Paragon Posted July 28, 2003 Cry baby cry, cry an innocent cry Never let the eyes dry Cry baby cry, Cry an honest cry Weep baby weep Weep for the goodness lost Weep baby weep Weep for the honest lot Crawl baby crawl Crawl to the basic truth Crawl baby crawl Crawl to good health Speak baby speak Speak of the pure hearts Speak baby speak Speak for poor hearts Glow baby glow Glow with the power of love Glow baby glow Glow from all above Be baby be Be free from all the hate Be baby be Be free from the evil state. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 28, 2003 NICELY ASSEMBLED. WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG? :confused: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thinkerman Posted July 29, 2003 Hey i think its high time you do a collection of your best poets and publish a book bro excellent. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sophist Posted July 29, 2003 Simply mouthwatering my fellow, you have far too long famished us your famous verses; I have enjoyed this one mate. Keep them pouring from that vertile mind of yours; though I must warn you no verbal condom in poetical intercourse!. Love baby Love Let the emotions guide you Wail baby wail Wail for the famished family Cry baby cry Crying is your only care Comely comfort has gone Ponder baby ponder For people have perished The pool of the souls is pealing Nothing short of pounce Grow baby grow Grow to be great Guide baby guide Guide all the lost groups Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silent-sistah Posted July 29, 2003 jamaal....when i first joined SOL, i heard alot about your peotry and i hadnt seen one my self, ,,,,well so many months later...this is my first ...and indeed it is impressive. MashaAllah Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xafsa Posted July 29, 2003 guess whos back....!!! Nicely done Jamaal Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted July 29, 2003 Lucky, I know I have been away. But now I am here S-Moja, thankx for your advice my good friend. Silent-sista, walaashiis. I am glad you enjoyed those words. Thank you and flying-still ... thank you very much. I appreciate your comments . Sophist... how are you old friend. I have taken leave from my common sense lately and that process had made me seek consolation in simplicity and innocence. I have been veryquiet, as you have noticed, coz I believe I no longer have much to say. I am out of words. Good piece of poetry sxb. Keep it up. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
guleedyare Posted August 2, 2003 Jamaal-11 you are the King of English poetry keep up bro Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted August 19, 2003 guleedyare thanks brother. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
suban Posted August 21, 2003 Nicely put Jamal! Simply beautiful. ope you've got it copy written bro! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted August 21, 2003 subaneey thnkx walaashiis. You seem to be a talent yourself. Keep it up runtii. PS: No copywrights for me. I don't think words should be protected. Words, words and more words, just words Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
