Prometheus Posted June 16, 2010 Oodweyne is employing a well-known tactic of lesser poets - buying time. Not everyone can wax lyrical spontaneously. xiinfaniin, your poem is a very good first attempt by a neophyte. I'll write a more polished and varnished reply haddaad wax ku darto. To be instigated into a poetic duel, I have to be impressed a little. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 16, 2010 ^^Hayye Awoowe talk is cheap. It’s easy to say things than do it. You hear me, I say do it! Now. . I give you about 40 minutes. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haatu Posted June 16, 2010 40 mins is too long. 10 mins max Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Prometheus Posted June 16, 2010 If Oodweyne quietly skulks away, I'll string a stanza together. Otherwise, xiinfaniin has to take a second stab at a poem. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kool_Kat Posted June 16, 2010 Originally posted by xiinfaniin: Keynaanka soo caanbixiyo calanka uu saaray Eebahay cizeeyoow markuu caalamka uu dhiibey Ee loo camiray goobta oow curadnimow heesay Cuqdad iyo ninkii ciilqabaa cay la gooniyahe Inta kale tahniyad caama iyo dira codkoodiiye Caqligaa kabiir laga noqdaa oo la citibaaraaye Waxaan caarid gelin baa jiroo laga cabsoonayne Ciza sharefle weeyoo ninragi ku camaloodaaye Cajamigu wakaa caashaqoo loo ciyaartumaye'e Inkastooy cakirantahay dawladnimo oo ciirsantahay jeerkan Waa calan jamhuuroo, dunida la citirafaaye'e Caan weeye taariikhda uu caalamkan yimiye Sayidkii cukaashaha ahaa markuu caabis diriraayey Timacade codkiisii markuu calanka saaraayey Ee uu kii kufriga caayey ee ciida gelinaayey Cawaalihii sameeyeyiyo raggii caalamkan kifaaxay Ee curiyey oo dhaliyeybaad ciriq wadaagtaane'e Cimrigiis jiryow khaatimaan kuu codsanayaaye Curudkii Magoolow eebahay ku callimi diinta Hadoo kale mid aan geerideeda maqal waxey oran jirta 'aabahaa w@s kaliya caay ma'aha'! Ma'aadan caayin cidna, runta qaarkeedse in lagu caayaa dhaanta...Ishaad katuurtay Xiinoow! Aloow kuu siyaadi...Intii kuu diidana, hade waa sida uu Che sheegay bacaadka iskeena markaad tiri, bey dharkaa naga wasaqoobaya ku marmarsiyoodeen... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xiinfaniin Posted June 16, 2010 ^^KK thanks for the appriciation. Oodweyne wuxuu u qabaa inaan iska hadlayno Rhaze, ku gartay awoowe. Waqtgii waa ka dhacay. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cawaale Posted June 16, 2010 Cawaalihii sameeyeyiyo raggii caalamkan kifaaxay Ee curiyey oo dhaliyeybaad ciriq wadaagtaane'e Odayga waa kacsanyahay maanta ma is tiri. Politics Sec.-ka maxaad kala soo doontay Xaaji? something tells me in aad Gooni-U-Goosadka u dan leedahay! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saalax Posted June 16, 2010 is this keynaan season. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
