nuune Posted November 11, 2003 I remember us, the way we used to be, I'd hold you in my arms, your smile so sweet to me, But now when I see you, you look right through me, I feel so alone now, but when I close my eyes... ...All I see is you. The love we used to share, gone up in whirl winds, will I ever love, or ever live again, I am tired of crying, and I am done trying, To remember all about you, but when I close my eyes... ...All I see is you. All the love I am sending, the memories I won't sell, I know there must be an ending, to the story I will tell, I dream only of your love, and happiness in life, I try not to think of you, but when I close my eyes... ..All I see is you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted November 11, 2003 my my my nuune i read many posts that you wrote but i never saw a poem of love from you. It was beautiful. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mowgli Posted November 11, 2003 Asalaama Alaikum Well, they always say when your in love, you can never see clearly. Beautiful poem though...plus I second everything else Starlight said! Ma'salama Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nuune Posted November 13, 2003 starlight and idil,believe it,that was my first poem in this poetry section,anaaba isla yaabanba,but this love poem really tauched me!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites