General Duke Posted December 10, 2009 Falsehood in iron bars Street thug that resembles me Don’t bend the truth No need to hold falsehood in iron bars The old fable states always avoid false starts Witness to demonic street chases I despise them These raged, hungry pitiful souls And their expressionless dirty faces Cold, bloodied and cloaked in that shroud As the titans heavily clash in the clouds Terrified of the dark crowd, unable to turn Let alone scream aloud Lacking color or that sweet surprise The pain and suffering in her eyes Indicate that it’s the usual So don’t waste time In getting what was once mine Pathetic relic of a past age There is no hidden meaning to this rage Its clear her lack of faith will keep us chained Keep staring into my brown eyes My hatred for you is deep No longer do I want it disguised Numb and motionless in this rat race While your master smiles Content from a distance For ever in that safe place Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 10, 2009 Somali Girl: I met you Did not think much of you I ignored you For the life of me I wanted no piece of you I avoided you As if you had the plague in you I faked every smile I sent you Relief came over me as I walked away from you I denied you When ever someone asked about you I heard you Sweetest sound , coming from you I saw you My eyes were opened to the beauty that is you I want you Counting down the seconds till I meet you To my ever lasting surprise You took my heart and left my soul mesmerized Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
5 Posted December 16, 2009 Did you really write these? What are you, a poet? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 ^^^ yes I will try to compose 10 poems in the next couple of days insha Allah. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
5 Posted December 16, 2009 You disgust me, getoutofhere you poet you. Seriously though, that's really good mA. Why are you posting on these sad deserted corners of SOL? Find a more worthy medium, mate. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 ^^^No SOL is my favourite site and its not deserted. Anyhow must dash.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hawdgirl Posted December 16, 2009 Hey GD bro, What a beautiful poems! the 2nd one is understandable who its intended for but the first one? is it for our homeland Somalia? or for the lady, anywho they are beautiful by the way are you a writer? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 Directionless Without you my life is directionless, you are my North, my East, my West you are life at its best. As I sit and wonder about my shining star, and from my heart you are never far. I hope you do forgive: For I can not forget. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 HawdGirl: Thanks for the kind words sis, no I dont write much sis. Just poetry sometimes when I get the time. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 An old poem of mine... If I were poet I would write a thousand lines, explain the intersection of time. In simplicity I would resolve the issue of the day. If I were poet, I would be revolutionary like the Sayid and as cool as Khalif. A peace maker, who would resolve this never ending grief. I would try and convey the majesty of the word, In one line one great rhyme. If I were a poet, fruitful debates would endure I would strive for no acclaim and hope for no reward. If I were a poet, these words would touch your heart. Give hope to those who struggle, for them a guiding light in the dark. Remind all that truth has no equal, and love has no sequel. If I were a poet, I would compose that endless verse, it would have no room for hate, and contain no curse. In my poetry, every Somali would be heroic, our women beautiful and they would know it, my words would transcend region and clan, they would be pure and you would understand. If I were a poet, I would endear love and make people see, that this is our time, the time for you and me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted December 16, 2009 Originally posted by General Duke: In my poetry every Somali would be heroic My words would transcend region and clan We pray God turn you into a wonderful poer when dawn breaks tommorrow, so this clan malady you suffer from leaves you forever! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 Untitled Is it genetic to be so poetic? the words they spin, the creativity is it hereditary? Can a poet explain pain? Can he fathom the logic of the insane? Hoping is a poet’s desire , rationalizing the irrational is his fire . Words are his ammunition, a poet contemplates no competition. Visions are what poets see, the days, the nights and what’s in between. Is a poet romantic or is that getting too dramatic Now a poet must be a lover To his loved one there is no other A poet is a possibility of the arts So rare are poets it’s hard to start Now its time for a new poet Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted December 16, 2009 No, seriously, the poems are great. But the message in the last one is coming from the wrong person. You know you are becoming repetitive on the fame one. Please come with something new. yes, I want to be famous. But please something new. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Duke Posted December 16, 2009 ^^^This is the poetry section, kindly stop waffling.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abtigiis Posted December 16, 2009 I think it is a fair request. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites