PROMISE

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PROMISE

 

A word of trust

A lie not just

Dont worry i'm told

"I'm a man of my word"

Lo and behold

As sweet sorrows unfold

Patiently waiting

As my hopes start fading

What words are left to say

"I'm a man of my word"

Surely i'd disagree

Infact i'd second that times THREE

I speak of course as a stranger to this crime

Surely i've never met

A man of this kind

For verily a man is just a man

A human and nothing more

And for that an excuse is ALWAYs at hand

Work

Rest

This

That

Endless possiblities

True to his word

A promise always kept

Are things still foreign to me

Unfortunately

[DeadlyVision]

Fortunately

I lack lies

Read the honesty in my eyes

Sense my lyrical poetry

A man of his words

You my specialty as you heard

And as for them other birds? I seek them not

You more than hot, ALL I GOT.

Bestow me all I need.

Never give into greed

Give into me

Dont fight it I promise you great

Promise you high rate

I make you take

A mans word I never fake

Let me roam, promise you'll never see my chrome!

Anger proof you, you'll never be alone.

Dial me up if you need me home.

Do compermise if I ever do wrong.

Lets live long give strong!

Am mans word with no patience

Always anxious promise like I was created to taint-this:

Tease me, tease you...never thought!

Please me, ease you...never got!

All this living in my lifes plot!

Yet, issues apear roomers we hear

Friends yap alot, lies like he diss you on yo ear.

If you procieved them clear, than I should get ghost fade from your rear.

Go far from near if u dare.

Sweet begining, a bitter end is never rare.

But for now; I be that to man to pull out ya chair.

Open every door, just know I care.

Dont get colder than a Polar Bear

Cause am created with low patience and it just soo happen few times I can bare...B.S__

P.S lets plot plans for the world like Bush & Blare.

...

 

 

~1~

DeadlyVision

 

Darum-Dam-Dun..Dam-Dun

[LuCkY]

NOTABLE...keep up the good work guys.

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How weary I’ve become

Traveled that road many times before

Been there done that

Looked into your eyez……..And

Don’t get me wrong

Definitely Alluring

And certainly ensuring

Saying one thing meaning a next

Dazzled and amused

Compliments abundant

Promises you’ve made

Countless they were

You were my all my everything

High hopes

Led to false hopes

From false hope

went to no hopes

Waited and Waited

True gentlemen

Perceived you to be

Guaranteed me comfort

Call you when I need you

We’d be like glue

Just me and you

Two souls

Making one whole

Pulling chairs

Holding doors

Together we’d be

For now and all eternity

Sadly reality struck

And I went out of luck

Seemed to be

I was the only one in this dream

And everything was going downstream

I liked you

And the same could not be said for you

And now patiently awaited

For the wounds to heal

Its said that time heals all wounds right

Its been a century

The wound still hurts and the scar still there

Is life really FAIR?

[Complex Mind]

Assalamu Alaikum,

 

Viewer Discretion, welcome bro/sis to the SOL family. I'm feeling ur things so do enlighten us with a few more. Take care...

 

Wa Billahi Tawfiq

[Lois Lane]

Salam to all

 

Masha Allah ...glad to see we got some real poets in here. Let me add my 2/3 cent.

 

Met him on a cold monday afternoon,

he had me at hello....my heart felt like jello

around him I saw purity and security

neva really felt this way before

then again neva let them approach me

late night crookz, i wasn’t into

meaningless conversations

lame assumptions, forged impressions, false passions

fake complements to get in that motion

plenty came by, few really stuck by

but only him had me this high

before him my heart was deserted

but now I was delighted,

in his presence I flourished, like a beautiful rose

he was undescribable........he was only felt

like a king he walked proudly

no he danced...no he glided...no he shined throught the masses

DAMN! He had me dazed and confused

speechless, I just stood there

breathless, I could only stare

let his essence comsume me

all while I murmured prayers

that he was sent for me

 

L.L

[Viewer Discretion]

I liked yours.. it was nice....But i dont relate to it, but nevertheless it was good

 

 

A man of such kind

I’m sure is definitely hard to find

You say he made you

“Speechless”

“Breathless”

Emotions at all time high

Most Probably a lie

Take a breath

Realism isn’t far away

No man has such powers

To leave one without breath

And worst of all

Speechless

Incapable to communicate

And Converse

Positively a horror

Words give you supremacy

Security

Wrapped up you seem to be

On this mans ability

Admiration and stability

Let your mind free

“in his presence I flourished, like a beautiful rose”

Sister you are what you perceive yourself to be

With him or without.

