Benevolent_ Beauty Posted November 19, 2004 aaah...finally my very OWN place!!!...my corner..my place...welcome... n' 2 start off....i call this one THIS PLACE damn I hate this place I’m always tired n’ cold I need 2 see my sunshine Not fake or foretold I need to sleep at nite Nightmares filled with fight Not able to recognize wrong n’ rite I’m frustrated and fatigued And So I write Damn I hate this place They got me rating my plate Weighing my cake Analyzing my face My health n’ happiness at stake Producing an image that’s fake Damn I hate this place They got me waiting for pay Getting Hungry and hostile today So that my fit could say I Rock Gucci, Loui and Diamondz from Kay Damn I hate this place I know who I should really hate Damn I really hate Warlords Greedy as f!ck Stingy as hell Ignorant f!cks Y don’t leave Die n’ Decease Die of Disease Can’t u perceive Somalia is Dead U cut off itz head Chops it into pieces Shredded its loins Tore itz heart out Guts all out U know watz it all about I want ur *** OUT! Don’t expect me To walk your *** out I need to lash out am bout 2 pass out The anger n’ anguish I need 2 let it out N’ so I write it out Damn I hate this place Even More I hate the person who Brought me to this place…… Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jah Posted November 19, 2004 Nice..and i espcially like this one Damn I hate this place They got me rating my plate Weighing my cake Analyzing my face My health n’ happiness at stake Producing an image that’s fake Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted November 23, 2004 I too write for the sake of writing....till my lines...cloud visions....like a cataract...verbs and adjectives doin' a tango hotter than a shaq attack*....like that is ludicris....to twist and turn words....till i give you an epiphany...have you seing ghost writting....poof..Like I see DEAD WORDS....whats worse...than nouns....You and I...love, detached..like amputated limbs...to come back together....silent like two mating Mimes....and my rhymes....have you goin' off the wall..like tony hawk....extreme skating on facts till they become non facts..and In my rhymes....I could be a ruler..stand up for my rights straight like a yard stick...make you sick...cuz I throw up words so Ill You can taste digestion.....In my rhymes I can..travel to distance lands...ride shot gun with Malcom.....surf the euphrates...destroy hades....while still in my math class....and in my rhymes...I breath.....live through this simple words....I'm the king...in a female form...I write for the sake of my Sanity.....I write till I have nothin' to write about anymore.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted November 24, 2004 Cuz i WRITE for the sake of Writing...Msword got me missing words...gurl so talented...she got me kissin' gurlz..WAT :eek: ..aint like that..i don't wear that hat...just like the black cat...i eat'em up like a black rat...spit'em out ...thatz rite...just like that..AS I SAT BACK....i wrote for the sake of writing... quit hatin' quit contemplatin' say watchu sayin' quit looking at me like i'm satin' quit bothering me with ur lies n letters i told u once twice without you n' ur kind i'm better quite targeting me with ur propaganda don't u recognize what i wear is to fend u off my hijaab is to defend you off pretend you coughed cuz really lies are chocking you truth is stroking you grap it it'll last believe it it won't pass i know jins blinded you think u know but u have no clue don't u desire what is true all that is true u've seen the proof everywhere, written once and dust proof part-time is the book you carry MY BOOK...complete, quintessential, everything to the contrary so quit following all thats warry confused, i know its scary iman is what u need i tell u its necessary Day of Judgement cuz of Quran, u'll be among the beneficiaries THAT FELT NICE...THIS HERE IS FOR ALL DEM LOST SOULS TARGETING PPL THAT HAVE FOUND AND FULFILLED ...THIS HERE IS TO THE CHRISTIAN MISSIONARIES... Cuz i WRITE for the sake of WRitinG Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NIN_NOOL Posted November 27, 2004 Beautifully done yall....am feeling the flow on this... The art of expression and being able to "express yourself freely"... A gift any poet is lucky to be blessed with...for we know no boundaries.. When I’m among acquaintances I like to be the one to make them laugh I mingle and merge like two oceans coming together But when Im alone.....I write........ I write for the lonely, I write for those who have no love I write for those who appreciate nature and the beauty God has given us I write for the ones who feel different from everyone else I write for the impaired so their imagination can take them places they’ll never see I write for those who hear a certain song, and get hit by memories I write for the angry, not liking how society is shaping I write for those who feel sad, when they see the children with babies in the making I write for those who regret things in the past, hate the present, but welcome the future I write for anyone who can’t stand this ****.. like a cripple on a pile of manure I write for anyone who’s ever had what they thought was forever...and lost it I write for those without a voice but have much to say I write for the people who fear night but welcome every new day I write for parents that have to struggle alone I write for people coming from work to an empty home I write...because **** ain’t fair I write to get rid of this despair I write...to co-exist within every word and ryhme to elaborate on what’s on the the mind as I hold conversations between my soul and pen... I write because I find peace when talking into the wind...I write for love I write for hope...I write for peace... I write because it’s theraputic for me I write unfiltered truth.... because Im a poet and this is what we do Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted November 27, 2004 Nin Nool. Nicely done, "I write for anyone who can’t stand this shyt.. like a cripple on a pile of manure" nice phrase... Expressive minsets release all tention... forget and sieze to mention... you might get locked in silent dimention.. NinNool"" The art of expression and being able to "express yourself freely"... A gift any poet is lucky to be blessed with...for we know no boundaries.. Couldn't said it any better.