Captivating_SouL Posted July 1, 2003 I recieved this from a friend of mine..dedicated to me of course. .n why not let my soamli sistah'z in it too...hope you luv it. this is a poem written for Somali women....by Somali men...apologizing for all the pain that they have inflicted to somali women throughout the years....i guess its there way of saying we love ya ladies....and we are nothing with out ya... MY Somali Queens.. you have surpassed every obstacle to create what has now become your lives even braved being our wife's many have tried to explain the endurance of your pride but still struggle to understand the courage you posses inside but as sure as the sun meets its horizon in the distant shores you were all about weathering storms and fighting through downpours learning sign languages at times when your speech fell on deaf years putting on a smile amidst all the pain inflicted to u through out the years like the times when we hurt u, abandon u, cursed u, disrespected u for all the sacrifices that you have made for all the fights that you shouldn't have fought for the echo of your pain and for the silence of your laugh SORRY........is long over due but forgiveness we trust is part of you for you are truly a phenomenon in your own right a majestic eagle upon its flight you are like the dawn mildew fragrances of jasmine in beautiful garden scented names...i believe they called you yasmine and i wish that i had multiple identities and each identity had split personalities because i am in love with amina, hodo, shadiya, and naima respectively i am in love with rahma, amran, and fadumo equally i love every thing about u down to your dirac when it is blessed with some onsi you see.....you are my mother, my sister, my niece, my friend, my wife and i have realized that you are my life and i could give you mercedes and whole lot of roses and even some daises I could give you expensive cars and a whole lot of diamonds stars and even some gold bars and if you like i could buy you cashmere blouses and a couple of big house i could give you all that stuff but instead i choose to give you my love because you are my Somali queen the only in my scene the one whom i would swim upstream and rescue in an untold dream beautiful, intelligent, elegant and still maintaining her diin I MEAN who am i but just a fiend for my Somali Queen keeping it tight as always Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AngelEyes Posted July 1, 2003 sis..that was a beautiful piece. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xafsa Posted July 1, 2003 Damn!!! thats was amazing!!! maasha alaah...who ever wrote it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaliyah10 Posted July 2, 2003 DaYuuuuuuuuuum! I was about to hate my somali KINGZ but seriously that puts a big SMILE on my face like bigmac does...lol... but seriously that was a nice piece of WORDS put together by a somali men who loves us and to just read that makes me realize that no matter what wrongs we do or how ****** they act sometimes they still love us for being a SOMALI QUEEN! So i got BIG RESPECT for Yall ...not to forget as long as yall got respect back for us too... ~ONe LuV~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sYric-STiPHuLLa Posted July 2, 2003 captivating soul that was nice so thank you to the annonymous person who wrote that.. it was nice let me write an original piece real quick. this is from me and to my somalian queens, our hearts and love my dreams and emotional support, my perfected genuine somalian queens. so stylish and modest even at the peak of their light. it's just right to give back our thanks to you. for your beautiful color and hue. that makes me feel high and mighty as if i could touch the sky. don't think this is just another lie it's 2 in the am and i'm truthful at my most nocturnal of times. . thanks for i know i wouldn't be here without a somalian queen, my total spine, that keeps me in line. at times has to give me a jolt or kick me on my behind just to prove a point. my aches and pains my path to true love and guide to my dreamed kingdom. love and pure, your not just another lure but the queens that keep the true throne these days. we men act selfish at times even cruel and degrading. but don't get weak minded and stray away. for i hurt when i see you with another brother. simply adorable honorable the queens i grew fond of. what more can i say for if i said more i would be braggging. wun luv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 4, 2003 CAPTIVATING_SOUL THAT WAS A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE. WHOEVER WROTE IT HAS GOT SOME SKILLS. TENACIOUS_J THATS A NICELY COMPROMISED PIECE...YOU HAVE GOT POETIC SKILLS, THANKS. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SHAKA ZULU Posted July 4, 2003 Somali Girls this is how this King called Shaka Zulu feels about you. As I stand here today with the world as my witness, I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love. I will stand beside you as your partner, I will stand before you as your protector, And I will stand behind you as your solace. Please spend and end your life with me. i hope you feel the same way about me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 5, 2003 HEY SHAKA NICE FLOW, DID YOU WRITE IT? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captivating_SouL Posted July 5, 2003 hey..am glad you all liked tha piece...it was well articulated n shows the strengths how somali brotha's have in acknowldging the facts...just be aware n follow... 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
son_of_eve Posted July 6, 2003 That was tight! Beautiful expression of poetry...much respect and one love! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Changed Posted July 9, 2003 oooh masha allah........that was a fabolous ...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Iffah Posted July 10, 2003 Maasha Allah, the brother has a talent! Beautiful poem....thanks C_S, I enjoyed reading that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silent-sistah Posted July 10, 2003 MashaAllah.....that was beautiful @ captivating girl! shaka....lol.....i liked that ....well.... u can have me behind u, infront of u, guiding u, watching over u, night & day, im not far away, u want my hand, my help? ~just say! dont yelp cry or scream, im here -4real ~ no dream. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chimera Posted May 7, 2011 The Somali Queen, a wonderful beauty Turns darkness to light, this universal cutie Pushes me to new heights, to fulfill my duty Her strength and loyalty continues to inspire me. Her insight and intelligence has always been the key that relieves my chest of the anxiety and doubts, that sometimes plague me. Describing her loveliness, I wouldn't know where to begin. Shall I start with her playful hair, or her gold-copper colored skin? Whenever she smiles, I know my heart is wealthier than that of a thousand Kings. and so the butterflies within me, akin to the whirling Dervishes, never fail to spin. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaliyyah Posted May 7, 2011 ^ Did you write that? Mashallah. Beautifully written. Whenever she smiles, I know my heart is wealthier than that of a thousand Kings. aww you are so romantic. Mashallah lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites