Diamante Posted October 17, 2004 I stand in front of the mirror And wipe the fog away My vision is still hazy From ridding myself this way My hair is all in tangles My eyes are filled with tears I wipe the warm tears away As if trying to rid myself of my fears I'm ashamed of what I have done But it hurts me even more I can't make myself stop doing it Even though I know what's in store It has taken over my mind It is eating away at my soul My throat burns with anger While my stomach growls even more I am still looking in the mirror Yet I don't know who I see All that I know Is this sad sight couldn't be me I grip the edge of the counter So tightly that my knuckles turn white I want to scream out in anger At this ugly sight It's your fault I hiss That I do this to myself If only you didn't look this way I would be in better health I cover the image in the mirror With the palm of my hand And notice a cut on my finger That I never knew I had I grab my hand in anger Or is it more like fright I'm just so shocked To see this sight I laugh and then I cry Then crumble to the floor Suddenly aware of my problem Like I never was before How did this happen to me? How did I become a statistic? I thought that I was strong, I thought I was better than that My head throbs in anger My throat burns with pain My finger loses a drop of blood And Nothing is what I have gained Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 21, 2004 That was dynamite how you expressed that, fed me to a point I thought I broke my fast :confused: . Dear stranger do write more, I like eye like I do truely enjoy. I'm just so shocked To see this sight I laugh and then I cry Then crumble to the floor Suddenly aware of my problem Like I never was before How did this happen to me? How did I become a statistic? I thought that I was strong, I thought I was better than that My head throbs in anger My throat burns with pain My finger loses a drop of blood And Nothing is what I have gained ------------------------------------------------- Well Done Ms.Diamante ~1~ PME DV None understand this, it's like they've all gone brandish. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted October 21, 2004 wow!!!!...i loooooooooooooooooooooooove this poem...walaahi ur talented...keep em comin'... p.s Ramadan kariim Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted October 22, 2004 Masha'Allah sis, I think i read it ATLEAST 10 times. I patiently wait for more... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Diamante Posted October 24, 2004 thank you all, ur replies give me more confidence...bless you for reading! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OG_Girl Posted October 25, 2004 Waaw , Masha Allah. Thanks for sharing sister. Salam Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
somali 4 ever Posted December 6, 2004 o my day's both where like WOW Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
