Section6er Posted October 1, 2003 I can see u guys are at the beginning of your rhyming stages. You actual make lines that all rhyme. Well thats easy, anybody can do that. You learn that reading Dr. Seuss. Even if all your lines ryhme make it unique. All your lines are so predictable dog. I can tell where your going with it before I even read it. Now write a line or six bars that do not rhyme but actual make sense. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sYric-STiPHuLLa Posted October 2, 2003 U SURE six ? I FREESTYLEd on that i don't do corrections i come back like in a min son.. but if u wanna do rhyme books we see waz good..holla back Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted October 2, 2003 Okay......well even though the challange isn't directed at me personally ..let me drop it........ Boy like "stevie wonder" as a "novelist" you can't "see" me in a "write off" - I'm up like "an erect penis" and u'll get "jerked off"- My name'll be engraved in your mind Due to my amazing rhymes- After this you gon' be a "silent f*ck" like two "mating mimes"- you can't win like the US on grungy foreigners I'll beat u like harry boramer but it doesn't matter...boy you couldn't "write a hot verse" if you "swallowed a lighter" then started "typing with your fingers on fire" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites