najma82 Posted April 25, 2005 I know how one feels when someone will say That your poems are welcome and ask you to stay, For it makes you real proud Welcomed into the crowd, And you maybe have learned you're a poet that way. But for me rhyme alone leaves something desired, And reading some poems makes me feel uninspired, For it takes something more Or the rhyme may just bore, There's another small fact that I think is required. The thing to improve rhyming most will admit Is the added support of a rhythm to it. Just give it some zing, For by adding some swing An enjoyable poem you're then sure to get. I know adding rhythm's not as easy as pie But a poet won't know if he doesn't comply. Just by tapping your toe So your fingers will know You can add rhythm to any poem if you try. So give it a try before slamming the door For I'm sure you can do it, you just have to keep score, Like someone I know Always said it should go... a-one and a-two and a-three and a-four. ========== Author: Unknown. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted April 29, 2005 najma82, Welcome aboard and Welcome to the elite club my Sister, that was NICE. Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites