My First Poem

[W.D.]

This is my first poem ever, so don't be too hard on me. Just rate me, maybe I'll dig deeper, who knows.

 

Provinces of Somalia

 

 

First we have Sool,

cuz I'm a big fan of hiphop and soul.

then we have Sanaag,

ey why won't you grab me a snack.

then we have Togdheer,

condemning the asskising of premier Blair.

then we have Mudug,

here, you'll have a hard time finding a book.

then we have Bakool,

I swear I can take Ashley Cole!

then we have Bay,

watching Bollywood movies of Mumbai.

then we have Jubba,

this poem would sound great if I would be playing the tuba.

then we have Bari,

this is no place to be drinking bloody mary.

then there's Nugaal,

tonight I'll be going out with my new gal.

then there's Galguduud,

yo ssup with you dude?

then there's Hiiraan,

I'll stop playing from now and here on.

then there's Shabelle,

it sounds like a tigresse named Isabelle.

then there's Gedo,

yo you might think twice before entering this Ghetto.

then there's Benadir,

I promise to call you my dear.

then we have Awdal,

yo this poem is getting dull.

and finally there's Woqooyi-Galbeed,

so, it's time for me to go to my bed!

 

 

yeah it's a bit childish, but hey if you don't like it, than I suggest you hit the road! JK lol

[LuCkY]

AsaLaamu ALaikum,

 

Nice Piece !I Loved the Composition.

[IL CAPO]

Bravo Bravo Bravo .

the Ashley Cole part was funny and for once you took me down to the the memory lane and made me reminisce about my last days in high school when I

tried to ask out this girl that i liked a lot and i heard she was into 2pac! :mad: so i tried to convince her that i was far better than Pac! :cool: .

 

 

Keep It Up...you got potential Partner but make sure you don't mess with ARSENAL, The Greatest Football Team in England

Peace.

[Sophist]

WD, well done.

[OG_Girl]

Nice piece WD.

 

Salam

[Diamante]

nice one WD

 

btw, wot happened to you these days, i dont see you around SOL anymore :confused:

[somali 4 ever]

nice poet wd.