Without a doubt.

[Lois Lane]

Thx, I like yours too,

 

Agreed, mental stimulation,

and verbal connection

take you beyond any artificial physical attraction

quick judgement is a great destruction

to any humans emotions

don’t let hurt and anger blurry your vision

your not seing in my direction

I understand your seing left

but what if im seing right

does that mean im not right?

appreciated is the advice

but misunderstood is the purpose

just for the record my mind is free

as one can be

and yes i flourished like a rose

not meaning i felt beautiful in my skin

only in his presence

cause hun’ i put myself at the highest

just an inch below the conceited line

but i received a good dose

of mind stimulation

hence making my mind flourish like a rose

like a beautiful rose

 

hope that helps you understand my flow sis

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Used and abused

Passed down

Like hand me downs

Treated like objects

Livin in the projects

Don’t generalize

Rather comprehend

And recognize

A Woman

Then came you

Bad times

A few crimes

The result

Being called a ***

Is it really her fault?

Mistakes happen

Things should be forgotten

Live life

Quite simple

[Lois Lane]

I prayed and he still hasn’t come

instead i felt for anotha crook

read my mind like an easy book

he used all the tricks to play his game

but i still stayed i wasn’t about fame

yeah i know it sounds real lame

when your eyes can barely see

and your heart is drowning in a sea

you can’t reasonably reason

still i stayed thinking things would change

i gave my heart and my mind

really tried to be his dime

but he had commited the biggest crime

in his eyes i saw my worth

in his black book i was fourth

unlike MC to him i wasn’t priceless

tried to make me feel worst then useless

less then the best, put me below the rest

he was beyond any test

tougher to overcome then any stress

he tried to undersell me

not just leave me, but hurt me, play me

jerk me and desert me

tried, tried, but still failed

now your caged soul, lost morals

who will bail?

I made u laught, but you’d rather what makes u cry

till this day your still crying

make this your lesson before you start lying

every girl has a limit.

 

 

L.L

[DeadlyVision]

Time is

Promised

Comments

Not met up

One got fed up

Other cared less, & processed a set up.

Kept makin' broken promises.

Whats the common sense?

Keepin' shut lip, silent as manicans.

This is my heart ach analysis.

I say promise is apocalyps.

And the madness is.

I lack trust in this...soo called promise!

Upon this, conclude love's pointless~

With no trust, we got fake lust.

Kickin' dust love is not a must.

Saying Wallahi-2 make a promise thats adjust.

Rather be blunt and up front!

No is an asnwer yes is not a better stunt~

...

Never make a promise if you can't meet up to it.

The outcome of honesty is less dramatic than the outcome of lies...and Allah will love for it

...

 

~1~

PME

Visionary

[Lois Lane]

In this train of confusion i ride solemnly

throught the tunnel of verbs i traveled centuries

to come back where i left off

had plenty that turned me off

thinking the way to a woman’s heart is money

or over used and abused compliments

sucking from the greatest relationship the last sentiment

never taking time to understand a womans mind

if only they knew thats were the gold lies

instead they rather be verbal pimps

over use every beautiful word their is

just to get to a fractional lust

turning every diamond to rust

but some diamonds shine throught the light

and show even the baddest crook whats right

 

 

let me show you the way

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I lie

So you wont cry

If i told you

I couldnt call you

Would you try and understand?

If i told you

We couldnt chill

Would you love me still?

If i wanted a break

Wouldnt you cry a lake?

How about.....

If i said i was busy

Would you try and kiss me?

If i told you we were through

Woudnt you send your crew?

How bout

If iw as playing you

Wouldnt you break in 2?

I'm sure instead... Youd like

Me to send you flowers

And talk for hours

For the world to revolve

Around you and me

If you try and understand

That sometimes

I may feel down

And wont be around

Tried to be considerate

I wouldnt need to lie

And there wouldnt be no need to cry

I'll always keep

My promises

[Viewer Discretion]

My topic seem's to be dying out, was it that bad....

[Complex Mind]

LOL!! Are you heybe now?? LOL!