hazel Posted November 19, 2003 My love is like an ocean It goes down so deep My love is like a rose Whose beauty you want to keep. My love is like a river That will never end My love is like a dove With a beautiful message to send. My love is like a song That goes on and on forever My love is like a prisoner It's to you that I surrender. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lois Lane Posted November 25, 2003 salam hazel, i liked your piece brief yet beautiful nice one. Heres my piece... Lately i’ve been thinking about you way to much for it to be healthy way too much that you became part of me way too much, that im scared now afraid to say words that could be foul but these thoughs are so consuming that my heart lets out invisible tears neverless tears they are you can only feel them by far i can’t stand no more being apart i want you so much near that im willing to show you all my fears as im writting this im wondering if my tears are like his my feelings are growing so fonder but are you gonna catch me when i fall, i truly wonder? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NIN_NOOL Posted November 26, 2003 JUST LIKE SUPER MAN DOWN FROM FLIGHT CATCH YOU MIDFLIGHT UPON U TONIGHT MY TOUCH SET IN SIGHT I BRING A CONFESSION A HEART OF WARMTH THE LOVE FROM ABOVE TO MEND THE BROKEN I SEAL A KISS TO KISS DA TEARZ ARM TO COMFORT AWAY FROM FEARZ INSIDE IS SOME CARE U CAN CALL ME FROM ANYWHERE I HEAR THE BECKON THE RAPTURE TOO SECRET WORDZ OF I LUV U MY MOTION IS THE SWEETNESS OF MY BLISS I AM THE FATHER OF CUPIDNESS I SHOOT NO ARROWS BUT TOUCH DA HEART I FIGHT WARS OF MISGUIDED LOVE & LOST DREAMZ I BRING PEACE TO THE LAND FEEL MY WHISPER SOFT & MEEK I AM THE BREEZE U FEEL THE AIR U BREATHE MY SWOOP IS STRONG UR NEVER ALONE I ROAM MENTALLY CLOSE YA EYEZ DA AMAZEMENT IS TO YA SUPRISE I AM THERE NEAR YA SIDE NOT SEEN BUT FELT I AM THE CHOICE U BEEN DELT MY HEART OF WARMNESS REACH OUT TO U TAKE MY HAND ALL REQUIRED LET ME WALK U DOWN LOVERS LANE SHOW U A JOY THAT'S NEVER CLAIM HEAL THE PAIN AS I CALL YA NAME COME Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nafta Posted December 18, 2003 I think i'm falling in love with you And i wish i knew where these feeling were going to Lately you seem to have taken over my mind Even late at night When I wish you were there to hold me tight I've been driving myself mental with images of you and me Wondering how great our love would be Even though we are big distances apart It doesn't stop the racing of my heart Everytime i think of that cute smile Making me want to walk a thousand miles I'm like an open book, this is how i feel And even though i got a lot of fears I wanna get together with you and make this real Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lois Lane Posted December 19, 2003 nafta and deligence your pieces were just FLY! heres my 2 cent: At times when im scared can you stand beside me be the warrior that protects me become my light when I can’t see right I really don’t need to be on a high flight indeed, I go by the name of Lois Lane if you don’t treat me like a plain Jane I’ll renounce on superman but your role of a man you must assume before you can consume my heart treasures I bring mental pleasures I reach beyond any physical features I please the mind searcher call me a mental nomad I’ll visit all your minds pleasureable spots keeping you always hot Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lois Lane Posted December 19, 2003 Its been 3 days now feel like my mind is lost i try to maintain but its all in vain making sense of this is pointless reason won’t even reason with me and the heart is ploting against me any second my wall will brake yet, still confident walks i fake the nonchalant ways i tried but my heart exposed me now tell me through my lines can you read what i try so hard to delete Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nafta Posted December 21, 2003 lois lane WOW girl, those were deep check these Deep in my heart your memories I keep, Nobody, knows how often I weep. No one knows the pain I bore, Beneath the smile I always wore. A loving memory clearer than gold. Silent the voice I love to hear, Far away from me, is the face I love so dear. I knew there never could be another, Gentle, lovable, sweet and kind. These are the thoughts that come to me, When the thought of you enters my mind Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted December 23, 2003 Just BeautifuL...Keep it Up. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NIN_NOOL Posted December 23, 2003 Seeing but not understanding~ Understanding but not seeing~ Events take place ~ Moving rapidly as if in a race~ Blurred images pass in front of me~ Moving faster than the eye can see~ Mental faculties slow to decode~ What is transpiring does anyone know~ Glimpse of mental images~ distant memories~ I reach out but the images flee~ Darkness comes, only to be dispelled by light~ And then.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NIN_NOOL Posted December 23, 2003 and then ... i reach out and hold your hand~ my heart immediately at peace once again~ understanding in me starts to flow~ i used to think ... but you make me know~ casting Light all over the land~ all of that just by holding your hand~ Like Cinderella at midnight, time is slipping away~ Looking for that man, who will come and say Be with me~ throughout eternity~ take me by the hand~ and together we will stand~ yes, that’s what you’re looking for~ that and much more~ need a man to make you feel like a queen~ need a man to usher you into a new scene~ give you the respect you deserve~ the desires of your heart he will serve~ share your feelings, stimulate your mind~ yet ignite your passion, your soulmate you’re destined to find~ where is the man who has only been a dream~ where is this man who is meant to be your king~ follow your heart, for what you seek you shall find~ call on diligence, for now its our time....... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nafta Posted December 31, 2003 My love don't ask me for that love again Because part of my heart has been washed away By my own tears, and where only gloom would stay So don't ask me for more than I can give With solitude, part of me is destined to live I would be with you for a long time Until the day when sun would no longer shine I would walk with you in your melancholy Your laughter and your tears, to me, would be holy. I would not show you my hearts wounds I would not let you see my sad grounds So my love don't ask me for that love again A piece of my heart is torn away where love had once lain Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hazel Posted January 1, 2004 helloo my brothers and sisters. Thank you all for posting your own poems as well. And happy new year to u all Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites