How Naïve was I??????

[ISHWAAQ]

Simple letter.

 

They run to me weeping and I said my friend it is just the moment you’ll grow out of, saying to my self what a pity how could one moaning over such a thing,

 

He stands before me and burst into tears telling me how he feels and all I could said was my darling; don’t you worry you’ll find your mate, saying to my self he will be fine. How cruel same may say, but I’ll say how naïve was i.

 

How naïve to understatement the power of LOVE,

 

I was Miss know it all, ‘till LOVE hit me,

 

I was Miss- independent ‘till LOVE let me down

 

I was Miss self-confidence ‘till LOVE question my ability

 

I was in my protected shell ‘till LOVE put me in to the spotlight

 

And when I express my feeling to the one which I love all

 

He said was “IT IS VERY CUTEâ€

 

I have wept and moan and nearly lost my mind

 

I have no one to run to cause I told my friend it is just the moment, but now it has been over a year and I am still moaning over him,

 

And now I know how my ex-mate felt when he said don’t detach me honey, how ignorant was I to say you would be fine my darling.

 

Now I know it is LOVE that reduces us to nothing, I shall not love again, nor fell out of love the men who answer to my feelings to such a four words. i am in love and always will be with him.

 

Love is a masteries thing.

 

:confused:

[Biixi]

Waaw, nice poem.

[Imperial Instigator]

How naïve to understatement the power of LOVE,

 

I was Miss know it all, ‘till LOVE hit me,

 

I was Miss- independent ‘till LOVE let me down

 

"I was Miss self-confidence ‘till LOVE question my ability

 

I was in my protected shell ‘till LOVE put me in to the spotlight

 

And when I express my feeling to the one which I love all

 

He said was “IT IS VERY CUTEâ€

 

I have wept and moan and nearly lost my mind"

 

That was the best part not saying the rest aint just sayin thats the part I liked the most..... ...keep up the good work

[ISHWAAQ]

This is my first poem, which I have ever writing; and frankly, I kind like it now.

Anyhow thanks for input.

[Imperial Instigator]

Its ok!!!......