BOB Posted February 19, 2005 Have You Ever Felt This Way Before? I am a picture painted over another a simple creation an image of myself no one's discovered the painting below so they offer me no help whatsoever my eyes are painted brightly and a gleam of happiness reflects you would by no means imagine there is a sadness there to detect my smile is always an everlasting always there and will forever be it hides the experiences untold and helps others to accept me I'm bold and vivacious in public my painting shows no fear at all and my eyes are dry as they could get as if they've never shed one single drop of tear but it's what happens in the darkness that unveils the hidden painting unfound my eyes become a river at night when no one is lurking around there is a fear under the oil painting of my vicious dreams, losing my friends fear of the life I chose to lead and losing my precious love in the end when alone I carry no smile on my face it gets lost in the silence of the dark night and everyday the inner painting seeps through and the lost painting is finally in sight when the look in my eyes is real and my fake smile is the truth I looked at my surroundings and where was the one who promised to always be there Where were you? Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted February 22, 2005 Everybody wears a mask at any given time in their life, it's just that some wear it more so than other because they feel as though they have to portray something they are not or they might not know what they are. Basically one can't stay true to themselves all the time. when alone I carry no smile on my face it gets lost in the silence of the dark night and everyday the inner painting seeps through and the lost painting is finally in sight when the look in my eyes is real and my fake smile is the truth Those lines are deep like 3D. I love the simplicity of this piece though the message it carries isn't simple. I think it is one of your best poems Bob. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites