Viewer Discretion Posted January 4, 2005 Eloquent in his speech Considerate in his manner Patient with his temper Attentive of his tone The perfect MAN Sweet when he should be Protective absolutely Confident with himself Conceited about me Always ready to please The perfect MAN At least 6 feet tall Smells “fresh to death†Nice Build And always clean shaven(some exceptions can be made) And don’t forget his attire Prada Gucci Polo Who am I kidding? Clean clothes Nice colors That’s all I really need Someone who truly loves me Entirely Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted January 9, 2005 Originally posted by Viewer Discretion: Who am I kidding? Clean clothes Nice colors That’s all I really need Someone who truly loves me Entirely Lol. That is all we really need isn't it? Deep and simplistic. Very moving and meaningful. Worth reading and enjoyable. Keep Writting. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted January 9, 2005 At least 6 feet tall Smells “fresh to death†Nice Build the height is extremely crucial in my part mucho gracious and yes tha's all I NEED Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted January 9, 2005 As I prepare to dive In this vast sea world I hope to find some Friendly fish Some corals Some oysters to extract that special Jewel inside A pearl Just one pearl The one best fit For me The water is clear But the sea is not It is full of wrecks A testament to an imbalance My coach advices “Your are on your own, the sea is at rage†I overlook and lunge to the deep blue waters In hopes of finding that friendly fish that pearl that jewel that when I wear Satisfies Signifies Soothes I went scuba diving Or maybe My mind is just hypnotized Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blessed Posted January 9, 2005 Nice ladies. Nice! As my sister poet Rima said; 'it's pointless searching for a rock, when I know of the rubies amongst men' Ruby= well grounded brother with beautiful islamic mannerism. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted January 9, 2005 Thanks for your replies and feedback... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted January 12, 2005 The Perfect Man The man to judge against all men Well I want somebody that is a nobody for nobody is perfect so perfect their imperfections are perfect their flaws are a treasure chest like a gold D cup Bra Dig? I want somebody that is.... Complex like Orwell Poetic as Hemmingway Attitude of Malcolm X You know the kind that boast and stay conceited with an archaic smile.. Word is bond but 007 lied to me Mentality Perhaps I want him to be funny like Cigaal Shiidaad or kind of like my grand dad You know old but gold but at heart Young and wise or maybe a Qamis wearing Kutab reading preaching One Ummah brotha Dig? Kind of like a jam to my peanut butter You know A man to judge against all Men but understand A man is what I want A man that doesn't need me to feel like a Man but embodies the essence the word.. Dig? Kind of like My Man The standard of which I judge all Men. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted January 12, 2005 I really enjoyed that one.. keep up the good work!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted January 13, 2005 Mansha-allah. Here is another of mine-enjoy. I call it: Sediments from a far-fetched fantasy That white silk cloth That swirls from the window In a bungalow high Overlooking the seaside The cool breeze Caressing its contours Whispering compassionately To each other Like an enchanted couple Jubilant by their union The admiration in their eyes Verification to their love Cuspid within that Soft caress Fused between That ocean breeze Stroking that White silk cloth Is my image of The perfect man Like the intermingle Between that White silken Hugged by the Velvety sea zephyr The result is a Masculine silhouette Configuration yet Tender in essence Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alle-ubaahne Posted January 16, 2005 ^^ Masha allah, raula! I salute your artistic poetry! waanka cabsaday qofyahey waxaad meesha kusoo bandhigtay. Ileen gabdhaha waxay la bukeen waa gabay iyo geeraar english ah, ehehehehe, ma anaan garan, ii wad bal sheekada .... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted January 17, 2005 ^^mucho grasias senor Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alle-ubaahne Posted January 17, 2005 ^^^Maxaa i tiri walaaleey? Ma fahmin, laakiin hadeey wax xun tahay waxaan ku dhihi lahaa adna lagu yiri waxaad i tiri! Raula, when will you make a poetry for me, cause I need one desperately. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
