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Supafly   

She loves me, she loves me not, I hate how the pain is brought

But I swear to god that she'll be mine... Her acceptance is always sought

So I'd have fought a million times and been ready to up and die

Just to spend my life in euphoria with perfection by my side

And yes I lied to keep you here, but only to avoid my fears

Even when you said I lack emotion I literally tatood tears

So now its been years but I love you boo and everything we've been through

Thats why today it pains me to see you with that other dude

And not to be rude but we're still in love, I swear it frome day one

I mean how can you just up and leave... I already named our son

It used to be fun but now growing old you know how our story goes

Restraining orders, cops at my door... well now ***** my blood runs cold

Now the feelings fold, its not the same... you didnt even know I had a name

And how dare you call this obsession! I could care less about yo fame.

So prepare to be slain and yes this is a cliff, not an illusion.

And I didnt do it... but now you must, literally jump to conclusions

 

Critize this was as a form of a storytellin.

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J.Lee   

At first I was in one of these oooh this is so sweet modes but I when i got to the end....

 

Now the feelings fold, its not the same... you didnt even know I had a name

And how dare you call this obsession! I could care less about yo fame.

So prepare to be slain and yes this is a cliff, not an illusion.

And I didnt do it... but now you must, literally jump to conclusions

You started scaring me but I liked the word flow and content with depth.

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NIN_NOOL   

Not jumping to any conclusions, but u sure u didnt do it........u sure.......ok .

 

This is indeed

a obsessed mind flow

very nice scribe !!! almost missed this flava here.

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