rudy-Diiriye Posted December 16, 2009 u should stick to being a warlord cheerleader.. u poems suck! my 2c Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 ^^^Thanks Rudy, I know all those big terms and word play, must have confused the hell out of you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted December 16, 2009 Gen Duke is right, we should keep our sentiments about Duke the person out of this section. The Poems are honestly great! keep them up. But post one about a man who squeezed himself into a tiny baby underwear when he could have slipped into a big alxalaaf. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 Love is Love is in your face, it's being next to you in your place, it's the long awaited rain what men seek but seldom gain. Love is the way you make everything alright, the reason you are always on top without a fight. Being reassured and held tight, encouraged to overcome any fright Love is the happiness that's worth, the beating hearts of us both. It's the way loneliness is overcome by truth, how I feel for you is its proof. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hawdgirl Posted December 16, 2009 Rudy, Walaalo, if you can't combine a beautiful poems just like brother GD did, then shut the *** up it seems you are being jealous of his talent by the way if you think you've better poems bring it on then, I bet other solers would agree with me let us be the judges Soomaalideena waxaa ka buuxi dad badan who can't be happy for the talents those among us have God! if someone writes, they criticize, if they put a poem together which is one of the hardest things to do being non-native English speaker and all yet they criticize, God! why can't they be happy for the individual who put a lot of hard work into it, may be they are writting it from the heart and going through some phases in life Rudy I have been annoyed by your lame comment Grow up man!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted December 17, 2009 ^ Speaking of conjectures, one can say Hawdgirl waxay iska dhaadhicinaysaa Jananka. Rudy's issue is rivalry not jealousy. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 17, 2009 Change Have no shame That body has changed Yet beautiful, the face remains Don’t be fooled by glitter, it’s still the same game played at a different pace A little secret, your touch, still makes the heart race Corrupted souls shall burn, in that fire, that flame. Stay out of my way, no need to call out my name Give me time and space No promise my feelings, will remain the same Looking to the false dreams the ways and means To make life a little better, than it seems. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 31, 2009 To my daughter The simplest truth, The best things in life are free, You are the truest reflection of me. You who are heaven sent Strange that you have that pride, And my hot temperament The blood in your vains, Will no doubt cause you some trouble, However they will assist in overcoming the pain In pursuit of your goals I hope you always gain. As I gaze in your eyes I feel rather wise, You are my life’s greatest surprise. Those with the same name that come, After you, will never compare You are the first of my line and to my Heart you are forever rare. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GaroweGal Posted March 25, 2010 ^^^ Aawww cute poem masha'Allah. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GaroweGal Posted March 25, 2010 Originally posted by General Duke: ^^^Thanks Rudy, I know all those big terms and word play, must have confused the hell out of you. JOWWWWWW!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted March 25, 2010 Iska daafa hawdgal Haa internetka dhexdees bood boodowye marun baan banaanka ka heli alam deh alam garin deh goodireho rug deh balow deh baar baxey deh ala ladaneeye laanta miyaan laga! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites