Megha Maan Posted September 17, 2005 I see both ways and I react post haist~ I'm not the one for all that garbage but I recieve the most waiste~ I'm a man with no face and i'm band from most states~ I got the rhythm to rock `em but still a man of no place~ I'm given no praise and receive sand on a snow day~ I'm told to make a mold but they give me no clay~ They try to treat me like a child and im told to go play~ At times I feel lost and I see no way~ So I find a secluded room and I proceed to go pray~ God put a smile on my face, yeah that's a coldplay~ I pray for happiness turn around and split it 4 ways~ Plottin show dates cause I think i'm hot on a cold day~ Aint nothin could hold me just check the song main~ Like, only the lonely would keep phony homies~ my guys is real they'll ride and roll they~ grab the bull by the horns and then scream ole~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Megha Maan Posted September 17, 2005 This Is just a lil' sum'n I had on my chest. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted September 18, 2005 Nice..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueEpocha Posted September 25, 2005 Hey Megaha Man, its a nice piece and I had the sudden urge to write first a response but it ended up becoming a contribution, a twist to the original. Hope you like it. I see both ways and I react post heist~ -I Step to each action with a reaction I'm not the one for all that garbage but I receive the most waste~ -I walk blinded yet I see the blood on my finger I'm a man with no face and I’m band from most states~ -I am a maverick so watch me I might trick I got the rhythm to rock `em but still a man of no place~ -I cover miles a day yet I'm no near I'm given no praise and receive sand on a snow day~ -And so I find myself yet again in the rear I'm told to make a mold but they give me no clay~ - Beauty remains in the eye of the beholder so I’m told They try to treat me like a child and I’m told to go play~ -I scream behold me for I’ll be the one holding you At times I feel lost and I see no way~ -Recognizing the light is one thing but handling the glare? So I find a secluded room and I proceed to go pray~ -To want different to choose me makes me bare God put a smile on my face, yeah that's a coldplay~ -Oh lets go back to the start, start to care I pray for happiness turn around and split it 4 ways~ -Can you feel the glow ignite and flare? Plottin show dates cause I think I’m hot on a cold day~ -Melt away the illusions and feel reality blare Aint nothin could hold me just check the song main~ -Tomorrow is another day that I look to spare Like, only the lonely would keep phony homies~ -I glance twice and dig deep to remain aware my guys is real they'll ride and roll they~ -For my face will take no shame or dare grab the bull by the horns and then scream ole~ -Just before I hear you shout beware Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolate and Honey Posted September 28, 2005 hey, dat was touching,especially dat part where you go back to praying cuz there is no one who holds u down like Allah. i just read it, and i got da urge to close my eyes and pray Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted October 13, 2005 Excellent reply to that Blue, Mr.Man, good come out on that as well.. Give 2thumbs to both of you,4taking ya time.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites