nazia_20 Posted December 29, 2004 This is for all the people who have trouble just being who they are. Why do people think so negatively what is it about themselves that they can't see Why can't people be happy with themselves why do they suffer in their own distorted hells Can't they look at themselves and say I am beautiful why do they have to pay society's heavy toll Why is it that they can't say what am I to do on such a glorious day Do people really hurt them so much that every word can be a painful punch Would this hurt leave black and blue bruises on their face would blood be all that they can taste Or have they just lost all hope in their lives the hope was cut away by their own tainted knives Can it be that they don't see the good in living although it could be like a quarrel with a sibling Sometimes a day goes by just fine and with your memories you freeze it in time But sometimes a day can be just terrible almost to the point of unbearable You just have to see life for what it truely is it's kind of like living in a giant pop quiz Each day has its ups and downs but you might not always have the next day to turn it around So live each day like it's your last don't get caught on an error of the past Love yourself for who you are and you'll see everything more clearly by far Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted December 30, 2004 Ok let me see if I can leave my mark on this quite interesting and challenging poem of yours! I'm tryin to fill this hole in my heart i wanT to fit in & its tearin me apart i can't cope wit these ppl,they are different from me i'm like a fish out of the water & i cant breathe i'm stuck on dry land,miles away from the sea. i feel excluded & lost,tired & lonely,deserted. left out,like someone just disowned me. no one to talk to,no where to go, i got feelings inside me that i can't show there are ppl around me,all over,they surround me it feels like i've been hiding & now they found me the pain,the anger,frustration i keep inside they are everything that are put into my mind all of my thoughts & feelings of hope my wants and my dreams that i just cant let go. so how can i possibly love myself when life itself doesn't love me? :confused: . Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites