DeadlyVision Posted August 20, 2003 Far off the coast I was Far off the coast I miss Far off the coast eye-whiz .... Far off the coast I was Use to be less yet felt more smiles in piles as a playfull child Far off the coast I was Hate-or love in store adore war A door for western tile I'll ill Far off the coast I was Seeing is believing and proceeding is achieving or A lore for eastern style I'll ill Far from the coast I was Afcourse I was marved visually lost in marvel core Believe u live in grief So he told me to set a side my wants and indeed feed my need Far from the coast I was I change me to shift you Shift you to change me change me to shift you Far from the coast I was ....... True minds read between thin lines Fake minds accept the easy path Let them feed you, but know what you're digesting LinesPathDigesting...lifes interlude to death* A known fact_If its a must, than live for the act~ Just wana let u know, urs will be mine in time-X ~1~ PME VividVision* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted August 20, 2003 Competing for # one Completing after none Most conceit for the sum Conceding to the creater of the sun Some-leading to gain this hum Buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing Son-seeding some Dumb-deeming for the run .... Faithless=aimless+shameless-nameless. .... True minds read between thin lines Fake minds accept the easy path Let them feed you, but know what you're digesting LinesPathDigesting...lifes interlude to death* A known fact_If its a must, than live for the act~ Just wana let u know, urs will be mine in time-X ~1~ PME VividVision* 1/2_50cents: Wu'EvaSaid Progress was a slow Process, wasn't talking about me. Am for P.M.E_ Plus! I got tha ~MagicWord~ :eek: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted August 21, 2003 Kool Kalm & Kollective Blunt and forword Real seductive Never knew you would be sensative Never knew eye would be rejective Mind whips you blender, with futuristics X-Placid soo explicid Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective Hunger paste rest-less, left dry skin on your face Like the thirst of a pale man cheering for the Jays In this case Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective Said you were in love But, swong moods when I held u like a lossers grudge Forced my self in your shoes, drunk of realness like guzzlin booz, simply put I couldn't understand ur ways Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective My kindness made me give into my blindness, like being spraid with M16 or mase Lef you on ya own in this case Am cocky dont try to stop me, I'll just lead you on a Casper Chase Give me a raise, if you find me amazed Nothing suprises all rises, and Nursary is liaised Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective Flew from thee- hate, debate, fake on the make close to my wake Was it you that left me or me that felt free? From my weakness "you" stringth "faith", I spree! Done is finish, u still hate on me! Gave me attitude now am Rude But, soo long as u got the boot Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective Came to meet her, she was cold Freezing like living old Made most men in her pocket go bold Thinking- regretting the mistake of winking- In sin, low instinct thoughtfully blinking- Confused with her new tongue I learned her ways A-B-Cs 1-2-3s Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective My eastern princess got me intensed Can't get her back Can get her bac Won't get her back Will get her back Thought falling of track Tribe me not, out here am just another black In the same quality, still hate on me Still debate on me Patience is proper, but dont ask me to wait on me Sad says Kool Kalm & Kollective Compete to get mine, but lose ya mind b4 u begin to start flyin' Inner death, emotion mosion to numness whats dying Friends of Foes, who is lying who is tryin To lift me up or drop me down from rissin like a giant Sad says KOOL~KALM~&~KOLLECTIVE ...... True minds read between thin lines Fake minds accept the easy path Let them feed you, but know what you're digesting LinesPathDigesting...lifes interlude to death* A known fact_If its a must, than live for the act~ Just wana let u know, urs will be mine in time-X ~1~ PME VividVisionary Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted September 5, 2003 Far off the coast I was Far off the coast I miss Far off the coast eye-whiz .... Far off the coast I was Use to be less yet felt more smiles in piles as a playfull child Far off the coast I was Hate-or love in store adore war A door for western tile I'll ill Far off the coast I was Seeing is believing and proceeding is achieving or A lore for eastern style I'll ill Far from the coast I was Afcourse I was marved visually lost in marvel core Believe u live in grief So he told me to set a side my wants and indeed feed my need Far from the coast I was I change me to shift you Shift you to change me change me to shift you Far from the coast I was This is One of them poetries you read, And you just can't help but relate and applaud... Nice one there, and yeah the rest of them too K.K.K dIGZ IT.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 5, 2003 Instinc-Poet...thnx Du' ... It should be honor to see you write lil sa'in* excuse the slang, excuse the attitude~... lets bring back the old poetic in sense of justice~ ... Str8Goodz__Hallow heads write your Itinirant tail. ... Poetic Formation* 1nomad_standin4_1major Nation~ ... VisionaryWriter_not in no negative terms Deadly~1~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 5, 2003 I've fallen they thought I couldn't get up Left swollen they fought within me, I swear it was a set up! 90s casualties left lot of us in bad memories; Livin' in insanity property. Used us bad like profanity and probably if we remain numskulls we'll for ever be livin' in poverty. 4get you,remember me; wit' personal plans to open: Knowledge collage in some nomanslands cottage/ Far off the coast I was! Am lost_ lost lacking unities advantage Still I manage kool kalm and kollectively I paste my way up, and only FAM and ALLAH helpin me! 4get you,remember me; wit' personal plans to open: Minds power plan, body pressure pand; it'll take a souls search to understand what am saying mAn! ... time ran out on me, and I ran out of time, so am gone... ... PeacePeepz! Visionary~1~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 19, 2003 Intinerant on nights path... I seek knowledge between lands. Days on the road, nights I rest my plans. From here to there, I wintess the same game. Lacking plays,what can I say?...its the same game. Party freaks, thongs & skirts in winter... Damn! :confused: For me?...Thank you, but what happens after I enter? Expect me to stay till summer? Not wit' dat dress code, not wit' dat attitude. Sorry if I sound rude, but you know the game is ALL GOOD! Understood? lol Intinerant on nights path... Got nothing but love 4~U. Trying to be the top dawg! Open oprotunities door 4~U. Even though you just another rabbit with a bad habit, got more hops than a frog! More change than a chameleon, lost in a black fog! I teach you how to walk the talk! Than show you how to maintain the walk. 1st dont meet me in the Mosque, tellin' me about a Jam around the Block! :mad: Cause out on the street I knock ya stock! 2nd says you got to be real, let her know u really feel. That your only out to wet ya lil man makes u feel still solid as a steel. No long term plans, you holdin'her back from other mens. She into ya sweet talks, laugh at ya jokes on knock knocks! And NO, dont fake it around me when u see her species, cause I may break ya front rocks! Chew how u do, drink ya brew; smoke when ur feelin' blue. But, Du' kno' wat to do! 3rd dont play; talkin' 'bout Macca will take away my sins. Just to have a reason to careless around ya pretend friends. Speak a sinfull bla'bla- "Blah-Bla" Not knowing faith consensus in senses. You settin' a bad path for the youngs! You old and blind folded, learn to read to gain the knowledge cause I wrote it. 5days on a slavery shift. 5ways to repent my sins and notice my gift. 5fingers to complete my palm, so am able to lift. The book of life. 45 for my right. 25 U good if u see the light. Now, remain Kool-Kalm-&-Kollective when u fight. Intinerant on nights Path... __ True minds read between thin lines Fake minds accept the easy path Let them feed you, but know what you're digesting LinesPathDigesting...lifes interlude to death* A known fact_If its a must, than live for the act~ Just wana let u know, urs will be mine in time-X ~1~ PME VividVision* :cool: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 25, 2003 Twisted minds... Twisting mines... Resting nines... I should be selling these lines* ... I aint having it_ Am grabbing it, wrapping it. asking whats happening? Is it me or you got lost along the way? Grew on brand new land, follow what they say. Sure enough, I get a dumb advice from a grown up~ All the time am thrown out! Living as a teen in the 90s aint how it seemed~ 2000 thank god am above my 20s, keepin' my mind cleaned! Still maintain mean cause we need ppl like me to place new kids in the hall. Lined up, cause new teenagers smoke, drink and do crack an all... Never land on their bum, on their backs they fall... Now you got to be visual with the terms I use_ Am plotting a battle against Teen Somalis and the drugs they abuse_ Its alright, if your grown up you may feel lil confused~ But social work turn is what I choosed to heal those who got bruced~ 4Kids with out guidance, I spark lightnings... With pops who chews moms living in stress lossing confidence... Gather the proper pay, welfare is not the way; nowaday slaver(work) is in a cash term evidence.... Do it for the kids, stop the ignorance_ Our soil keepers back home are lossing their patience_ While I read teen faces saying Flip Somalia I aint never going back... Lil they know,out here they falling off track... Guzzling, hustling at the end living around crack... No jack, I aint tongue twisting I already seen all that... as a matter of fact, we go young nomads on the pipe in the dark not seeying the light... The info hope you recieving it right... We got young nomadic girls strippin' tonight... sippin' slippin 'outa sight... saying dont tell me what to do, am out to get right...to get high I give tight:( Alright ama move to the side, let you battle ya pride... Seeying sad faced in bad cases grown beards on the side walk begging for food... Not known that man was once good, b4 he lost his family in a NorthAmerican hood. Now he homeless getting more less pennies, even tho back home he felt his life would 4ever be a living bless* No contest. I address the mess! Twisted minds... Twisting mines... Resting nines... I should be selling these lines* Twisted minds Twisting mines Resting nines I should be selling these lines* ~1~ PME VisionarymAn_ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viewer Discretion Posted September 26, 2003 Nuff respect i really liked this poem Intinerant on nights path... I seek knowledge between lands. Days on the road, nights I rest my plans. From here to there, I wintess the same game. Lacking plays,what can I say?...its the same game. Party freaks, thongs & skirts in winter... Damn! For me?...Thank you, but what happens after I enter? Expect me to stay till summer? Not wit' dat dress code, not wit' dat attitude. Sorry if I sound rude, but you know the game is ALL GOOD! Understood? lol Intinerant on nights path... Got nothing but love 4~U. Trying to be the top dawg! Open oprotunities door 4~U. Even though you just another rabbit with a bad habit, got more hops than a frog! More change than a chameleon, lost in a black fog! I teach you how to walk the talk! Than show you how to maintain the walk. 1st dont meet me in the Mosque, tellin' me about a Jam around the Block! Cause out on the street I knock ya stock! 2nd says you got to be real, let her know u really feel. That your only out to wet ya lil man makes u feel still solid as a steel. No long term plans, you holdin'her back from other mens. She into ya sweet talks, laugh at ya jokes on knock knocks! And NO, dont fake it around me when u see her species, cause I may break ya front rocks! Chew how u do, drink ya brew; smoke when ur feelin' blue. But, Du' kno' wat to do! 3rd dont play; talkin' 'bout Macca will take away my sins. Just to have a reason to careless around ya pretend friends. Speak a sinfull bla'bla- "Blah-Bla" Not knowing faith consensus in senses. You settin' a bad path for the youngs! You old and blind folded, learn to read to gain the knowledge cause I wrote it. 5days on a slavery shift. 5ways to repent my sins and notice my gift. 5fingers to complete my palm, so am able to lift. The book of life. 45 for my right. 25 U good if u see the light. Now, remain Kool-Kalm-&-Kollective when u fight. Intinerant on nights Path... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 1, 2003 ~Different Lifes~ ~Ripping Rights~ ~Slipping Kites~ ... ~Different...Lyfes!~ I tell you "Life's a bad habit". And the bear does whipe his azz wit' a rabit. Fallin-On and off the waggon, And my friend is a magnet. Stuck on my waste under my jacket. Glock'aholic! Roots to all evile in my pocket. Blow my product...and u be a dead addict. 8balls I add it...Curve balls I batted~ Never braggin, eventho I had 'em~ Bad as Adem~ And Eve be naggin...Why I aint home often? Chassing my tail...only callin' for bail :confused: Write my (lier)Lawyer a story to tell... I godda pay wieght, if am a day late! :mad: Plus I got a baby on da way~ My mind sayin' Hey-hey heeey~ Hay'hey'heeey! Imagine that...imagine me fallin' off track. Imagine me fallin' off track just like that! :rolleyes: ... ~Different Lifes~ ~Ripping Rights~ ~Slipping Kites~ ... ~Different...Lyfes!