yo, sunset Thats some tight piece...Amma try to be the referee this week and probably jumb in next week. zeen?

[ProPaiN]

done

 

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[WorldVisionChild]

Originally posted by Pig:

Criticism or Critisicm? Improve our writing?

 

Nomads are ready to have a war with fellas like you. Get in and show your skillz...or Don't be a critic.

Maybe...improve on your ability to understand simple things like "sp". Meaning "spelling"...you know..sp..spelling. Get it? Got it?...

 

Oooh..a "war"..Are you callin' me out kiddo? LOL! Are you?

 

Like I said before. Criticism(sp?) is NEEDED. It's pretty obvious you haven't read my post before, and if you did, your little head wasn't fully capable of understanding a few sentences strewn together. I suggest you read it over again, slowly, more than once too, maybe you'll get it then. Insha'allah, you will.

 

 

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[Pig]

WorldVISION

 

U need clarity/more than criticism

 

...da door is open

 

 

[WorldVisionChild]

Yeah, go on and ignore my question, typical of you wannabe "emcees".

 

The door is open huh? Ladies first, so step in.

[Pig]

Originally posted by WorldVisionChild:

Yeah, go on and ignore my question, typical of you wannabe "emcees".

 

Vision, ya ain't nothin but a naggin female. Wellcome to the Taliban zone...like I said before...da door is open. Show me yo skillz or just keep reading the camel milk threadz for more ideas.........