son_of_eve Posted June 17, 2003 The idea originated from reading the album reviews in 'The Source' magazine. Gimme my 5 mics Verbally profound How does that sound? Am I a poet or an emcee? No - I'm just son_of_eve Scripting Depicting Stories untold As I teach while the truth is unfold I write because I can Preaching so you all understand My message for the youth My version of the truth Gimme one mic at least Prolific words without a beat As I attempt to bond all my people I keep my message clear and simple I'm not trying to divide or segregate I'm trying to feed you as you contemplate Thought process in constant motion As I spread love like smooth body lotion Challenge me if you will Gimme one mic at least for my creative skill My futuristic rhymes deserve two mics Holding my own opinion and avoiding the hype Not to mention my own creative flow I warned you before I must let them know Rhymes intertwining depending on each scenario Adjusting casually from corporate to ghetto Speed it up a little bit then suddenly take it slow Rhyme-slaying as we both enjoy the change in tempo As I attempt to make it unique I try to represent for my people on the street Three mics just for the versatility Home-grown for the masses plus you and me Switching styles, themes and energy As I slowly increase your vocabulary Spitting issues on consciousness and good old-fashioned love To the greatest Himself, God up above However versatility comes with responsibility Responsibility for the gift presented to me You see I really believe I was born to teach There are issues I need to discuss and people I need to reach Four mics for keeping it real Laying it down and telling you how I feel I believe in God and Jesus His Son I believe in the end we shall overcome I believe He will come back one day Where are you going to be at and will He come round your way? Racism still exists in this world Not everyone believes in nice boys and girls We have grown so suspicious of one another Pre-nuptials and all, see you can't even trust your lover Capitalism I fear will never work Why don't we care whether the world still hurts? I believe the world is undergoing human genocide Why are so many kids committing suicide? See I ask questions most people will I just do it with a certain floetic skill Gimme 5 mics and I'll add a hook Matter of fact, let me first finish my book "Verses from the heart" Thoughts now turned to art Influenced by what I see Tupac, my upbringing and my whole entire family 5 mics for just being son_of_eve 5 mics for describing life's complexities 5 mics for overdue respect 5 mics is all I expect 5 mics for giving you food for the soul Just gimme the whole 5 mics in total A_nigelmugamu_verse copyright 2003. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted June 18, 2003 Good one, fell of a little bro, but yo nice flo'.. all through out i give you 3-1/2 mic's.. Let me try this real quik.. M - icrophone I - ntellect C - oncealed S - ickness First ,Gimmie 1 microphone Second, I'll spit a script Third, Don't need a salary Think now actually Just for a minute Mr,sonOfEve that you did it Wrote it down and script it In your brain had it encrypted But your flows are timid You half step To get a check Am I the only one left? Catching wreck For the price of respect? Nah,i'm a intellect for most part i Intercept The only man in this district Whose flows Are like liquid And knows he can hit it Out the park Spark the distance kid............. Now,gimmie the rest of'4mic's so i can recite what i got inside just might ignite a light to create Rappers Delight Shook you in excite depart n' flight visible in sight like leading blind to light have any reasons to fight making you immune to bite for you lack the skill to write If you in doubt,Drink sprite "Image is nothing,Obey your thirst" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oddz-of-Men Posted June 26, 2003 High like the Skys- I fly like these guys- Got supermans powers - ABREAK'YA'LIGHTS!! ...... Giveme~ 5mics. chillin next2 4dikes Give me more rice- Extra blue shine for my ice- Far from anything thats nice- Dumb, but my role is wise- Ghetto, got my Rolex on its lowest price- Clean my M16 everyday more than twice- Cause I see them reading me wrong rights- Mujahid with a bad habit,I kill 'em with my eyes- Deadly as my brothers Vision, I tell no lies- Boil oliv oil to burn u like Phili Fries- Love none, hate all like Chilli Spice- Like Lynx I lose no fights- ABREAK YA LIGHTS- Oddz-of-Men all leaking from my pen- Battling Whites- Racist, atleast I aint got two faces I chip any tooth that bites- U weak an flexible like spandex- I bet u wear tights- Giveme~ 5mics. ...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oddz-of-Men Posted June 26, 2003 I came to lay down explisit thoughts I thought tough, thiking one tought was enough To get me out of this sadness madness wishin 4Hapiness, having my longest dreams vanish I manage to damage my self My advantage is my health I frantic about my future wealth So I slave under tha sun Till my flesh starts to melt Tiresome and hunger is all I felt Must finish the shift I pick up my paste an' go swift Thinking of those that hate me Hatting those who couldn't Relate me Feeling those that ached me Thanking the One that made me Am battling my own kind own mind own time own rhyme own whats mine But always run out of time when am in here ..........................its ok one day I will have the time to do this... ..........................its ok Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted June 27, 2003 Son of eve..good one...but.."u believe jesus is the son of GOD??????and that he will b resurrecting?????" acudhu bilaahi mina sheydhani rajiim...plz delete that from your poem , before my eyes burn to this notion of chrisitianity that makes our muslim faith beg to differ... Do that and ima spit mine next.