~ Remember the facts of life? Viction in stripes. U could be feelin' the excite, like 1st time ridding ya bike. Writing ya rights...battling devils night. Alright... Ama change the aspect, life doesn't have to be like a bad habit~ Prayers I practice. They dont know me like the way they think they do~ Rapers be actors, so I dont follow how they do~ What they do, when they do; to the motel rolling wit' a crew! 2004 as a changed man am comming through. Never chew and screw. Only guzzle Moutain Dew* Keep my brain cells, brand new. Make a way for the youngnz too. Switch. maWayz. add two to 22. Live in prove...moving smooth! Beef me an' I chip ya tooth! My sh*t hits the fan, ya sh*t hits the roof. lol... Read between the lines, and u wont be the goof! Living different lifes, some need a prachute! Others get in ya mind like a phone booth! Trible "G" over doze my mood,(Gansta~Gone~Good!) No more rollin' rude in da hood... Imagine me getting booed :confused: Imagine me getting the boot, shifted back to my root :rolleyes: ~Different Lifes~ ~Ripping Rights~ ~Slipping Kites~ ... ~Different Lifes~ ~Ripping Rights~ ~Slipiing Kites~ ... ~Different...Lyfes!~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 3, 2003 Battling 5 Jinns~ Four on four corners~ One in my head~ ... Battling 5 Jinns~*Good version* .. I prepare to repent my sins~ Can't depend on friends~ Ringing my cell, wana hang out. I short form the convo, and hang up. Once in a blue moon to cool my jinn I use to jam out. Just like I did what I had to do. Now I do what I gots to do. Thats to keep an eye on the one waitin' for me, up ahead. The one sneakin' from lift side, Cause I think he want me dead. The one on my right, keeps on goin' to my blind side (You heard what I said). The kid behind me is a back stabber, plotin' with the one in my head. He tellin' 2day is a lazy day Pay is a pay, go sleeper hold that fool who got rich around the way. Askin' me, why it gotta be all work an no play? Won't you just Jam like the D.J? Chill wich'Ya boys in the P.J!((Project) Roll a session or two, must you really Pray? Not NOW. Hey-look! you not daahir, u can't pray, no way no HOW! And I be stressin' battling my 5 jinns in the work place. Vex features on my face :mad: Lossin' my faith :confused: After a long day, holding my head on my bed. I repent on "Isha" (Allah I been battling all 5 all day) 4give me for the bad vowels I said. As automatic bliss enters me Inshallah am ready for my next day. Battling 5 Jinns~ Four on four corners~ One in my head~ ... Battling 5 Jinns~*Bad version* .. "Taaaaaxi!" How much to down town? 40bucks? Okeeey! Just got my pay gotta flip my frown. Jinn chill I got this, pass the Alize! Where's the E&J? Roll up a dutch, pass the blunt'wrap~light me up! Driver turn up the Rap. Hype Me Up! Blast the speaka! am callin' Madina my Diva. So I can meet her at Club~Ceasa. While the up ahead Jinn says, Oooh I can see it already u'll please her. Oooh 1st, nigga ama tease her_ Laughin' with the one on his left, guidin' to kill his health. When he stumbles his right buddy is his help. The back stabber will let him collect his sins~ One on his head sayin' "this nigga is crazy, we all his best friends" :confused: Time goes from 12 to 5 in the morning. Still awake yet yawning. How easy could it be, his mind body and soul didn't even notice~ Still up for tomorow nights hocus bogus. Soo sad soo sad soo fun he had* Battling 5 Jinns~ Four on four corners~ One in my head~ ... Battling 5 Jinns~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted October 3, 2003 Assalamu Alaikum, Much respect styll. ~~~~~~~ That was DEADLY but to the point with 20/20 VISION In this world we live in, we all got one mission Gotta step up to that role and live with conviction Bow your head in humbleness and truthful submission To the ONE, the ONLY, deserving of my recognition As the ONE, the ONLY, I answer to on Resssurection... Day by day, my inevitable end is creeping on me One day I'll be in a place with nothing but earth all around me Asking myself, over and over, dang girl are you ready?? See myself rushing, making wudu, and on the salli saying Ya Rabbi!! Wallahi this life passes by like the blink of an eye Don't let Shaytaan mask you from the haqq, cuz you WILL die Be in this