J.Lee Posted March 11, 2005 He wants me to Love him Like I would love him as he would love I were he Me and no person can be held accountable for such a giving more than myself Lest he broke my heart Even then, I won't regret I refuse to regret For love was given freely by no other person than I Who loved freely. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted March 11, 2005 MsWord, You Get What You Give even if it's your heart. wonderful stuff. Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anonymous_One Posted March 14, 2005 nice poem Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted March 14, 2005 Thank You all for the feedback, I appreciate it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted March 17, 2005 so yusuf hmmm ...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted March 20, 2005 Ay, Thank You abaayo, glad you enjoyed it. Naa Ms.Pili Pili, lol hmmmmm indeed it is I feel like I'm love sick dee, find me a cure quick Dr. anyway I guess I'll be seing you on the 25th right? Just to let you know, I'll be expecting my B-Day gift before Monday. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted March 21, 2005 happy b-day....missy.... ....lol...anyways....ur gift will be hand delivered to ur home as deserving of any queen poet.....so holler at me and let me know when ur majesty is home.... ps....i understand that love feeling all 2 well... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted March 21, 2005 I gotcha The CPA and the MD, dang that would make a good reality show huh? Anyway, I'll call you later dee, freaking finals are being a pain in the **** . Sometimes I find myself making love to my own misfortune. --Norma O. Abrego Take care Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted March 21, 2005 GOOD LUCK ON YOUR FINALS.....missy... ps...am on spring break Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 22, 2005 reply to the first..piece..."Always Regret" He wanted you to love him the way any would love other as if they were one.... But abvious as he was mystery he recieved, instead of the other reasoning with the abvious, previlages were held back,... ..lest he search for the abvious elsewhere now.... How can he love her? when she wants him to love her the way she would love her if she was him???? Awaiting reply, thanx, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Simple_Sista Posted March 22, 2005 " always regret" nice piece,and very profound thought..it took me a minute to grasp it.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted March 22, 2005 Originally posted by Instinct-Poet: How can he love her? when she wants him to love her the way she would love her if she was him???? If she wants him love her as if he was loving himself Whilst he wants her to love him as if she was loving herself Then They would love as if they were each other as if they were one being as if one couldn't exist with out the other leaving no room for regret for how can one regret loving themself? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 23, 2005 Did you get my point yet..? I'm responding back to you from the original piece... which went like this.. "don't regret" Originally posted by MsWord: He wants me to Love him Like I would love him as he would love I were he Me and no person can be held accountable for such a giving more than myself Lest he broke my heart How i took that was, She said he loves me alot and he expects the same back, she can't give the same back, cuz her feelings for him isn't that strong, and no one is accountable for and no human can be forced to do such thing.(true) lest(than)he left her.leaving her all alone, now she loves him even more, (cuz is human nature you want what you can't have) or was it(you don't appreciate what you have until it's gone) anyway,than she says, Even then, I won't regret I refuse to regret For love was given freely by no other person than I Who loved freely. Now,she says.. I wasn't wrong for not loving, her love was for her to give and to be given so freely,by no one other than herself.(true).. o.k now that last part fliped me a lil' cuz she still loves him..How can she say Lest he broke my heart if she really didn't had a feelings for him before,but until he left............... That is a excellent piece up there. no see if you understand my part..from a apposite sex perspective always regret.. He wanted you to love him the way any would love other as if they were one.... But abvious as he was mystery he recieved, instead of the other reasoning with the abvious, previlages were held back,... ..lest he search for the abvious elsewhere now.... How can he love her? when she wants him to love her the way she would love her if she was him???? complicate it peices..can what a poet said be explained,? hardly think so. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
