DeadlyVision Posted September 26, 2003 VisionIn~~MyMind Visioning~MyMind Travelin' with ease on my own, I must grown Not a superman but as the uper man I rubber band my chrome, and settle for my pious crown. Gather my peeps and buy us a town, call it Mali Town~ Calii dont frown, chill Faarax, let Halima calm down* We cool paste tip toe slow, and my Vision is Islam will be our only flow! As we Go...Back'back to the Horn of Africa~ We Go go back to Somalia~ All of ya__I beg not to fake I lend you ma shoulder if ya leg ever happens to break' Hold ya hand if your old and seen it all- My tummy turns if i got too careless to break ya fall. My heart is loves art, my mind is my smart part* Now get on the blind spot, ama read you the customs chart... 1st, we part of a plantation_ Soo strong, that they can deport back every nation_ No lies, read all about it on how they plan to free mason_ in '91 New World got ordered* 2001 New World got developed as in one border* No way in, no way out- only ghost within~ No way in, no way out- only ghost without~ And all that goes with out... This means you be 4ever lost, even for your genenrations to come. And our generation will never be one! I bother ya mind, since you don't know Shhh about the spot that got blind* Not knowin' ya way around the Bush you'll never Blare, and for your expressions->words you'll never find* Pay ya mind, Sad am goin' with Oh Sam a man been landing troops to kill for oil So his fries can be in perfect boil Taking over from border to border, with every pepsi price we murder With my nike sign i design my own terms in order* To find you, by my care you can tell i mind you for better for worst what they beef is mine too~ Now understand my point, cause in line two About this I won't rhyme to Now its time to read between the lines read between the lines .... VisionIn~MyMind Visioning~Mymind None understand this. They all brandish. ~1~ PME DeadlyVision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 7, 2003 Poetic...emotions I've been in pain Within I've seen the same Within I've teen my aim Within I've keen no fame Within Me Within We Within Understandment with nature ... None Understand this~ They all brandish~ ~1~ PME VividVisionary Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Supafly Posted October 11, 2003 I really liked yo Abstractness Let me do some some 2 .:Rainforest:. Resamblin life, Beautiful but still treaturous./ Silent and save, But olso filled with danger./ Quiet, peacefull, but al by al its still restless./ Dirty and ugly, Filled up with controversial hate./ But still pure, By its inner beauty./ Short but Powerfull Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted October 11, 2003 Not a superman but as the uper man I rubber band my chrome, and settle for my pious crown. Gather my peeps and buy us a town, call it Mali Town~ Calii dont frown, chill Faarax, let Halima calm down* We cool paste tip toe slow, and my Vision is Islam will be our only flow! As we Go...Back'back to the Horn of Africa~ We Go go back to Somalia~ All of ya__I beg not to fake You have good intensions deadly, and surely you have brighter future prospects in mind. The kind of optimism evident in your poems is a quality thats hard for everyone to obtain. Sxb, I like the idea of 'buying a town' cos it almost reflects my own. There is much good inherent in your poetry. I wish I had the time to say more, but rest assured, your poems are appreciated Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites