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VisionIn~~MyMind

Visioning~MyMind

 

Travelin' with ease on my own, I must grown

Not a superman but as the uper man I rubber band my chrome,

and settle for my pious crown.

Gather my peeps and buy us a town,

call it Mali Town~

Calii dont frown, chill Faarax, let Halima calm down*

We cool paste tip toe slow, and my Vision is Islam will be our only flow!

As we Go...Back'back to the Horn of Africa~

We Go go back to Somalia~

All of ya__I beg not to fake

I lend you ma shoulder if ya leg ever happens to break'

Hold ya hand if your old and seen it all-

My tummy turns if i got too careless to break ya fall.

My heart is loves art, my mind is my smart part*

Now get on the blind spot, ama read you the customs chart...

1st, we part of a plantation_

Soo strong, that they can deport back every nation_

No lies, read all about it on how they plan to free mason_

in '91 New World got ordered*

2001 New World got developed as in one border*

No way in, no way out- only ghost within~

No way in, no way out- only ghost without~

And all that goes with out...

This means you be 4ever lost, even for your genenrations to come.

And our generation will never be one!

I bother ya mind, since you don't know Shhh about the spot that got blind*

Not knowin' ya way around the Bush you'll never Blare, and for your expressions->words you'll never find*

Pay ya mind, Sad am goin' with Oh Sam a man been landing troops to kill for oil

So his fries can be in perfect boil

Taking over from border to border, with every pepsi price we murder

With my nike sign i design my own terms in order*

To find you, by my care you can tell i mind you

for better for worst what they beef is mine too~

Now understand my point, cause in line two

About this I won't rhyme to

Now its time to

read between the lines

read between the lines

....

 

VisionIn~MyMind

Visioning~Mymind

 

None understand this.

They all brandish.

 

 

~1~

PME

DeadlyVision

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Poetic...emotions

 

I've been in pain

Within

I've seen the same

Within

I've teen my aim

Within

I've keen no fame

Within

Me

Within

We

Within

Understandment with nature

...

 

None Understand this~

They all brandish~

 

~1~

PME

VividVisionary

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Supafly   

I really liked yo Abstractness

 

Let me do some some 2

 

.:Rainforest:.

 

Resamblin life,

Beautiful but still treaturous./

Silent and save,

But olso filled with danger./

Quiet, peacefull,

but al by al its still restless./

Dirty and ugly,

Filled up with controversial hate./

But still pure,

By its inner beauty./

 

Short but Powerfull

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Paragon   

Not a superman but as the uper man I rubber band my chrome,

and settle for my pious crown.

Gather my peeps and buy us a town,

call it Mali Town~

Calii dont frown, chill Faarax, let Halima calm down*

We cool paste tip toe slow, and my Vision is Islam will be our only flow!

As we Go...Back'back to the Horn of Africa~

We Go go back to Somalia~

All of ya__I beg not to fake

You have good intensions deadly, and surely you have brighter future prospects in mind. The kind of optimism evident in your poems is a quality thats hard for everyone to obtain. Sxb, I like the idea of 'buying a town' cos it almost reflects my own.

 

There is much good inherent in your poetry. I wish I had the time to say more, but rest assured, your poems are appreciated smile.gif

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