J.Lee Posted December 3, 2004 As I sit in my room With my pad and pen on my lap I contemplate to write an Ode to you Yet…I don’t know where to begin But I begin to write anyway Hoping words would come to me That’d help me capture your essence on paper But how does one describe an indescribable emotion Such as... Love Psychologist thought to dissect it Poets such as I, tried to explain it Yet lovers simply accept it It’s a word, not different than any other word Yet no common dialect Could ever translate what my heart felt When I first laid eyes on Love It was as if time stood still Not a soul moved...only movement was My heart beat increasing As if dancing to an age-old rhythm And I was simply unaware of its choreography Love.. Yes I’ve held it in my hand And kissed it goodnight Each and every night I’ve nurtured it like a child Allowed to manifest In its purest form You and I Love... You knew me when I was just a shorty Going through puberty Hardest years you’ve helped me through Heard me when I shrilled cries of help When nobody replied You simply held my hand And on your clothes I soaked with tears Tear-stained cheeks you wiped gently “Ifrah, everything is all right,†you’d say to me... I felt an emotion so unidentified Yet it intensified As I watched you become a man in front of my eyes when you decided to go back to school, I nearly cried And when anger, Jealousy and rumors rears their ugly heads Your love sustains me till like anthrax it puts them through living death... Love... Like Explicit cursive.. So deeply introverted We are, I hope to never part From you ... Love When I looked Down on my pad To read what I wrote to you Love… There were no words to describe the joy I feel All I seen was just A single tearstain on my pad....... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
- Femme - Posted December 3, 2004 Beautiful MsWord. Youve got a way with words Sis. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted December 3, 2004 It was absolutely beautiful sister i'm absolutely speachless Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted December 4, 2004 As watched you become a man in front of my eyes when you decided to go back to school, I nearly cried And when anger, Jealousy and rumors rears their ugly head Your love sustains me till like anthrax it puts them through living death... Indeed you are suffering from love sis. May you prosper in its presence. Thankx for sharing the poem, it was beautiful. Keep writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gabbal Posted December 6, 2004 MsWord and( Fill in the blanks ) sitting on a tree. K-I-S-S-I N-G... I've always wondered what you do when you lock yourself in that cell tower um I meant room. Ileen the girl writes poetry. Sarcasm aside, very moving poem sis keep them coming. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted December 6, 2004 msword....as ever in awe of ur ever growing talent..... horn...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted December 14, 2004 Thanks for the feed back. It's greatly appreciated. Mansha'allah also to the many of the poets on this site as well as the readers.....Holllller! LoL besbaaso.....He is indeed the bane of my existance before you were in awe of my ever growing talent ...ya dig? anyway Whats up Doc. where is my picture? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Midnight Posted December 14, 2004 ms.word tht guy got u twisted u forgot chillin after skool in the gym......yet we have lost another to the enemy.....biiij u know who this is.....sweet piece....and i finally discovered where u hang about....like a famous poet once said "a poem is neva finished but abandoned" mac mac see ya around suqaar Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted December 14, 2004 Erase the past,the present holds what's best resting your head on my chest holding hands,never another stress no one to impress...just us to grow old together,through ups and downs smiles and frowns....any weather the bad times not evident,it only gets better it's a struggle...but its obvious I love you all my tears and fears disappear when I hug you from life to death,I want you by my side continue to show me what it's like to be alive so lets try...to carry on with our relationship you've got my heart Baby Girl and I'm sick of you breaking it I love you, you love me, what more do we need? I'm me,you're you that's how I know we'll succeed someday,you'll understand, what its like to be a man and have to sit here all alone, no one to hold your hand I can't stand...to not see you, even just for a day, I miss you can't wait for dismissal, figuring I might have missed you waiting in hope...waiting for you to greet me with a note a lump in my throat...nervous, because I'm already late for class, and still no sign of your a$$ sitting around,waiting for the time to pass... run through my door,pick up the phone and pray that you're home can't you see?I would put my life on the line, just for you to survive wipe the tears from your eyes sweetness, if you started to cry the reason is clear crystal, I'm myself when I'm with you I want to make you my wife and spend the rest of my life with you. Peace,Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted January 4, 2005 When I looked Down on my pad To read what I wrote to you Love… There were no words to describe the joy I feel All I seen was just A single tearstain on my pad....... Aaaaah....lyrical perfection. I LOVE it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted January 18, 2005 can't you see?I would put my life on the line, just for you to survive wipe the tears from your eyes sweetness, if you started to cry the reason is clear crystal, I'm myself when I'm with you I want to make you my wife and spend the rest of my life with you. i can only hope that u r as sincere as u sound in reality, and u practice what u write to ur beloved.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
