DeadlyVision Posted May 27, 2005 Check check my reality check Reality Check Check it's my reality check Reality Check Che'check-check! ... I Pops the streets Son! Popped the Cops that seized my Gun Bouncing cheques, they couldn't freeze my Funds B-slap the Pope and tease the Nuns Got2Get Rich, so I chop cheese- On The Blocks We RUN! Me Mack and Sort-Off. Roam tight like hand'cuffs Made cash, catch-linkUps! Hatters get shanked up! Red out yo'white tank'top Check I see u see chick, Than act u can hang'tough! Watch BadBoy and think Puff U Rap, U Famous...Nig U Just'Sing Soft! Am on the grimes on the daily times Crimes, defining Nines! Lines, surprising Minds! Rhymes, land-minding Mines! I write real while you compose church hymns- My heart hears whatever my eye blinds R.E.A.L.T.Y I check for the asnwer on the Sky No word of a lie am living to Die Believing that Lie They told me when I was Shy I would never make it no matter how far I take it Along the way one day I would end up to fake it It was my reality check-they didn't see- they had to mistake it Beef? I must stake it. Dear Allah, they try me wrong with evil visions I wake wit'- Cold sweats I SOAK-IN, having me to break fit- Check my past step post To death been soo close All around me many souls rose Like they had after-life roles My Angel compose, what my Evil sticks in his nose Tryin2 mess up cloaks Get my heart on it's toes Che'check-check how my honesty glows My reality check my mentality flows Be the Repoman, no Insurance watch how yo'property Goes! bla'bla'...Rap it along Sing that song, Ring that phone .... Check check my reality check Reality Check Check it's my reality check Reality Check Che'check-check! Bla'bla! ~1~ PME DV None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted May 30, 2005 RealityCheck* .... My worlds timezone Filled with killers and mass murders Composing the same song It's just from Reggea to Reggeatone The Aftermath they got their Records'on! Bush-Rumsfield-Dick-Blare-Vladimir, See how they going on Am going on-LIKE Push-Run'steel-Duck-Glare-than fall them near! Am warzoned so, deadlyvision me clear :mad: We Dying We Living We Leaving Through all we Believe in Is Decieving So, why can't tha 5 Prayers be a Reason To get you through tha 4 layers of tha Season Islam is only peace so stop Seething! Riba is haram so no need for leasing! Whispering words is how Evil be Teasing ___ Oh how they; they stray play My mind one way Dealing Dimes Will Pay Hope for Sunshine oneDay Oh how they; they stray play O'Oh how they; they-Theey! My mind one way Dealing Dimes Will Pay Hope for Sunshine oneDay Oh how Theey.....They-Theey! ____ Live in a world were Diamonds come b4 Life! Cheapers creepers- Imagine man handling more than 4 Wifes* Going over the world to learn more lies* Hate how U tongue fool- Mr.President I can read the honesty from ur Eyes* So me no nice! Broke English like Thin-Ice* Am at the End of the world chilling wit' Chong Eating Chin-Rice! Beef, Sauce With White-Guys* Twisted Blunts and Rolled Dice- Now am shifting-change grown Old-Wise! Serving Democracy, All-Rights! Even wrote days and Post nights* Hunger with Anger So, F-U use to be all my Replies* Shole shot for my Foe-Surprise! No cargo only need Knowledge for Suplies* PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME Fear? you ain't surprising me- Am like my Ego, you rissing me- Dejaal Battle, My Freemasonary... Freedom the mase in me! Am Creative; Unchallengeably... ~~~DoneWith~~~ ___ Oh how they; they stray play My mind one way Dealing Dimes Will Pay Hope for Sunshine oneDay Oh how they; they stray play O'Oh how they; they-Theey! My mind one way Dealing Dimes Will Pay Hope for Sunshine oneDay Oh how Theey.....They-Theey! ____ ~1~ PME DV None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted May 30, 2005 AnotherFeeBase! ... DV PME Fameless... U never see me on yo'TV Most wanted Warlord-slash-Gunman'OG! Not my fault, see how they got me to Be? Now am rolling tough as Teflon- With the intelluct I reckon- At the end be their Ecconomy I wreck on! Let 'em feel the hot spoon of Herion- Cashing from junkies that pair on- Corner nooks with papers for my books Share the ugly life I bail on! Addicted to misunderstanding All am planning, is freedom for my Land and- Along with my Religion, my Believes I be Deffending! While ya'all jus'depending Sinning, Though U should'of been Repenting! While ya'all jus'pretending I keeps it real, remain 2be tha Codefendant! For My Body, Soul & Mind is all am Representing* No more being descendant! Am staying HERE! Hope yo'all HEAR! Write Right it's only my rath yo'all FEAR! Temper test me to get hurt OhYeah! Am deadly through the year- See this is how I vision If u cut friends who got no ambition U'll find loves prescription This be your diction Develope faiths addiction Listen to my words-Never follow my footsteps in action- Am bad rude in disription But for my people and nation Am for ever wishing for a better mission Fuc tha WorldVision Excuse my lingo my mind's just mixing* I glue clue together but nothing is fixing! So ama reality check out b4 I start twisting FromHead2Page--- MoreLessSense! ~1~ DV PME None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueEpocha Posted May 31, 2005 Here is a lil something I wrote not too long ago, I'm a working progress and so is my writing. Still learning to get a nack for it, anyway I thought I would share. IN PURSUIT OF TRUTH Are we living in a dream world In a fantasy like life Where the sun shines always