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted November 29, 2004 I write because it’s theraputic for me I write unfiltered truth.... because Im a poet and this is what we do Instinct stole the words **like he stealz alotta thangz* outta ma mouth... i was writin' anotha piece about food..damn..laakiin i lost it when in class :mad: ..ugghh..so i wrote this piece....its about the many THINGs i wished i neva lost.... don't u hate when u loose thingz not materials, money or minor thingz but this one thing make u wanna rewind ur world slowly unwind your world to find where lost ur object deduct and detect ur suspect detain ur object sustain ur intellect without loosing ur self respect without moving everything turn the world upside down lift every rock in every town i had to find this thing money and power can't buy this thing science cant sign this thing i cry for this thing lied cuz of this thing for wat it will bring my heart and soul will sing no limit to things i did i had it since i was kid close to my heart, i hid it anotha soul touch, i forbid it its was valuable to me i had it at all times wit me it is important to me Understand i have to find this thing it like itz worth more than all of this in a string Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted November 30, 2004 Write for the sake writting: Write rights Could complain ergo But, wright for the sake of righting Would paint my ego But, u know I ride steep like a Knight Write strong for they try and shake my rite I be alright, collect patience if I see Jin on Sight O'right, not a Dr. but enough patients on my side Make me think better, than think am better Whisper. Am on the highest latter BullShhhh am slipping 2melt the same butter! In the mud deep under, shawer on the gutter! 4give 'em when they bite lite Write for the sake of writting Know I got the strongest mic might Need to read the White Guide To comprehend the vision I shine with my night light! 4give for they praise the night-life Turned away from the right life Stress in mess I farness to write right My senses sense ur vainness to back bite for the sake of ridding ride a bike Can't 4get it like memory-relap Punchlines I rush you with street strap Hold rhymes hostage have u protest (free rap) Write for the sake of writting B.S And P.S Write my G.S .T. AaaaaaaaoughH 4gettaSleepWalk' I SleepWrite.... Catch me on a writting vibe Like it like how Roy Jones fighting like Am awesome-man caught you in the bush trying to sneak around but took the wrong step and made a blare! Yea sure you don't get it it's a tongue twister 2hide from the mister blister U call him The Man I call him He Wan from how he wanness when making a propaganda plan! Remember Sad am going out of my mind man! Found him in a tunnel as if he laid pipe Speak in twist, it's all hood, someone musta rebounded all the points u've missed* For the sake of writting I write alright! All wright I might! Once again Read The White Guide.... Lace 'em Laws, Find the backdoors and the loopholes...if ur guilty there's always a way to proof ur innocence! ~1~ DV PME Ya'Noe DaRest! None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted December 6, 2004 rhyme without reason feeling without pleasing just cuz u like teasing wordz that flow freely without real meaning wit no bound direction i have no recollection cuz i like collecting thoughts so i can express'em show'em exposure is my medicine show wat i'm dressin' in lessons bring experience u know wat to do wit him' i know wat to do with this bring it to a close i should listen in class i suppose rhyme WITHOUT reason Cuz i WRITE for the SAKE of WriTTinG' Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bess. Posted December 6, 2004 thank u'all for inspiring and waking up some slumbering minds.... Visions occupy my synaptic space Command and shake, to illustrate my mind's landscape The tall grass, the low plains, the mountainous ridges Thickets among the forests, rivers beneath the bridges Presence of hilltops, lit up with tree tops Eavesdrop and hear the incline of sunshine, nine Stones in orbit refuse to forfeit, they all form a circle, and they came to observe it I follow suit, and face it, embrace it Shinin bright, but still I am careful not to waste it Destined to rise, because I am basement adjacent Spirit is still, so just chill and be patient Some heads approach as if I am the one to base with clowns about to scream and shout but don't say shh... I ain't your student so I ain't to be tested I'm majestic; I represent my strength without effort My, method is unorthodox, but of course it rocks My serious synopsis will drop kick, my topics run the gauntlets and galvanize the audience I must represent, I don't come off with no corniness, It's all luminary, despite commentary Some people say, besbaaso how you get so?.. My sign will make you jump around like calypso And, murmur to yourself like a schizo There ain't no bottom on the ???..... i write like i breath, out of necessity.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites