Supafly Posted February 27, 2004 She loves me, she loves me not, I hate how the pain is brought But I swear to god that she'll be mine... Her acceptance is always sought So I'd have fought a million times and been ready to up and die Just to spend my life in euphoria with perfection by my side And yes I lied to keep you here, but only to avoid my fears Even when you said I lack emotion I literally tatood tears So now its been years but I love you boo and everything we've been through Thats why today it pains me to see you with that other dude And not to be rude but we're still in love, I swear it frome day one I mean how can you just up and leave... I already named our son It used to be fun but now growing old you know how our story goes Restraining orders, cops at my door... well now ***** my blood runs cold Now the feelings fold, its not the same... you didnt even know I had a name And how dare you call this obsession! I could care less about yo fame. So prepare to be slain and yes this is a cliff, not an illusion. And I didnt do it... but now you must, literally jump to conclusions Critize this was as a form of a storytellin. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted February 29, 2004 At first I was in one of these oooh this is so sweet modes but I when i got to the end.... Now the feelings fold, its not the same... you didnt even know I had a name And how dare you call this obsession! I could care less about yo fame. So prepare to be slain and yes this is a cliff, not an illusion. And I didnt do it... but now you must, literally jump to conclusions You started scaring me but I liked the word flow and content with depth. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Supafly Posted March 1, 2004 Yea i kno ma its an story about an obsessed man who got hurt by his women. thanks for the feedbac ma. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NIN_NOOL Posted March 2, 2004 Not jumping to any conclusions, but u sure u didnt do it........u sure.......ok . This is indeed a obsessed mind flow very nice scribe !!! almost missed this flava here. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Supafly Posted August 23, 2004 Aight I Actually Recorded this track. With Alicia Keys Beat listen to it. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/keyroguemusic.htm Tittled: "Seduction Of Pain" Tell Me What Ya'll Think? Also Reply In The Message Board of my soundclick what i need to improve. And If u like it Vote on it Hot or Not left side on the song. Thnx for peepin it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites