P.R.O.M.I.N.E.N.T Posted November 28, 2004 To Yasmin... Open ya’ ears and listen to what my flow say… 3 months ago I would have said there was no way… On no day would I not torture ya’ body… Force ya’ to exhale loudly like karate… Proudly assume the position… And get naughty… Check……………………………………………………………………………………………… You asked for it.. My slender hands trace lightly from the sole of ya’ foot up to inner thighs… All the time teasing with my… Vibrating tongue… This ain’t no beginners night… View the scene through a sinners eyes… Rescinding light casts a shadow… Giving tight spankings without the paddle… Straddling the brink of orgasmic without my saddle… With you I battle… Squeezing my head between ya’ legs… Tight as a vice-grip… My eyes light with delight as I deliver the right lick… You experience more chills than an ice-pick… Finally begin to loosen up… Goose bumps… Bruised up ...but what the f$ck… It’s what you were asking for… As I make my next move… You let out a lasting roar… I glance up… No need for you to help me get my lance up… My sh1t was more than ready while you still had your pants up… remmemba i'm somali... no need for you to alarm me.. Pick you up in my arms… Your legs wrapped around me my waist-line… Against the wall… Catch my rapid pound in sync with the bass line… Neighbors…?…What neighbors…?…They’re non-existent… Your stare is insistent on some doggy… We made it into the bathroom…Mirrors are foggy… Skin…Soaking and soggy… Sliding off each other…I feel godly… Oddly enough… This whole scene took place hardly without a flaw… Many incredible hours without a call… Nearly fainted at the sight of you without a bra… And now we’re both screaming out loud without a stall… But that wasn’t even sh!t…When will yall’ ladies learn… By far the whole story of the entire night was talking afterwards… Still ain't got it..read it backwards.. let the images sink.. words are action at times.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sheherazade Posted November 29, 2004 She asked for it and you gave it to her. Very. Romantic. Not. If she's real and that's her name, I hope she finds out and gives it to you. Hard. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted November 29, 2004 LoooooL@sheherazade, war balaayo you out for blood huh? lol But that wasn’t even sh!t…When will yall’ ladies learn… By far the whole story of the entire night was talking afterwards… I like the ending or was it the begining. Either way It's nice thou you set the pace of the poem so that the reader can follow along as if they were there. It was very um ...Visual anyway Big ups and keep writting Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MR ORGILAQE Posted November 29, 2004 Prominent maan you are one sex starved man!!!!! Get out of the house bro if you need help give us a hola we'll help you find one,this is not the medium for it so give it a break! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Diamante Posted November 29, 2004 Posted Previously by Orgilaqe on the Jokes section: HOW TO MAKE LOVE Ingredients: 4 Laughing eyes 4 Well-shaped legs 4 Loving arms 2 Firm milk containers 2 Nuts 1 Fur-lined mixing bowl 1 Firm banana Directions: 1. Look into laughing eyes. 2. Spread well-shaped legs with loving arms. 3. Squeeze and massage milk containers very gently. 4. Gently add firm banana to mixing bowl, working in and out until well creamed. For best results. Continue to knead milk containers. 5. As heat rises, plunge banana deep into mixing bowl and cover with nuts, leave to soak (preferably NOT overnight). 6. The cake is done when banana is soft. If banana does not soften, repeat steps 3-5 or change mixing bowls. Notes: 1. If you are in an unfamiliar kitchen, wash utensils carefully before and after use. 2. Do not lick mixing bowl after use. 3. If cake rises, leave town. ^^^ and u are calling someone sex starved :rolleyes: :rolleyes: the hypocracy nowadays is just highly amusing LooL @ Sheh...ur not kidding yaah the poem in itself is alright, i liked the flow...and um u certainly know how to express yourself lol peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MR ORGILAQE Posted November 29, 2004 ^^^ and u are calling someone sex starved diamente my dear that was a joke refering to the third party whereas this one is self refering and graphic in it's details with very little to imagine!!that is the difference. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites