IL CAPO Posted October 11, 2004 Your essence is your presence Whether by my side or out of my eyes reach you're a lesson A blessing For everyday you teach The strength through the length of life A loving wife who would rather die Than be denied by fear and fate You are no fool but my genius jewel One precious and untainted A million words each beautifully painted Maybe many have made you cry before me But beneath your eyes tell a story Never shall i ever push you away Nor betray you for a worldly pleasure For that i swear and promise you my Love Remember a prey is only one Till it gets it's back off the wall Never one to be pushed against the wall You're the only one who deserves my honour My queen my gift of understanding In a demanding world you're my wisdom Not a girlfriend but a companion My true partner,one who never puts me down You feed me with logic in a planet Full of nonsense and you keep My dreams alive keep you honest And give me completion So I give you my lifetime You are more then my girl You are my life and my future You are everything when I'm nothing You make me something if not for you Then I wouldn't be real. Shall I Go On? Peace. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IL CAPO Posted October 14, 2004 It is very unfortunate for my heart to feel this way about you and sing your praises everywhere when you don't even show an ounce of appreciation of all the things I say or do for you but you know what wallaahi you have no idea how many girls would love to be in your position right now so I would say to them all the things I say to you and call them all the names I call you. Damn you Love for deceiving me, Damn you my Heart for betraying me and Damn you fate for setting me up. P.S Dear Admin..i would appreciate if you delete this topic and every one similar to it that i posted, it is just a waste of space. Thanks in Advance. Peace. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OG_Girl Posted October 14, 2004 Ooooh so sweet poem... Why you want to delete it ? Is very nioce and sweet. I love it. Salam Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted October 14, 2004 IL-CAPO..kwani kila siku ni lazima tu angalie tu MABABAIKO yako walaalo ..salaala..Jamani njoo hapa nitakupa msichana mmoja supuu mwenye roho nzuri..mwache huyo fala wa GARISSA(the latter comment was meant with all good intentions) Walaalo unanifanya niende GARISA sasa hivi nimtafute kijana ka wewe :eek: lakini kama we waeza kupitia kwangu..hamna shida(ayaaya..sasa nimejiingisha balaa- wasee wengi hapa wataona WIVU..so we'll keep it on da DOWN LOW you feel me kijana) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jumatatu Posted October 14, 2004 Originally posted by IL CAPO: P.S Dear Admin..i would appreciate if you delete this topic and every one similar to it that i posted, it is just a waste of space. Thanks in Advance Please accept his appeal and delete it...cause it simply does not make a sense at all. I'm trying to figure out where the poem is heading to and the underlying meaning but it comes to nothing and goes no where. Na wewe Raula am still waiting since last ramadan and you are dishing out offers left and right, and dont forget no garisa for me , afadali Bungoma, Kitale or Busia. Wenye gamia mi si fahamu. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raula Posted October 14, 2004 ^^^hehehe..ushasikia nyimbo moja CLASSIC inaitwa MALAIKA ..goes like this: Malaika ningekuoa (as for you, ninge olewa nawe) malaika..nami nifanyeje..nashindwa na mali sina we...ningekuoa malaika..pesaa..zasumbua roho yangu ...and on it goes.. Sasa JUMATATU..walaalo usijali..mi na wewe tutaishi MILELE na MILELE..DAIMA si wa wiwili(poetic eh!)sivyo! ok nitasare watu wa garisa..wana MADOIDO anywayz Ramadan Kareem ya muslimiin! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sheherazade Posted October 15, 2004 Il Capo, don't catch the delete bug too, man! If this girl shows no appreciation how about u delete her from your thoughts? Save your words for someone who wants to hear them, bro. It's not worth this much effort. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IL CAPO Posted October 18, 2004 Originally posted by Jumatatu: cause it simply does not make a sense at all. I'm trying to figure out where the poem is heading to and the underlying meaning but it comes to nothing and goes no where. i am glad it didn't make no sense to you because i don't think i could handle a man bombarding me with Private and Sleazy messages claiming to be you know..so i am grateful for that... naona ume anza kutapika tena lakini wacha ni kwambiye kitu moja..mimi na prefer wasichana unaona and tafadali kumbuka that i am not from Lamu but Garissa so get a maisha sawa. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sheherazade Posted October 19, 2004 More intrigue in the world of the poets. We'll need a peaceke Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sheherazade Posted October 19, 2004 Who chewed up my words?! Oh, mystery after mystery.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fouzia_Bella Posted November 3, 2004 hey Il Capo yea, it's me again. you're poems are so touching and you are one very talented brother. there aren't that many of you out there and only god knows how hard it is to find a good man. i just wanted to say that there are so many gurls out there that would love to be in 'Maliaka's' shoes in a heart beat. it seems to me that this is a relationship that didnt work out, and i can totally understand you put so much energy and time into it which makes it harder to let go. but you cant just dwel on the past. you have to move on, and i am pretty sure you'll find someone as good as this mystery gurl or even better. things happen for a reason, i believe in faith, so maybe there is a good reason why it didnt work out for you. there's plenty of fish in the sea my firend, and there are a few good men out there, just make sure you don't get ripped apart by girls fighting over you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites