Hershey Kisses

[Rising Phoenix]

Hershey Kisses

 

Hershey kisses given in sundown rain

a sweet pleasure that’s almost like pain

and this sweet passion we share is quite insane

but then I dont think I’ll see you again

 

I dont want to end this goodbye

but there is no us; only space for I

and solitude is where I have to fly

but how/when you send my soul so high

 

I remember when we laid all night

so right, felt like I’d died

gone to heaven that night

but my heart had to tumble/from that blissful height

you…send it to

 

Irrespective of our differences and our past

I want to create a love that lasts

I want to let you live inside my love

make you the star if our love cast

but…such a fantasy/ is sadly not meant to be

 

Yet you settled inside my soul

with a supple ease/took complete control

and before I could inhale

your love was in here…made me whole

 

But the worst is still to come/the reaching of our end

"Goodbye" is such a hard word to say, my friend

I fear you will never truly understand what I feel

but even if we part...our passion will always be real

 

 

~~~

[thalamus]

I LOVED YOUR POEM........... BUT DAMN..... TALK ABOUT AWSOME ONE NIGHT STAND...

[Rising Phoenix]

Thanks for the comment, sis. But its not meant to be about a "one-night stand". :confused: :confused: :confused:

 

Why do artists always get misunderstood??!!

 

*distraught*

 

[General Duke]

Fantastic...

[Viewer Discretion]

Brotha that was one fine piece of work.. I don’t know how anyone could misunderstand that as a one night stand.. IT was EXCELLENT

 

Stay positive

GOODBYE=Until next time

[Rising Phoenix]

Duke_Valantino: sweet and to the point, thank you very much!!

 

Viewer Discretion: thanks for the comments...but this was written by a sister!!

[Bess.]

Originally posted by Rising Phoenix:

Hershey Kisses

 

Hershey kisses given in sundown rain

a sweet pleasure that’s almost like pain

and this sweet passion we share is quite insane

but then I dont think I’ll see you again

 

~~~

great sis....i felt like i was i was experiencing that moment with u....." pleasure that's almost like pain"....mmmmm nothing like it in the world....keep it up

[BOB]

Nice 1 my Sister, but you know I always got something to say whenever the word "LOVE' is mentioned and here it is.

 

 

Your soft & sweet lips hold the magic

that puts my body under your control

free for you to touch,kiss and hold

pleasure beyond words are held

in the soft palm of your hands

your fingertips tongue and hips hypnotize me

our bodies meet and fit like no other

my eyes close and roll as I feel

the heat we make together

noises of passion escape my mouth

even long after you're gone

my heart has never felt anything close

to the love I have for you my Malaika

you send chills down my spine

and my whole body shakes

hearing your beautiful name makes

every part of me shake to your Love beat

down to my feet to the deeps of my soul

I pray to almighty Allah (S.W) that

our love and union will last forever

love found in the right place @ the right time

my lover we fit each other like a glove

never ending love passion and heat

I promise you this my beloved Malaika

I will take you to a place

that no other soul can ever reach

no other pair of eyes can ever see

I will take you to a paradise

made by me for you my beloved.

 

I Love You My Beloved.

 

Peace, Love & Unity.

[Viewer Discretion]

MY BAD

[Rising Phoenix]

besbaaso: thanks for the comments!

 

Bob:

my eyes close and roll as I feel

the heat we make together

woooow....I like it. Expressive doensn't cover it. Keep it up, bro! Thanks for the reply...

 

~Rising Phoenix