and perfection comes naturally.... A world where unhappiness and suffering are a thing of the past.... And every rainbow has a pot of gold.... A world where we recognize our dreams inside our realities... Wait... Does everything have to be so whirled Destructive like a tornado Because that’s what it feels like...in my mind As fiction and reality clash and collide But Confusions never stop And Delusions have become the norm All are in constant pursuit Pursuing the truth No, none of that “is there life on other planets†But whose truth is the truth Delusions are the norm Pursuing the truth becomes Through the youth The future of our tomorrow Are you praying to borrow another day! Because you have been set apart to fay In making what is only a dream into reality So realize! So realize so realize Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 1, 2005 Nice Piece BlueEpocha... ... Freebased Poetry~ ~ Imagine all I been through? Swam as a seed to find my kingdom Amongs millions of other seeds, It's all true Less made it along the way had to come 1st boosting speed, For my freedom My gliding motion taking short cuts with emotion Witnessed many causing comotion and dying in portion My only fear was my Moms wouldn't get an abortion So I would make it, So I made it Came out! Heard better, saw clear, felt my 1st hug Feeling I still can't explain Nothing I do could pay her so I share my lifes loveletter, no fear won't bug Grew sane, insane feeling sain, major me only I can cause my own pain Same as same goes for you whatever is your name, Never budge, please I beg please never bug Met up with similiar Shhh in this living Believing I won't get so long as am needing For sure it's air, food, rest and the rest I avoid that got me bleeding! Bleeding-Bleeding-end up pleading Blood'in Blood'out come, come vision all the ugly am seeing Will I be judge for being the witness to many families in Africa that ain't eating No wonder I am far from happy, constantly seething My mind boils Thoughts of hot oils Outch like filling bites on Tint-foils My heart hurts My mind curves My time course; leaving me along fine shores Yet, can't avoid feelings of drowning Not cause I can't swim, simply I won't swim with force Taking back all their supports On a stable living, hold backs on Airports Cavity checks; reminding me of Reality Checks This is not me and I could never be So long as am playing friendly amongs my enemy! Feel for my brothers being mass murdered, knowing I am next I wait still giving them their respects I saw Flip-This, don't miss me I'll go on a one man mission to delete all them suspects! You know who you are, all I beef for you to keep away from my property! I shoot to kill Smooth and real And this is how I feel :mad: While they got me ill Am going stiff as steel Growing :confused: am ready to peel Pop-Pop- To kill my kind is to kill me! So reality check if u really feel me! ... LikeWise: Bla'bla to some and Ahuh to most* stay live remain safe keep it real and don't 4get to shave ... ~1~ PME DV None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueEpocha Posted June 1, 2005 Originally posted by DeadlyVision: No wonder I am far from happy, constantly seething My mind boils Thoughts of hot oils Outch like filling bites on Tint-foils My heart hurts My mind curves My time course; leaving me along fine shores Yet, can't avoid feelings of drowning Not cause I can't swim, simply I won't swim with force Alright I have nothing, that was BRILLIANT and I wont try to match it, not yet anyway lol. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Artistic-Nomad Posted June 1, 2005 I bleed through the papers, to express my stress/ verbally I'm speechless, mentally depressed/ So here I confess, poeticly/ So please read this carefully/ I've learned to share nothing, but the sun and moon/ beans, bullets, band-aids, hand grenades, and platoons/ Walking under this blue dome, all alone, far from home/ In a country stolen from Indians, they now call their own/ Following laws enforced by corrupted police/ where we imprison in the name of freedom, kill in the name of peace/ Walking by children with no shoes on their feet/ past the veterans sifting trash for something to eat/ I walked up the steps and knelt at Lincoln's feet/ and wept in vein while he remained in his seat/ I looked to the Capital, such a symbol of wealth/ neglecting our elderly with diminishing health/ politics, red tape, and government bureaucracy/ Home sweet Home our democracy of hypocrisy/ Have you slept on the street/ with the broken glasses? and seen the ruin/ Fortune passes! Have you been in the lines of downcast faces/ who have no jobs? Poverty embraces! I ask so many questions, like who and why? What if in life's journey you turned left instead of right/ Is our lives pre-destined or do we really get a vote? I know we are characters in a book our creator wrote? Are thing's really the way that they seem? Or are we a product of someones dream? It's easy to drift and continplate over those things/ But stress and uncertainty is all that those things bring/ But the one and only for sure thing I've come to learn/ Is to LOVE and be LOVED in return/ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 1, 2005 BlueEpocha & Intelluctual_Poet Out'standing writing, major with it- .... Reality is there's soo much pain in my brain I got to paint with my blood stain How the worlds going I wonder how I remain From going insane from all this Evil play'n To act Saint, Oh damn it it's a SHAME! With strong faith and powers to tame It's lame to fame the same vien cussing yo'creators name* It's Main* They fear the disdant MAN*with no shoes limping with the cane! On far off the coast we wish to pose with heart remain on our toes Killing confusion peeling my solution on SOL I post! And suddently my soul ROSE! To after life I never seen soo up CLOSE! Praying for Heavenly dreams fearing Hell SHOWS! Good and Bad whatever you earn is all Yours>>Youse! Going down the list And all I ask amongst many is "Why is Islam Dissed?" Flushing the Qur'an down the toilet when it's should be kissed* Leaving me demented with walls I fist Till I break my wrist following the Devils mist! Even if Osama died would he be missed? Know with Bush gone world would be in bliss I ask with anger how it came to this? It's evident, my words are orders Crossing borders under main strip waters! Inviding wariors causing Riots* And Aaaaaaaaaaa it's like reading Quranic Iyats! From the Judge to the Pope I say they all Liers! Believe me not, ama let u know it's getting hot To higher hights releasing explosive kites Composing Mushroom skies, We to serve for their Rights! Too much to express, if I go on I may touch ur stress__ So ama leave this shine with nylon lights! ~1~ DV PME Same'O None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted June 2, 2005 You see I intended to But then I just couldn’t pull through I had the courage too But my fingers where telling me not too It was a fight mind over body And in the end lets just say I’m sorry When I finally tried to something just came over me Like a cloud covering the SUNSHINE It could have been my insecurity Or it’s cuz I lack maturity Either case I’d like to apologize I know I’m like 3 hours late And even now I’m contemplating doing it But then I just can’t commit Don’t tell me I already know I must admit There is no commitments attached he said I guess I’m a coward And you sure don’t make me feel empowered Actually you’re pretty intimidating come to think of it But still in any case I’d like to apologize Does an apology suffice? I’d sure like some advice! I admit I aint no marry jane Nor am I insane I’ve tried to explain And I hope maybe we can try again Next time I’ll holla back You can count on that Give me some feed back people would you accept my apology Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 4, 2005 No worries boo' it's just been Something I felt that made me steam Heart beat rissing Actions, surprising No needs for apology, 1st I should've been Compermising See how u thought of it But time was against me...couldn't paus it Wish I had lot of it Guess it was ur wiz that caused it For me to rush Confidence wouldn't let me hush Guess I felt u were so, so tempting to touch It's all hood I won't pretending to grudge Whatever the case It's was the time, not sure if it was the place Many hate I love not to act better Yet, just to attempt that higher ladder Plain; let it be my letter No strings attached; so whatever was the matter Don't Matter* Give it a chance let it dewell in time Mind over Body Mine over yours, lets shine lol I goes original, sorry no pick up line* Let me know if u type to hold my stick up nine Yes I mean the 45 Ain't hard nor soft just love 2stay alive Do any means to survive System ain't got nothing on me, I blast'fo'me life Made ties with the Man so I got no complaints for am wise Cocky. Yes! Don't read into it, it's just I know what to look when I open my eyes! Could be money or a joke that's funny For the basics of life I feel to compermise Am many things but poor minded Ur boredoms I excite like boil oil does to fries Dang Am BORED :rolleyes: P.S wait till July15 b4 u try anything Viewer Discretion* ~1~ PME DV U'noe da Rest* None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 5, 2005 I got beef with the system I believe u should listen Young boys 'n' girls u got 2vision Ur future preception whats ur ambition? One Two am here to Have u camp with my concentration Know u got no appreciation for what am wishing Laugh to make fun I understand ur ignorance conception It's ur weak intention Thinking u a Thug a Ganster when u really looking for a simple hug Am ur prescription Take me am ur wisdom ur well being medication Hear me am that anoying noise u hate to mention Give it a chance and vision how I build u a mansion No lectures am just the love inspector hate detector so join my session Something like honesty being part of a blunt rotation Don't miss it Ignorant? Try and diss it I go on to reverse ur rejection Know ur hearts pain could be ur infection Fear to try again u scare to face ur fiction Confused in confusion Abuse all ur solution I say let free and let Allah be ur protection 4get 'bout Ms.Phat booty, she ain't down for ur seduction Ur pickup lines are weak in ever section U be crossed like a christian between Heaven and Hell entersection What'll you Do? when this is ur reflection! Who cares? I done my mess, now am realest to confess- wrote it all to address, letting my skin to glow with gold complexion! While baggy limping with all the wrong intention Got sold in every Auction Drugs, Clubs, Drinking, Music, Sex all though u get none U set to let dumn whats yo'function? Hells redemtion Enjoy ur glamore and glory don't worry Evil already filled up ur application U done wit'... I repent for I've saked all my wisdom for ********* - _ ~1~ PME4Me DV None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Same o'song different Tune! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
