A verse on painful love

[Sophist]

What you give me--

 

 

Beautiful soft spoken words, that touch

the very essence of my soul.

Embracing my private fantasies, transforming

them into reality.

Finding and releasing my hidden passions,

leaving my skin yearning for your touch.

Impassioned eyes, that sear into my soul,

and melt the world away.

Bestowing upon me a love, that with

every fiber of my being, I have longed for.

Filling this void, this emptiness, with your

everlasting presence.

 

Looking beyond the physical, and seeing

into the core of my spiritual being.

Amiable, loving memories that I locked

into my heart, to which you hold the only key.

This dear is what you have given me.

 

But now shall I sail to ever wondering land?

Starting life with hopeful promise without you?

The green postures full of life and wonder

Finding peace and longing for pleasure

Breaking this bond is insidious pain

But pain is temporal and shall leave with no wound

 

Relationship without love is like boat on a desert

But love is chemical that can be re-engaged!

This is what I tell myself for my daily prayers

But you are the only one who can tell me OTHERWISE

 

NOW

Shall I choose the path which leads to our separation?

Or shall I stay and swallow my pride in hopeful spirit?

 

This my darling is decision you have to make!

[Xafsa]

Beautiful and touching.

Thanks for sharing sophist.

[Sophist]

[LuCkY]

Yes, Sophist very beautiful indeed.

[DeadlyVision]

Am feelin dat__

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Qoute:

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Relationship without love is like boat on a desert

But love is chemical that can be re-engaged!

This is what I tell myself for my daily prayers

But you are the only one who can tell me OTHERWISE

 

NOW

Shall I choose the path which leads to our separation?

Or shall I stay and swallow my pride in hopeful spirit?

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seeen~

I say u tell that fool 2open his eyes & realize~

U leave it up2him, than ya hearts light be dim~

Chances bound 2get real slim,

Not 2speak about this like a bad sin_

I say that love is urs to win*

Slap his puples 4he lacks focus on his vision~

Only da creator knows he too is wishin!

Slap his puples 4he lacks focus on his action 2see

2see what both of u may be, maybe great

jus dont let it be too late~

Stay awake, 4get him if he seems lil fake~

...

~1~

PME

Visionary

[- diamond princess -]

No acceptance lead me to be here with no will to carry on,

What was once a beautiful rose, now lies ugly and stung,

Are you happy that i cry here now, are you happy you won,

You made this powerful attraction i had become strong,

You lead me to believe that we as one can succeed,

Only been fooled once again, when will this end for me,

This is truely painful love, where i can't erase you from my mind,

I try to run away, try to forget, but your there time after time,

Just yesturday i coulda swore i heard you call my name,

You see how you regecting me got me going insane,

but i refuse to let you back in my life once again,

So you can take control of me, you'll never change,

If i learned one thing is that i dont have a heart no more,

You might as well let you just run my life and take control

 

.:peace n luv:.

[Sophist]

I am a chap not a chick; anyhow thanks the beautiful words ladies!.

[Paragon]

You are a chap indeed lol.

 

"But now shall I sail to ever wondering land?"

 

My fellow friend, don't sail into the ocean's oblivion. Many men have done so to return no more. No need for more Don Quixotes

 

Nice and painful verse sxb.... It reminds me of the bitterness of love.

[silent-sistah]

woooooooooooooooooooow......

 

ouch,,,i felt the pain in this room...and the small hope given by DeadlyVision..

 

 

i know i been hatin on men, takin the feminist view ,

 

but i guess this is where i be true to my feelings and let it all out...

 

let my emotions take over and explode.

[silent-sistah]

Explosion of emotions,

Extreme compassions,

Betrayed devotions,

Damn commotions,

Out of control oceans,

Unseen collisions,

Eyes full of dilutions,

Daft illusions,

Damn the emotions,

Hate this notion,

Can’t find a solution,

Need a conclusion,

Don’t wanna be frozen,

 

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The way u swing me,

Confuses me, Fills me,

Frustrates me,

Don’t know the technicalities,

Highs, lows or difficulties,

I need a coping strategy,

This is my tragedy,

 

First you swing me right,

Become my life,

Wanna make me your wife,

For you I will strive,

Strive?

It’s not a struggle, on your love I survive,

 

Your love, so exceptional,

Unexplainable and natural,

Feels so eternal and blissful,

Your smile, it shines,

I know its mine,

Your words a wonder,

Make my mind wonder, of you, fonder,

Your absence, totally unbearable,

Undesirable, thinkable, or imaginable,

Your presence, a great leisure,

Full of pleasure, treasured forever,

Your eyes, they glisten,

Your actions, I listen,

Perfection, nothing is missin’,

Loving this feelin’,

Can’t wait for your touchin’,

Kissin’, I even love your dissin’,

Life without you, I can’t imagine!

 

You give me a blow,

Swing me low,

Never thought you could be so shallow,

It’s real hard for me to swallow,

Could you step down? HELL NO

You waiting for me to say Hello,

You swing me slow,

Leave me drownin’ in sorrow.

 

I look at what’s at stake,

Our life, a beautiful cake,

Together we baked,

Don’t know about rivers, but I cried a lake,

Damn it, stop this ache,

This pain, I can’t take,

My mind, and heart you break,

Believe me, for Gods sake,

Trust me this aint fake,

Stop it, on my life you skate.

Your call is too late,

Your excuse, too bait,

Your guts, I rate,

You was the perfect candidate,

Closest to a soul-mate,

YOU, I can never hate,

Though I cant understand or relate,

I’ll try and believe, accept this fate.

 

Though your not around,

Your love is profound,

Still swinging my moods,

Can’t trust new dudes,

 

Some1 help me,

Save me,

Put me out my misery,

Every-day I mope drink coke,

Can’t cope, see no hope,

 

I cry,,,,,,,,,

 

Sigh,,,,,,,,,

 

Good bye,,,,,,,,,

 

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why?

 

why can’t I forget you?

Its not like I need you,

No matter what I do,

In my mind you stew,

Like a storm you brew,

Time, I shall sue,

Coss your never due.

 

Why can’t I get over you?

Everyday I miss you,

I wish you knew,

The damage you do,

The stamp of your shoe,

Treads on my queue,

To declare I do.

 

Why can’t you hear me boo?

I’m not talking in Urdu

Nor in Hebrew

I’m saying -I love you,

This love, felt be few,

To me it’s new,

But undoubtedly true!

[Nefertiti]

Now I know I am a bit late with this response, but WOW that was very interesting Sophist. What a talent Masha'allah. Thanks for that .

[Xafsa]

Silent sistah hon that was beautiful!!!

We all end up ,at some point, hating on men. I've done my share!

1luv

[silent-sistah]

flying-still....thanx hon...

 

 

hmm...i dont htink im going to stop hating on them....i think i preffer hurting them, rather than being their victim