Ducaysane Posted June 25, 2008 Sakhar, Saaxiib, sharmuud adiga kaama wado. waxaan ka wadaa gabaygii aad soo tirisay iyo midkaan aan meesha ku qorey waa isku hal gabay oo Sayid maxamed baa tiriyey. Raali iga noqo hadii aad si kale u qaadatey. ....I am out on this thread. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 25, 2008 Inkastuu shaxaad yahay midkaa inanku noo sheegay Marhadduu intuu shiin cuskaday shiishay xarafkiisa Oo uu xiin la shawroo haddana gabay ku sheekeeyey Alleylehu shujjaac inuu yahaaan maanta idin sheegay Ha yeeshee ninkii shidani waa yara shiddoobaayee Shariifyada u maagaayo iyo sheeko xumadiisa Shacabkuu hoggaankoota nacay shamal tilmaankiisa Dagaalada shareed ee dalkii shoolida ka yeelay Shiqaaqada saxwada iyo markaan sheexda nagu taalla Sheel-sheelintu doonayyiyo ninkaan shaqfadl'aantiisa Sharka iyo shiddada taagan iyo shahad xumaanteenna Ragga sharraxa noo simahayyee shalabka noo qaatay Oo inay shu'eenteen dhisaan nadar kusii sheegay Jabbuuti iyo shirkeediyo raggaa showrka nabad qaatay Ee shacabka naafada ahee shiishka lagu toogtay Inay jeerkan wada shaafiyaan rabaya shaankooda Shiddaday wadaan ee kudhibi sheeg haddaad garato! Shanta nabada jecel baan ahayn shallay darraadiiye Shilka nagu dhiciyoo xarbiga shaamka naga yeelay Shisheeyahay nawada shiidayoo shiilay shacabkeenna Shiddadaas wixii dhalay abtow sheeg haddaad garato! Shukriyo and sahriyo waan jeclahay sharaf udkoonkoode'e Sharta lagula kacay wey dhibtaa shuqul xummaadkiiyye Hayeeshee shiffay doonayaan shacabkan liitaaye Shariifyadii haddaad diiday oo tuurtay shaqalkoodi Bal iisheeg xalkaad hayso ee show-shabka ukeeni! Shaqfadii marraantaa waxun bay shalalablaysaaye Shanqadheedu waa shawqo iyo shayxun marantiiye Inta sheekhu noo maqanyahuu sheedda hore joogo'o Shib inaad tiraahdaa ku wacan shuqul gobeediiye Ka shin dhowr intaan nabadda guud dooni sharafteeda Allow ma iri! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Laba-X Posted June 25, 2008 What's with all these duels ya Xiin, what is at stake here? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 25, 2008 The dialogue thread is a genuine one! This is however is a playful literature exercise between A & T and me. The man has some potential and I want to cultivate him further! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted June 25, 2008 Maadaama nin waliba xaraf qaatey bal anna aan 'G'da ka wardoono! Guluf! Gabbal dheer guluf horor ah haddaad geesiyo u weydo Ku gedaansho ninaad col kala tihiin afarta geenyoodba Oon warmahiyo Leebkiyo kuu go'nayn gudin masaar toona Oo ay gacalladaa baqqatin gaadhoo ilmadu gobo'leyso Eeri go'an go'doon uu ku dhigay gurmad aan la sugihayn Hadba talada tii kula gudboon laab gubashadeed dheh Gargaar kuuma noqon karo Xirsoow anagaaba gowracane Galabaan fogayn gaalla duul la timi maxas gumaadeene Na gamuunte gooraan la galabsan gaantaalna noo yimiy e' Geyi nabdooniyo geella dhalay unbay nagu galaafteene Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 25, 2008 Ga'du waa the stuff of the rookie Try shiink adeer---in the words of Mohamed Dheeg of Hargeysa, Shirbo iyo cayaar bay ahayd shalayto deelley'e Kumanyaalki ShooxBoole ee Shaacirka is moodey Shan midhlii xaskuu galay markii shiinka loo rogaye Mid kalena waa digniin shaafiya oo waa shuruud adage Nin geeraar Shaxaad uu ku helay shir isla soo taagey Iyo Shuqyareey Heesba waa laga shisheeyaaye Shafkay hays daraan ragay cadyiin shaarubaa sare'e Isku sheega iyo biyo fatalaq shiinka loo geline Adeer meesha A & T baa larabaa in lagu aaso! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abdulladiif Al-Fiqih Posted June 25, 2008 Reer Bari iyo Reer galbeed aan aragno midkii gabay ku badiya Waryaa reer galbeed meelbaad kaga dhacdey...maad atleast reer hargeysa iyo reer buuhoodle/Laas Caano noo soo dirtid ..... Gabay niman shib ka ahayn,misna shaacir ku ahayn Aan shaqalka ugu dhigin,madka iyo khifiyo shalaq Oo xarafka sheegiyo,xuduuddana shirrabihayn Oo shooliyoo oran,shafkaygaa wax jiifaan. Sheegaye midkaasuna (A&T),asna waa shiddiyo hoog!! ... How many times are you going to repeat this stolen bayd? Waxaad leedahay adeer masraxa la imaw Sakhar iyo Emporor fadlan ragga isu dhaafa. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted June 25, 2008 Xiin, That's according to you, adeer. Don't try to standardize your views . Now, I believe 'ya'leeyda' is the hardest to attempt, which only few great poets such as the Sayidka, Dhoodhaan, M. Dacar and others have managed to do. Shiinleedy isn't all that. Besides, the important should be placed on the meaning and message of a poem, rather than its 'alliteration', to which you seem to negate everything. 'G' is know for its ability to express messages meaningfully. If I were interested in the number of letters I can conjure up, I would have tried the difficult 'Ya' . PS: Waan u jeedaa in aad A&T iska daba dhigatay adeer, balse wuu iska kaa dhicin doonaa . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fiqikhayre Posted June 25, 2008 Oo adiguna maxaa ku dhibayo? Saw shiddo iyo hoog doon matihid? Adeer waxa ku gubaya waan garinyee bal waxaan u mileyanayaa in aan lehelay ninka aad daba-socotid. Edeb yeelo. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 25, 2008 lol@Ragga isku dhaafa. ALadiifow, nin reer sheekha oo caalim ah baa Gaalkacyo waa hore tegay. Dadku wuxuu damcay inaan diinta Islamka baro oo tacliimiyyo. Laakiin mid fooxiyye ah oo dadku u xaraysnaayyeen baa wadaadka u arkay inuu qatar kusoo fool leh yahay! Wuxuu go aan ku gaaray inuu wadaadka iska qabto. Dadku magaalada Galkacyo buu iskugu yeeray oo wuxuu yiri aniyo wadaadkan badowga ah ee magaalada dhowaan yimid bal noo garnaqa. Fooxlihii: wadaad quraanka ma taqaannaa ? Wadaadkii: haa wallaahu aclam. Fooxle:war aclamtaada ma aqaanne, quraan ma taqaannaa baan ku weydiiyey! Wadaadkii: haa Fooxle: qul huwallaahu axad sax ma tahay? Wadaadkii: haa Fooxle:Allaahu samadna sax ma tahay? Wadaadkii: haa Adigu suuratul ikhlaas bu ku dhammeeyey oo wadaadkii haa ka yeersiiyey. Markuu dhammeeyey buu inta dadkii caamada ahaa ku jeestay yiri: asagoo af qushuushleh buu haa leeyay, oo wadaadkii bahal dharbaaxa labada indhood ku dhuftay. Dadkii baa inta soo yaacay yiri: War culumada kala qabta It was said the said sheekh left the city and settled in Dhagaxbuur, culumada kala qabta, he thought was more offensive then a slap from what he thought was an ignorant heckler! edit: lol@Paragon. I think your Ga'ley was great but I want inaan A & T inaan jiq uga dhigo, haddii kale hadhow buu wuxuu oran Paragon ba waa ku gabyey ee maxaa aniga laygu diidayyaa. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abdulladiif Al-Fiqih Posted June 25, 2008 ^ Walaahi waad igga qoslisay. It was said the said sheekh left the city and settled in Dhagaxbuur, culumada kala qabta, he thought was more offensive then a slap from what he thought was an ignorant heckler! Laakiin waxaan umaley adiggu hada inaad ka wax dhirbaaxay tahay....SOL-na Gaalkacyo tahay mise kaasi waa A&T. .... