Paragon Posted October 12, 2006 Hello people, would like to share a piece I've chopped down some weeks ago. All those who visit my blog might have read it there. But for the rest of you - I hope you enjoy it. It is a light-hearted attempt at an Ode, so don't be offended please . An Ode to a Xalimo (Bless your heart) Thy wafting scent of femininity is sweetest, When my nostrils’ crave is well pleasured; By that Dirac whose exposure is measured, By the perfumes spread when wind is fleetest Thy figure, my dear, natural elements revere Thy feet wherever they tread is the sphere, Neither hateful eye nor evil ear comes near That is the sort of good Xalimo you’re, my dear Now gallop before me like a horse, to and fro Sway those hips, darling, as far as they can go Burn that incense to the coal till I supplicate That my lungs with your uunsi would suffocate O’ Xalimo though art like an ‘Anjero blessed That I consumeth with a heart’s full delight Gratitude is to thee, for delicious foods I bite And forgive me for yelling when I am stressed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted July 16, 2008 Im proud of this one . EDIT: My blog url is now changed. Check my profile. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted July 19, 2008 is there a better feeling on this earth when you are alive and madly in love? love carries you on through your days life teaches you lessons in thousand ways have you ever so gracefully fell into a love that is built up so tall? spending time with one another at every chance lighting up each other's face at every glance forever wanting to hold on to this beautiful feeling knowing it was meant to be since that first meeting. walking, staring, holding hands all day and night the whole world passes by as though it took a flight careless to the world surrounding you fully fearless to the world's strength of 1000 bulls diving deeper into life's shallow water blues running faster through life's short times they go through smiling through the saddest of possible times crying through the happiest of rhymes sublime holding onto so many memories they cant keep grasp letting go of the old memories at long last. hoping, dreaming, loving their life knowing that forever their smiles will be rife holding each other in the formats of art simply looking at the other captures the heart alone the canvas is but a lonely plane by conjoining with color beauty gains beauty is a master piece in the eyes of the beholder forever holding the other, growing never colder like a singer without a song is a soundless pain a loved one is always there to carry you through the rain. Bless Your Soul...but that's how you make me feel every time I look at you...I guess it's Love Imitating Life all over again...! Nice 1 Comrade...Keep Them Coming. Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted July 22, 2008 ""walking, staring, holding hands all day and night the whole world passes by as though it took a flight careless to the world surrounding you fully fearless to the world's strength of 1000 bulls diving deeper into life's shallow water blues running faster through life's short times they go through smiling through the saddest of possible times crying through the happiest of rhymes sublime holding onto so many memories they cant keep grasp letting go of the old memories at long last."" Geesisanidaa brother ? I 'think' I have been 'inlove' before, but with an image, an idea! Never a real person, except obviously for Miss so and so . Having said so, the whole thing is humorous when you think back at it - somewhat childish too lol. Good piece BOB. Be careful with these fairy shimbiros, they can turn a man on his head Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted July 11, 2009 This here is to redeem me. Forget the other Ode. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The_Siren Posted July 11, 2009 ^- huh *shocked* well I am utterly insulted are you insinuating perchance that you were defiled of sorts in the other ODE thread? And thus require the production of a mew ODE to redeem yourself? For shame... Worry not however I shall cease teasing you lest I taint your sainthood lol Ps To the thread- BOB-Whoever you are weirdly I kinda liked your poem. And to paragon I shall leave you with this "Xalimo thou art like an Anjero blessed"...Oh how romantic, every Somali woman is bound to swoon having been compared to such a renowned exotic delicacy. LOL Adios Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted July 12, 2009 ^My dear, Siren. It's not that. In fact I kinda liked your teasing. You do it with such charm and elequence that it makes reading it seem delightful. There are others in my case for the Ode in the other topic. Perhaps they mistake me for a saint when I am infact an honest sinner? No body knows why some (close ones) feel to see the perfection they seek in themselves reflected in me. They are in for a disappointment as such human expectations applies to me NOT. I is a free bird... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nematoda Posted July 13, 2009 bob you never ceas to amaze me, am trying to minimize the amounts of poems I write but you have inspired. love poems are not for me, but there are many more beautiful thing in the world. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites