Captivating_SouL Posted August 10, 2003 Wha makes yah move on afta a long day? For me...its relaxtion..having some of 'me-time'...and definetly forgettin & forgivin shit 2 move on....eitha be ..anywho what works 4 yah? Relaxtion: Felt Bettah Things Evitably change As i plan on 2 forget and start a fresh talkin of bull shit making no sense but hit the road with no stress and no showcase Felt bettah than Yesterday. Issues at hand 2 solve Running n Running with endless distance not catching along with Reality is, i feel bettah cuz i let angry disolve unable 2 sense tomorrow's reactionz live moment by 1 stoor step I feel Bettah Sinceerely forgiveness unsaid words but forgiveness so i can lead on, move on and strap on Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted August 21, 2003 Nice flow Captive_Soul__ That was profoundly put... ....hope u dont mind cause.... ... I must release 2 relax the vision in my mind through the soul of my window I share how we live blind Breathe with their comfort, hosts my glow Prayless praying less I must release to relax my stress Soo deep in thoughts I can't flippin sleep Insomnia stole my rest Paranoia consol my chest Fearing not for me but for loved ones Cause my future vision has me feelin' the power of guns Like gansters role in groups to cause beef I foot solja walk it on ma own, trust not where the next man lays his feet A leader amongs any group, feel the drive of leading any troup Living in proof, as my personality is understood Must release to relax, the chewers from my head smokers I see as my thoroughbred Must release to relax, the drinkers that said the wanted me dead Cause I spoke the truth, living proof; while they guzzled to transform into goofs I kick 'em down wit' ma steel toe boots Must release to relax, Palastine from the Jews Must release to relax, the hate in my sistas moods Swingin_ landing none, only has me in confuse Why hate! why debate! why stay if u can't relate? Why go jade? Dont know about you, but am straight- AND I must release to relax rage .... Must release to relax ~1~ PME VividVisionary Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captivating_SouL Posted September 2, 2003 DeadlyVision....nice .... i like it. Must be one of my fav. amongs sevearl you have written. Wun Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miriam1 Posted September 4, 2003 Great Poem Captivating Soul...what works for me..just like you said, "me time" sit quitely in my room still..no music no tv no phone...time to think and breakdown whatever happened in that certain day to piss me off..and then i would pray when only i am free of all that stress, or otherwise my concentration would be non existant. Okay..hope ya dont mind..but i dont like starting threads..just a little poem i wrote..first time i think.. Moment For a moment I thought I could feel it Feel what you ask? Feel the essence of my past Hear the words of my ancestors being whispered in the wind Touch the grains of the sand and see the heroes of our history, Shouting for our freedom Feel the emotion that was stolen from me. I, a child of a diasporas, ignorant of my nation’s soul I, a child of a land, Long forgotten. A Land Torn apart by treacherous hands Yes I thought I could feel it, but alas now I know I could not, For once my eyes opened I was again, An Alien A refugee An immigrant But never a citizen Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted September 4, 2003 Jawahiir nice fLow...im feeLing that one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captivating_SouL Posted September 24, 2003 yeah Jawahir... deep sistah...and you said this is your first time...DANG Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
