Seeking Paradise Posted February 10, 2005 Dreams as fragile as a spider’s web Hope as fleeting as an injured child I come to you For validation I need to know that I exist Am loved And needed That I matter But you turn me away Not trusting yourself Or our love Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seeking Paradise Posted February 10, 2005 What is love? I look for the answers But can’t find any Everyone has their own definition But I don’t I am still searching for it But how can one search for something they don’t know? How will I know when I find it? It comforts me to know the signs But does everyone have the same experiences? Will I know when love knocks on my door? Or will I hesitate And forever lose it? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted February 10, 2005 Nice 1 My Sister, Thanks for sharing. Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyz 1-8-7 Posted February 10, 2005 Nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Passion_4_Fashion Posted February 11, 2005 nice 1 indeed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted February 11, 2005 Existing like a thought thunk Reality's objectafied optimist The object of one's Fantasy Sweet as A fruit rippened Hearts aphrodisiac Arousing Emotions Love, like a thinking thought Leads a life of its own, A Contradiction Gentle, Ruthless Weak, Strong Love is sophmoronic with Senior Status Of a Valedictorian Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seeking Paradise Posted February 11, 2005 Thank you all for your kind words. MsWord. That was lovely. -------- I look into the mirror Not knowing who or what’ll I see But I am hopeful Searching for the girl I was And the woman I have become The slowly rise on my toes And wipe the fog from the murky surface Eyes as black as coal in a stranger’s face Stare blankly back at me I step back Sigh And turn away I wish I could shatter the mirror And maybe then I could see What I want to see I don't like the person I have become Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted February 12, 2005 Look deeper into the mirror And the reflection might get clearer For what you see is not what I perceive you to be Your dark eyes are very hypnotizing Can you see the sparkle? They glow and tell their own story A tale of glory Its darkness is like the night sky minus all the street lights And the stars visible even at those heights I see an aspiring poet A nomad with spirit Your eyes are half wide open And the reflection is hazed Take a deeper look And you’d see that Your exactly who you want to be I hope you’ll agree Viewer D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seeking Paradise Posted February 18, 2005 ^^Oh thats beautiful. Thanks bro. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted February 18, 2005 LOOOOOOOOL if your talking about me.. i'm not a male..lool yes the name is rather masculine i agree Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seeking Paradise Posted February 18, 2005 ^LOL Maybe if you had girly names, I wouldn't make that mistake.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted February 18, 2005 Ya when I was choosing my name I didn’t want it to be gender specific. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Curly Posted March 31, 2005 Enter this water world with care For waves sweep away the strong And soon enough, when tired and weak The sea of voices will drown thoughts Once caught in cold and murky needs It will choke attempts to breathe, to live The icy stares like a thousand knifes Will Stab the chest till it bleeds When cold and lifeless The soul will sink to their depths Now crushed and gone Victimised by this watery grave And those who reside within The ones who want but never give The ones who breathe but are dead Take heed or this water world will become your watery grave. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites