sweet_gal Posted May 9, 2004 These poems are honestly by me and tell me what you think of them and post some ur self....... I know you love me By the way you smile By the way you laugh By the way you trust me The way you Whisper softly in my ear The way you express all your deepest desires By the way you speak of our future together How you never scream and yell at me I never seem to shed a tear caused by you I know you love because you tell me everyday I know you love cause you always say thank you baby You always seem to know the right words to say I love it when you compliment me I know you love me And I love you too darling Love of Country It was a dark rainy night I remember so well all those bullets flying in the air I cried, we all cried for you Once in my life you were all I know of the world All my dreams and hopes vanished in thin air I never dream such a war would ever take place Now that I’ve grown without you by my side I learned the world I would never have known Sometimes I wonder how life would be in my sweet Africa Perhaps your love and my love would shine and I’ve never feel like I don’t belong Africa O Africa Where the lions roar and sleep tonight I dream and wait for us to unit once again When the time is right I will always love you my home sweet home land Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted May 10, 2004 Word!....Love of Country! dang Lions roar kulahaa (you're waalan)lol I'm feeling it especially how you personafied somalia....deep! keep writting! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted May 10, 2004 home-gal..this my own! so take it as its!! i like the 2nd one! specially this line...Sometimes I wonder how life would be in my sweet Africa.. that was off de hook!! aigt first one! i dont what to say! u got raamis!!lol.. i mean! i dont how to explain it to u! but if i was u, i would definitely contact cheaters.com, u feel me! homie gotchaya on his lil finger!!! just my 2 cents!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Warrior of Light Posted May 10, 2004 Loved the second one, touched me dearly . Especially from these lines onwards Sometimes I wonder how life would be in my sweet Africa Perhaps your love and my love would shine and I’ve never feel like I don’t belong Keep up the good work Mashaallah Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