world like a traveller, a passerby This ain't your final destination, in this dunya don't rely... That was DEADLY but to the point with 20/20 VISION In this world we live in, we all got one mission ~~~~~~~ Wa Billahi Tawfiq Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 11, 2003 Its a two way street Hate or Love ...Two way street Hate or love Its a two way street ~~+~~ Do they see? Only life & death come free. You need to mind- lifes guide line, and this ticking sign time. Soo many signs i read in a days notice- I notice most be jokers, I focus on my papers. Outa sight my hatters. Vanish foes, manage hoes I bandage yours. Get-U-Lost. in thy metaphors. Am here! And every brandish wana battle close* And there! Head bud u with a meatle post*pin ya toes- am Beadle Juice, snooze u lose. I neva' booz like neva' bruce... Islamic, so neva' let my jinn choose~ 4 my two way street, lifes guide line I use. Love rather hate is a way to debate 4fake. Feelin' like DMX' where ma mood where ma mood~ where ma mood at? Left the hood an left my snipe sack! Dawgs like me math every path, and neva' holdback- emotions neva' intake. In this two way street...am lost And this two way street..most got crossed This two way street...loving the abstract floss. Two way street...I done writin' this cheque like Mobs Boss! My way street, is steep; sometimes even speaks taking me where evil sleeps. Istaqfurullah, for we're blind at the moment to the facts u laid infront of us Allah...and thats my metaphorical speech! Its a two way street Hate or Love ...Two way street Hate or love Its a two way street ~~+~~ Its your choice...Good or Bad? Drink away ya reasons, as if that'll make u feel glad. Blind to see the things you neva' had... Worm/cool shelter. Yet guzzle ya believes away, sayin' u a Soldier! A ganster? I say u a nomadic prankster. Like 50's a wankster; ur drugged drunk cheeks made u look like a bumb stranger. how u gona claim to be a warlord ranger?... You fake so dont fake me out~. ... This is a letter to Somali Alcoholics & those who soo badly wanabe like da kufaars... ... Find ya self~...this is not to judge but to show you just soo much* ~1~ PME Deadly-Vi' Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Supafly Posted October 12, 2003 YEa my fellow Poets doing their thang Deadly Nice abstract poems sxb Ama let my knowledge drop also My recent poem called -Fall of a Demon- an angel was born the last day of the year.. with the spirit of Horn of Afrique and remains here.. knowin only innocents and pride.. but soon taunted by many that made him suicidal inside.. over time the emotion was hidden and pain.. the mental game drove him to be insane.. he mastered hate and seen much in return.. the sparks of hell where lit around ever turn.. money and drugs took over his life.. but before he was put back in jail he spoke to his future wife.. she calmed the demon with care and compassion.. its result was the fault why five less colors a year was flashin.. passion hit his dome along with dreams and hope.. his love was on the incline it was the fall of dope.. but a bad day came from mistakes on his part.. he sold his soul to the demon but lost his heart.. in the trenches holdin on the last thread.. with his cousin at his side to beat sense into his head.. but she called one day and he revived.. and realized she was the only reason he surrived.. The End.....i hope ya'll enjoyed Critism please how i could get my writings beter Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted October 14, 2003 Hey..didn't know where to post this so i thought why not here...(sowwy@Deadly vision..nuttin' but luv rite ) ne wayz...look @ minez right Hurr..lol Circle yes or no If you like watz below Let me let u decide While this poem I recide… Let me known ur name Let me know ur game Let me know how it iz To be called ur mizz Let me be ur gurl Let me be ur world Let me take ur hand And me make u man Let me take u out Let me make u shout Let me show u that Sex is not wat itz all about Let me make u learn Ur intelligence I yearn Let me be by ur side On a bus Or a million dollar ride Let me write for you Let me fight for you Everynight, a duca I recite for you I want to do everthing thats right for u Even if it means, it really aint rite for me Let me make u see Or atleast make u read This whole world is nuttin but a watery sea I found my fish Let me make u a dish U R my wish 6’3” intelligent sexy well accomplished.... DAMN! he's fine..lol thanx yall.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
