...::Frozen Hearts::...(Open Mic)

[Supafly]

YEa am tryin to elevate with my Open Mics ...so am droppin my second one feel free to critize hate or love it doesnt really matter....

 

Never felt the warmth of the radiance of another person/

What was it that constantly made all the lovers divertin?/

Away from her was the only place where love ever stood/

Only the ashes of relationships laid like her love was wood/

Could she ever love with all this frozen ice on her heart?/

Needed to get an ice axe and axe the ice for love to start/

The ice stopped her and dropped her to be a part of love/

Never wanted to be a house wife but to be a tart at pubs/

Emotions tugs..Devotion to love is all she ever wants now/

The ice is seen on the exterior and everybody just frowns/

Now she wants that crown that her daddy used to give her/

..''My little Princess''..

Is all she ever thinks about while her emotions grows bigger/

To hold another figure..Because now Supa just wouldn't do/

The only words that came out of her fragile mouth was..I do/

Very few's affection made a connection with her frozen soul/

Left all alone but this bitter warmth will never go on its own/

So she was thrown.. And smashed up these feelings/

For her passion of effection to be let free without sheilding/

 

The End

[Supafly]

I guess Nobody replies in this site!!!

[- diamond princess -]

We just tend to ignore your topics...Just Kidding! But seriously, your poem is tuff. Why don't you post it in the Poetry Forum? Anyways keep it coming!

[Supafly]

Well I GOt MY Own Site I poet MY poems But I wanted to Share..with Every1 who wanted to check it out Thanks fo readin it anyhow

 

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