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This poem is so cool.... ;)

 

I think its time for a positive post - since its eid and all smile.gif

 

 

You will recognise your brothers

By the way they act and move

Throughout the world

 

There will be a strange force about them

There will be unspoken answers in them

This will be obvious not only to you but to many

The confidence they have in themselves and in their people

will be evident in their quite saneness

 

The way they relate to women will be clean,

complimentary, responsible

with honesty and as partners

The way they relate with children will be strong and soft,

full of positive direction

and as example

 

The way they relate to men

will be that of questioning our position

in this world

will be one of planning for movement and change

will be one of working for their people

will be one of gaining and maintaining

trust within culture

 

These men at first will seem strange and unusual but

this will not be the case for long

they will train others and the

discipline they display

will be a way of life for many

they know that this is difficult

But this is the life that they have chosen for themselves, for us, for life:

they will be the examples

they will be the answers

they will be the first line builders

they will be the creators

they will be the first to give up

the weakening pleasures

they will be the first to share love

resources and vision

they will be the workers

they will be the scholars

they will be the providers

they will be the historians

they will be the coaches

they will be the doctors

lawyers, farmers, clergy

and all that is needed for

development and growth

 

You will recognise these brothers

and they will not betray you

 

By… Haki R. Madhubuti

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Ameenah cheerz mate for the poem it was tentalising, mesmeric and uniquely constructed by the writer.

 

Acolades from me for sure.

 

salam alaykom.

 

P.S.

 

I think its time for a positive post - since its eid and all

Ameenah yep tho its 26th Eid celebrations continue for three days innit and also friday is kinda eid day dang... make that four days hence we are expecting four topics as our present can you deliver? ;):D

 

P.S.2 Barwaaqo Eid greetings to ya and every one else.

 

Peace out, Mujahid.

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^^^^Take it easy on Geedid sis. I am really humbled by this wonderful poem. I for one recognise a good point from a bad one so this poem sets the standards for guys like me to improve as each day goes by!

 

I know where you are coming from Bee and I think you should be a little kind since this is a happy month! ;)

 

Peace.

 

Cont.

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LAKKAD, WHILE I WAS READING DIS POEM I THOUGHT OF U

BECAUSE NOT LONG TIME AGO U POSTED A TOPIC "WHO IS A REAL MAN" DEN I SAW UR REPLY RIGHT AFTER DA POEM!

( U WERE ON DA RIGHT PLACE ON A RIGHT TIME MATE)

 

I HOPE DIS ANSWERS UR Q!

 

EID MUBARAK

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Liqaye   

Caramel i saw the poem, and although i dont orient towards poetry as well as some people do,

I would use this poem to support what i have been saying all along, namely what is attractive in a man is his individuality, commitment to his ideals, and is a result of his own personal journey towards self enlightenment.

 

Women dont get that across with their checklist of traits a man must have, if they even understand that the ABOVE is what they want.

And it was much more a topic for men than the women.

 

 

Lastly i believe in all my MALE egoism, that i was not asking questions but answering them.

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Blessed   

^^^ Glad to be of service :D

 

Mujaahid

 

Ameenah yep tho its 26th Eid celebrations continue for three days innit and also friday is kinda eid day dang... make that four days hence we are expecting four topics as our present can you deliver?

lol. And don't forget the weekend - as most of us work during the week we haven't celeberated Eid fully.

 

P.S MJ what up with greediness bro? What happened to my present, ya'll have to give us something in return.

 

 

Lakkad

Do you only understand FARTA WAAWEYN?

 

Libaax Sankataabte

I knew Ameenah wasn't going to be that nice to the faaraxs.

loool. Brother I think you misuderstood me, I might be direct with faaraxs on some occasions. But I am a very sweet sister (when I feel like it) :D

 

 

Flying still

Ameenah...beautiful!!!

now where is that brotha hiding?

I can locate him for ya if you like.

 

 

Thank ya'll and Eid Mubaarek smile.gif

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