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted June 25, 2008 ^Isagaan xargo ku haynaa . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 25, 2008 Paragon, you must've gotten the jist of that stroy ! ALadiif, war ma sheeko kalaad rabtaa inaan ku sheego? A & T is the ignorant heckler who attempted to slap sh. Xiin, ALadhiif is the one who innocently said culumada kala qabta, or in your case ragga isku dhaafa! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted June 26, 2008 Xinn That I differ with you on only one issue naturally limits the amount of ideas in the poem. I cannot fabricate issues that aren't there. Nonetheless, I think this will give you a lesson or sort in modern peom writing which is all about understandibility. Yours is more Arabic than Somali, and it is quite difficult to follow for the young audiences. I guess mine caters to the needs across ages. Quraan iyo Riyaatu-saalixiin kaad miciinsatay markaad Af-Somaligii kugu yaraaday. Sharbin maayoo dhoodaan oo wuu sharaxayaayee Shabeeladda maxaa laba ka dhigay sheeda kala haysta Sheeg waaguu yidhii waxaa inaga xiga shan iyo dheeraade Shalay sheekadii dhacdaa haddana sheekhyadu wadaane Shariifyada maxaa laba ka dhigay shaambadaha qaata?? Sharkii uu midkood shiribay ee shaaca laga qaaday Shan kun iyo kolkii ay dhinteen Shaafi iyo Shaaxin Shir inaan galaan rabaa oo shaaha la I siiyoo Sharaab inaan cabaa haboon oon shandado miisto Shabakadaha waa in laga daawadaa shaati caddidayda Sheekhi warkiisii markuu sheed u socon waayay SHABABKAA halgamayaan rabaa inaan la showraayee Shaydaan dadkaa uu leexsadee uu shanshada gooyey Shaamareer ayey igu noqdeen aan shakaal qabane Shilkaha wiilashaa saaran ee shiddaya baaruuda Sheekh iyo shariif iyagaa ii ah oo sharaf ku maamuusan!! Shanta nabada jecel eed sheegatiyo Xinnow shuqulkaagu Shanqadhaa aad bixinaysaa ma aha shaafi baa imane Shirqool muuqda baad ka odhan sheikh baa kuu maqane Sharooto bishimaha inaad nooga xidho yaad shushubaysaaye Shaadali inaan YEY la shubto markaan shiidayoo nacayba Shaalka inaad dhigata ood shuwaal kale laacdo Shara-calla ayaan idhi oo waa sheekoo ila shiiqsan Sharoobooyin badan oo shaqlan yaan kaa urinayaaye Shiffo inuu ku siiyaan ka baryi shayga kaa garani Intaadse meeshan uun shalalaxleyn sheeko baraleeyda Show inaad taktaa haboonaan laheyd hoyga ina-YUUSUF??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted June 26, 2008 Originally posted by xiinfaniin: It was said the said sheekh left the city and settled in Dhagaxbuur, culumada kala qabta , he thought was more offensive then a slap from what he thought was an ignorant heckler! Looooool@ Xinn's honesty! I am actually the grandson of that Sheikh who fled to Dhagaxbuur. Dharbaaxadii awoowgaa baad wali ila daba socotaa, markaasay Paragoon, Abdilatiif, Sakhar iyo rag aan waxba ogayni leeyihiin ""Gabbyaaga aan kala qabano"!! I know you are logged in, inaad wax warqad ku qorqoraysid waa la socdaa ood tolkii isugu yeedhay. The book of the EIGHTH EPOCH reads, "They Shall come togather and scribble down innuendos, but We shall see through their mischiefs and expose their proses disguised as poems". Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
