J.Lee Posted November 16, 2004 Word! with conviction is spoken ..can you be our token Ethnic chick (chick? my hooyo wasn't a dhooro) Dear is the whisper that reaches my ear while I write this poem So near my home...but..I roam in a foreign land like a cell phone recently disconnected I have no signal to show my strenght I'll mend.... Hear me roar like a lion trapped I wish was Kidnapped by this poem so I can practice expressing what I feel and not practice feeling what I can express Ya Dig? like a shovel in the sand....Overstand I don't mean to sound Hopeless......But D!MN! I sound like Jayz..you know homeboys lips so big he roll a blunt with no hands Serious No joke like I choke on 24 oz of Coke.......I don't dream dreams I visualize unhappen hopes.. .......Like when we F!ck Qabiil in every position and our mission..is that Somalia becomes....united a perfect Utopia...And Ogade!ia is taken back from ethiopia. Unrealistic?....f!ck that I abuse hopes Like I'm sadistic Give an albino a sun tan....bleach him and Have you questioning whether Hitler was a racist.....Can't f!ck with me....I'm poetry.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted November 16, 2004 lol Am feeling that flow, can't seem to hold back the words about to be written by my ego* Ergo, am basic thought when it comes sharing how I fought. For my land in my mind, for my plan in my time For the how I understand for my crime For the way I stand for my grind. for my Woman_2shine Stood hud to see she was at wrong, still held it down for her real strong. Flickering with my temper as we brain storm* How after 16odd years got me to deform* Use to cover my eyes from the naked truth, now it's new born-nude as porn! For how they perform trying have me take that jewish turn* I usher them to hell fuel the flame to let the fire burn! Act wise just to realize we visualize with thier eyes- Words filled with lies, grown guilible how we trusting these blue eyed! Beefing religion as a new tribe, Ama get it to gether do me this do blaze a philly for my pride* Baby don't be shaddy open real wide, am nasty no need to ask me am freaky, Make u leak a lake while u jamming to Freek-a-Leek* ...Ukay I lost it there for a munite sorry Eh! ... lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IL CAPO Posted November 16, 2004 Life..what is life? life is a big game, so hard to beat like a rhythm life long beat people know tricks to get through it fast soon they will know they won't get past you can't cheat life as hard as you try you can't beat the system it just doesn't fly one thing i know is i have tried too i found myself lost and don't know what to do Every song every show what is this world do you even know? can it be beat? if so find out the code, the one that lets you go it's like we are trying to get free but no where to go, the whole world is the same thing play the game and make your life last trying to figure it out only makes life go fast. Peace. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted November 16, 2004 looooooooooooooool..hahaha...this here made ma day... Ethnic chick (chick? my hooyo wasn't a dhooro) Dear ..hahaha...u tell'em gurl.. n' this piece rite here.. Hear me roar like a lion trapped I wish was Kidnapped by this poem so I can practice expressing what I feel and not practice feeling what I can express ....lol...gurl is full of talent..she throwin' up talent..lol n' uh this piece...uh..f' it...i like the whole Word! with conviction is spoken ..can you be our token Ethnic chick (chick? my hooyo wasn't a dhooro) Dear is the whisper that reaches my ear while I write this poem So near my home...but..I roam in a foreign land like a cell phone recently disconnected I have no signal to show my strenght I'll mend.... Hear me roar like a lion trapped I wish was Kidnapped by this poem so I can practice expressing what I feel and not practice feeling what I can express Ya Dig? like a shovel in the sand....Overstand I don't mean to sound Hopeless......But D!MN! I sound like Jayz..you know homeboys lips so big he roll a blunt with no hands Serious No joke like I choke on 24 oz of Coke.......I don't dream dreams I visualize unhappen hopes.. .......Like when we F!ck Qabiil in every position and our mission..is that Somalia becomes....united a perfect Utopia...And Ogade!ia is taken back from ethiopia. Unrealistic?....f!ck that I abuse hopes Like I'm sadistic Give an albino a sun tan....bleach him and Have you questioning whether Hitler was a racist.....Can't f!ck with me....I'm poetry.... i'm jealous...i wish i had time 2 flow...damn tests...not learnin' nuttin'...annoyin' as f!ck....i'm ready 2 go...peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted November 16, 2004 MS WORD I sound like Jayz..you know homeboys lips so big he roll a blunt with no hands Serious No joke daaaaaaaaaaamn..gal you nailed the mothersucker sure his lips are like 2 747 flying in different directions wat da hell do B-see in this man.. Gal-Iam feeling this joint..mmmmhh! Knock em bling gal Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspired-floetrist Posted November 16, 2004 WORD You seriously killed it gurl...that was hot. I gota ask JayZ to teach me that trick even though I don't have overweight lips. Question though...were yu on something when you wrote that piece? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted November 16, 2004 i dig the whole thing....seriously.. ..express as is..don't edit.. Yo DV..what the F..ha ha ha.. last lines... Baby don't be shaddy open real wide, am nasty no need to ask me am freaky, Make u leak a lake while u jamming to Freek-a-Leek* you crazy... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted November 17, 2004 Question though...were yu on something when you wrote that piece? LoL. Aw shucks...I was high on Words. anyway Thanks for the feedback. it's like punch of one liners combined and turned into this poem. practice expressing what I feel and not practice feeling what I can express Credit is due to Nikki Giovanni on that line....just worded it different. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wiilo Posted December 8, 2004 The Smile: There is a Smile of love And there is a Smile of Deceit And there is a Smile of Smiles In which there is two Smiles meet And there is a Frown of Hate And there is a Frown of Disdain And there is a Frown of Frowns Which you strive to forget in vain For it sticks in the Heart for deep Core And it sticks in the deep Back bone And no Smile was ever Smild But only one Smile alone That between the A & W It only once Smild can be But when it once is Smild Theres an end to all Misery. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MR ORGILAQE Posted December 9, 2004 SIRQOOYINKAA TALIYOW, ODAYADAA SILLON IYO, KUWA SAAMKA HAYSTOW, ILMAHAAD SIFAYSEEN, SAQIIRRADAA AD LAYSEEN , GACALKIYOO SOKEEYAHA, WAXAAD SEEFTA MARISEEN, ALLA WAYDIN SUGAYAA, AAKHIRO SU,AAL BADAN. SOOMAALIDU DHAMAANTEED, KULLI WADA SOKEEYIYO, SAAXIIBO WEEYEE, SUURADOODU WAA KELI, SANSAANKA ARAGGIYO, SOCODKIYO TALLABADA, HADALKIYO SARBEEBTUNA ISMA SEEGIN ABIDKOOD, ANAA KAA SARREEYIYO, KANAA INA SARMAANIYO, SARIN WEEYE KAA KALE SOCON WEYDEY EE GARO. SOOHDINTII DHULKEENNAA, SI KASTABA U EEGOO, SAAXILKII MOMBAASIYO SIYOOLIYO WAJEER ,CADAW LOO SUNTAA JIRA, ADNNA SOO KAC DIIDOO, SUNTA AAD WALAAQDIYO, QORIGAAGA SAAMKA AH, SOOMAALAAD KU LAYSAA, SAXARIIR, SAXARIIR, SAXARIIR ADUUNYOY. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wiilo Posted December 10, 2004 GABAY: "By Wiilo" Dhaqan la'aantu iyo Dhaqan xumadu waa Dheelo tiranyihiin Dharaarta aynu joognee Soomaalaay maad Alla ka yabtaanoo Dhaqankiina ceshataan Dhaqan wanaagsan iyo Diinta macaan baad ku Dhaqantihiine Soomaalaay maad Alla ka yaabtaanoo Dhaqankiina ceshataan Dharaarta aynu joogno Dhalintaa ku Dhaqan habaabtoo duqoowdaa ku daciiftoo dumarkaa ku dulooboo Dhaqankeena wanaagsan iyo diinteena macaan baad ku Dhaqantihiine Soomaalaay maad Alla ka yaabtaanoo Dhaqankiina ceshataan. Waxaan Qoray Gabaygaan taariikhdu markay aheyn shan iyo labaatankii bishii todobaad ee sanadkii labada kun iyo sadaxda (7/25/03). Waa markii ugu horaysay ee aan damco inaan gabay qoro. Fadlan haddii aad isleedahay gabaygaan waxaa uu u baahan yahay dib u qurxin qoraal ahaan waad ii sheegi kartaa adigoo waliba ku mahadsan. Waan jeclahay inaan qoro gabayada Soomaaliga balse Af-soomaaligaygu waxaa uu u baahan yahay dib u baheyn fara badan. MAHADSANIDIIN DHAMMAANTII intii aqrisa iyo intii ii soo jawabtaba............ Go figure:............ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BOB Posted December 14, 2004 It's easy to answer to no one when you don't know one answer searching blind to find my 411 and get a grip until my hands hurt yeah man I'm thirsty for knowledge but the hunger for attention consumes everything in it's path just to attach the admiration of a few friends confused most of the time we climb never quite understanding the meaning only hoping to see the top forgetting to give thought to what it meant but does intent really justify doing whatever it takes to succeed I mean who's to say there's a right way to a place we may never reach because forever can teach us to believe in something that ends tomorrow admittedly though nobody wants to leave the peace beneath a star's glow yet it seems a broken heart can usually mend the pain once defended by feeling for we often rocked each other's world in hopes it grows appealing. Peace, Love & Unity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Observer. Posted December 15, 2004 It is good to see similarities with other people's thought, and spoken word/poetry u name it what you want, tends to do so, heavy and deep, your sharing is greated from one artist to another, keep it up, ignoring the reality makes one forget and dis-attached to the inner heart. so u know what, who cares what people say and do, but i think it is time to break off shed of the materialistic ideologies and be what we ought to be. the soldiers of the army to be. for the almighty will always be waiting for thee. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites