IL CAPO Posted September 14, 2004 She closes her eyes and visions her life and how she wants it to be Instead of progressing forward she spins into rewind and reaches the point of insanity the more she tries the worse it gets there's no options left to choose she now thinks there's no point in trying every time she knows that she will loose. She had the life of all her desires waiting at her feet in every decision that she made none of them were of discreet She knew nothing of what it was like to work for what you got it was all handed to her and the value of money was forgotten she became spoiled and greedy and was too blind to realize but it was people like her that the world would come to despise all the kindness that rested in her heart would no longer matter all her morals were lost and the meaning of life was shattered she had no purpose, her soul was empty you could look into her eyes and see the envy even though it looked as if she had it all She was crumbling inside like an aged stone wall. Just when she thought it couldn't get any worse she lost what was handed to her and nothing else would be at her disposal she should have appreciated the kind heart of others especially when the one who gave her the most was her very own mother this emptiness inside is so clear as to why as she turns her head up to God in the sky she begins to cry "Please forgive me, she pleads, "for now I realize mu mistakes. Sometimes...leading a simple life is the way to a life long happiness. May Allah Guide Us All Through The Right Path. Kwaherini. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qac Qaac Posted September 14, 2004 mash'allah... nice.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A7LA-SHU Posted September 14, 2004 wooow... mansha'allah that was good wallahi.. some truth to it too.. and just wanna to let u know it is not that bad to be spoiled heehhe.. j/k Masallama.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HONEY-D Posted September 14, 2004 nice poem but shouldn't it be in the poetry section or may be things have changed lately what do i know. :confused: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoVa Posted September 14, 2004 .....Nice Story there Capone..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Raxmah Posted September 14, 2004 That was a very nice poem, masha allah. Are you the author? Just curios. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tuujiye Posted September 15, 2004 IL capo..sxb sheekoyinkaga waan ka helaa maan...masha allah.. bring more man.. wareer badana! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IL CAPO Posted September 16, 2004 The girl's name is ......* and she is a classmate. Raxmah..if you want to find out wether it is mine or i did the copy and paste stunt why don't you come around at my place on this weekend and i will show you few more of my work..if you are lucky i might even let you borrow some from me..now what do you say? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A7LA-SHU Posted September 16, 2004 IL CAPO i know im not mizz Raxmah but if i come all the way to Garrisa can u write some for me hehehe .. but seriously dude that is what i call talent.. and it seems most of ur poems are more of reality things, which we can relate to one way or the other.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