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted June 27, 2003 mZ-aLPHA-pOET I DIDN'T HOLD THAT AGAINST HIM. cuz i though he wasn't a somali or muslim. Strange though, could be two things here, He barrowed that verse or he didn't and just might be another christian on SOL. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 27, 2003 Gimme ma 5mics. You can keep the fame I keep the game away from the spot lights. Even tho I must spit a chorus for the source afcourse I got more blieves to outburst and pick fights. Fight the thoughts of Jesus being the Son of God. What not, dude must be visualizing from his blind spot. Like Instinct feels the need to protect son-of-eve's neck, what the heck? he a kufaar in SOL. Makes me wana LOL. But got no jokez to tell. Send him an his believes to hell. Judgemental towards the enemy even tho I try to judgeless. No stress, I still wlcm him to a debate about his believes...or like you said, he could be mistaking...all that could be a typo. And if thats not the case, i still wlcm him to debate str8...cause he came on SOL, and I can relate... I may have came too late but I'll drop a Vision for the sake of things becoming Deadly... ..... ~1~ PME Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fouzia_Bella Posted June 28, 2003 Mizz alpha whateva don't disrespect the brother like that, just cuz he ain't muslim don't give you the right to put down what he belives in. learn to respect all gurl, christiens, jews, johovas witness, ect.........it's not your place to judge and critisize. son_of_eve, keep up the good work!!!and like i said b4, keep spitting them poems out. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
son_of_eve Posted June 28, 2003 Muslim or not, we're still one people, all equal....looking at today's world I would have thought that was very evident. I have nothing against your faith, what you do in your house is your business....as for my name? I am son of Eve. Eve being my mothers name...and if you want to spit next, the floor is all yours...be warned spit something worth spittin'.... Originally posted by mz-alpha-soup: Son of eve..good one...but.."u believe jesus is the son of GOD??????and that he will b resurrecting?????" acudhu bilaahi mina sheydhani rajiim...plz delete that from your poem , before my eyes burn to this notion of chrisitianity that makes our muslim faith beg to differ... Do that and ima spit mine next.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
son_of_eve Posted June 28, 2003 I don't know if you're a poet or an emcee What I know is your style makes me sorry Bottomline, what are you trying to say? Do you think you're that good at creative word play? Look at your work - eighth and nineth line I hate to tell you this, but you can't rhyme I asked for 5 mics and I made it really simple Food for the soul as I educate all my people I write floetry for them to assist in today's reality I write about life and its usual complexities I write because I can I don't do this so you can call me the man I try to avoid the spotlight and vainty Conscious thoughts and love are my speciality I'm trying to plant seeds for you mental Spit something so I can strenghthen you as an individual. So next time you want to battle like this? Come back with something that actually makes sense.... One Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted June 28, 2003 Fozia Bella....dont get it twisted luv...i spoke ma mind and didnt put no one down...so dont jump the gun with meaningless cheap jibes coz it aint gonna rub off on me nor score you any brownie points :rolleyes: son of eve..i have no qualms about your name....secondly i did not realize non muslims come on here..(naive of me)...thirdly am airing ma view and if u dont like it i couldnt care less...i aint imposing ma beliefs on you, you free to believe watever u want...but i beg to differ..and since this is a forum where we all supposed to unleash wateva we have inside , i dont think am stepping on your feet by telling you what i think... And about me spitting something worthwhile to you..i will pass on that coz ma creativity aint for show nor iz it for a dare by anyone let alone YOU :mad: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
son_of_eve Posted June 29, 2003 mz-alpha-soup - I understand where you're coming from. You are allowed to air your views by all means. This is indeed a forum after all. What I said was really simple....we all need to respect each other that's all. This part was out of line and indicated a lack of brethen respect in my eyes:"acudhu bilaahi mina sheydhani rajiim...plz delete that from your poem"...and like you mentioned it is your view, but perhaps you should learn to respect mine too. Since 9/11 the world has changed and the world seems angrier than ever with the muslim world. I feel for you and I came here to learn about your world....help me see the other side that I never saw before. Irrespective of our different beliefs we're brethen...you think they look at us as if we're different? I doubt that very much... As for for your skills, I don't doubt them at all. I don't write to the fame either. I write coz I have something to say, something to teach. If you re-read this piece, you will see what I'm talking about....particularly the 5th stanza. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 29, 2003 Ahaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Yeh~ ... Son-of-Eve_ Some can't believe_ What some really can acheive_ I'll lay it down with ease_ Sorry 2melt ya' cheese_ But, if you aint Somali, than u in some greese_ Feel free, to eat some of these* And if ur a Mali_ than ur kneelin on both knees_ Judging ya mental makin me judgemental, Like u dont say Alhamdullilah when u sneeze_ No matter how much am loving Fowzia_Bellas heart* Ama qoute this from the start* Paint a picture on ur SOL chart* Put this Religion debate on park* Done it by playin my own part* Simply this is sounding MINI-like-the-MART* And I Qoute:her _________________________________________________ Mizz alpha whateva don't disrespect the brother like that, just cuz he ain't muslim don't give you the right to put down what he belives in. learn to respect all gurl, christiens, jews, johovas witness, ect.........it's not your place to judge and critisize. son_of_eve, keep up the good work!!!and like i said b4, keep spitting them poems out. _________________________________________________ Was all she wrote. Even tho' I personally know she is smart* Ama continue with this enless art* Hate up on all Kufaars_ dont make me really spark* Debate cause u hate, or can't relate_ Chill, am yo brother b4 u inflate_ Dont mean to get u to inflame any fake_ I set it str8. Driving back to Son-of-Eve... Kid I still can't believe! Who u tryin to decieve talkin 'bout what u speak Like- And I Qoute:him __________________________________________________ Muslim or not, we're still one people, all equal....looking at today's world I would have thought that was very evident. I have nothing against your faith, what you do in your house is your business....as for my name? I am son of Eve. Eve being my mothers name...and if you want to spit next, the floor is all yours...be warned spit something worth spittin'.... __________________________________________________ And thats all he wrote... Muslim or not? What not we can't be the same_ I give it to u wit' out a shame_ Kid, u son of Eve- that I believe cause u said Eve is ya moms name_ Flippin da game* Cause this is childs play and its gettin lame_ Christian-Jews, Buddah or Hindus_ Ama get at u str8-up, an' build stress 2ya exsisting issues_ Once again feel the pain we ain't da same_ Islam is too profound to speak about it with a CLOWN! Yeah Kid jot down these words an mark 'em_ Or dont read 'em, just depart 'em_ If you aint Muslim, than u rollin wit' da JINN- No need to put a spin in what u do is already a SIN_ Decieving those who be really be believing_ Am seething, steam breathing in pain like my lungs are bleeding_ True say, I too; am cheating_ :rolleyes: Not following what am really reading_ Ending up contradicting_ But, that dont mean I have to settle'wit'evil_ simply cause evil is sometimes hard to break like a steel metal_ Knowing its all mental, I do my best to build my mettle~ Take you down my G-Tunnel_ Hunger strikes_ And anger bites_ Danger rights_ Lies you fit in my profiles_ Like Jesus is the son of God* Uuuu thats hot* Wanna battle to back up ya' last threat* :mad: than lets hip-hop_ And I Qoute: _________________________________________________ I don't know if you're a poet or an emcee What I know is your style makes me sorry Bottomline, what are you trying to say? Do you think you're that good at creative word play? Look at your work - eighth and nineth line I hate to tell you this, but you can't rhyme I asked for 5 mics and I made it really simple Food for the soul as I educate all my people I write floetry for them to assist in today's reality I write about life and its usual complexities I write because I can I don't do this so you can call me the man I try to avoid the spotlight and vainty Conscious thoughts and love are my speciality I'm trying to plant seeds for you mental Spit something so I can strenghthen you as an individual. So next time you want to battle like this? Come back with something that actually makes sense.... ________________________________________________ Un'Qoute: And thats all he wrote! Man I dont joke' I verbal attack to make u stutter an choke' Never been the one to provoke' But, do u care to smoke? or get smoked? Care to toke? or get stoked? U seem over worked... And still u aint sounding Dope~ But, atleast u got Ms.Bella there lookin 2protect But still I break ya' neck' Lucky this is SOL, so I still LOL Leaving u confussed and all- Take ya' plundge kid and GO-- LIKE "huh" WHAT THE HECK :confused: This Du' is too complexed- .............. I let u re-read it...on da real~..its deep_lol Something to pass beyond this mans believes... Lets not bring Islam to this---- Basic battlez.... CUT ME UP BOI! Line is urs Ryme is mine.... 1ne ~PME~ Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 29, 2003 dv! dont be hating nomad! u gotta understand that they r nomads who have different believes whether its religion, politics etc., in my opinion ones religion or what causes they believe in doesnt make them an enemy to other nomads. peace! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
son_of_eve Posted June 29, 2003 I see you want to battle me? You game to battle against son_of_eve? I told you I’m here to feed your mental Don’t be defensive and don’t hide behind your ego I’m your brother in reality It’s okay if you want to share with me I was serious when I said we’re the same My soul cries out coz I really feel your pain I know I’m studying your cause and your truth In my teachings I admit I’m still a youth But I want to embrace as we both learn Teach you about my faith as we take it turns I don’t understand why we have to fight Knowledge is power and creates a little insight You say Islam is too profound to share with me? Your whole verse illustrates a high level of insecurity My brother I came to embrace you and show love I came here to show you that it was you I was thinking of I told you I am a poet scribing my reality I sense a deeper fear and down deep you’re so angry I won’t lie 9/11 changed the whole globe I came here to show you I'm also involved Admittedly I don’t know much about your faith But I can tell these days you feel unsafe You’re blinded by pain, ego and pride My arms wide open, you no longer have to hide God blessed me with a gift I intend to use Spread my message of tolerance less mental abuse I too see what they do Believe me I know what you’re going through No need for this verbal attack In the end they still regard us niggers & blacks I’m here to teach about life complexities. I’m just a conscious poet and they call me son_of_eve One love Her Son Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
