qoslaaye Posted July 23, 2003 A day without you, Is a day without me, For you make me who I am, And who, I want to be. A day without you, Is a day without light, For you light up my sky, And you light up my life. A day without you, Is a day without sound, For I open my ears, To hear you around. A day without you, Is a day without cheer, For you make me smile, And you don't cause a tear. A day without you, Is a day without sight, For you open my eyes, And make my world bright. But a day without you, Will never be, Because I trust in you, That you will never hurt me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A7LA-SHU Posted July 24, 2003 hey qoslaaye that is so cute bro. i totally loved it... keep dat up.. peace n 1 luv.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Khayr Posted July 24, 2003 Salaamz, With the exception of the last line, the poem was real nice making that simili btwn emotions and the physical senses. Fi Amanallah Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites