Walking Words Posted June 16, 2003 ~~ yeeey Two thumbs UP ~~~ very nice poems I'm Enjoyingggggggg~~ loveeee It` First I am a girl Second I am a wife Third I am a mother Fourth I am a grandmother This is women's circle First my life is happy Second my life is difficult Third my life is challenge :rolleyes: Fourth my life is depression :eek: This is women's situation Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 21, 2003 Disis4daWomen-Who-B-confussed-about-LOVE~ What'Not..here it goes~.."maintain" ................................................ Ladies...... Love is like an empty Line~ Blind-stuck-in-still-Time~ Love is like confussion~ Passionat illusion~ Not believing~ Love is also, soo amusing~ Ahaaaah..... Laugh at it_ Becareful if you neva' had it_ Love is something like magic_ Marrage to avoid the ******* ... Don't get me started_ Uuuuuu..... :mad: I hate it, but can't seem to stay mad at it_ Am like a love addict_ Got a hearts beat panic_ Cupid and I, see eye to eye~ Honestly I can't lie~ Rather eject my spirit from my body an fly~ Die with modesty, I got u my loves melody 4 valentines_ Yeaaa...... :cool: Am blessed with love lines_ In love with the emotion that blinds_ The Heart_ Cufusses the mind_ The Art_ Is action confessing inner attraction In Due TIME~ Oooooh.... Stranger! Love me to take away my anger_ My heart beat is weak, I can't eat- No sleep- I feel ya' loves defeat~ But b4 I speak deep- Tell me if u feel my love is cheap! Loving all, but for ~1~ my emotion leaks~ Love please! Help me proceed~ Your so soo sweet!... Till next time, have a goodnight sleep~ Muuuwah... Peace~ ~1~ PME Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nivea_nova Posted June 22, 2003 Deadly I gotta hand it to ya....mashallah ur one gifted brotha....don't take ur gift for granted...do something about it....nothing but mad luv for ya....take care and all the best Nivea Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted June 24, 2003 mmh...plenty of admiration i see... no need fo ma feed back Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 30, 2003 Bla'bla ... Woman why must you be soo complex :confused: ... Dressed to sex~ Playing long games like chess~ Make up ya' mind lady, East or West? Ahuh-Yeeh! You give me happiness with lil mix of Sadness; always leaving me stuck in some mess. Loveless breathing nothin' but stress. Decieving my emotion in motion, u leave me vexed Even when I put a smile on ya face: All u say is am the Best!~ neva' da less You love an' would love to rock me like a vest Protect & make you always come 1st, Never ask you to come next~ So u let me take a rest on ya chest~ But still eye~stress :rolleyes: ... Woman why must you be soo complex :confused: ... I try to teach you about mutuality_ Love me love you, it's amust u see my reality_ Forsake me the make-up, cause dust bothers'me_ Odd smells scatters'me_ Come natural, stay mutual; get personal- And I'll in-and-out to read ya mentality_ 1st I let u be a fan-of-me_ One time your a fanatic to care'for'me_ Next2. U can't be standing ME :confused: What is this insanity? Flippin' wit' multi-personality_ Woman just focus on the man in me_ Who are you to be giving me penalty?lol Relax, max, woman pay ya' tax if u dont like Charity_ Let me child support, I let you child care; flow fare, dont give me that ugly stare cause I know what am doing like four corners of a squar... U know I can easily confuse you, but u would be sitting infront of the PC stuck to ya chair Depressed, feeling aggressed~ While I keep asking: WOMAN WHY MUST YOU BE SOO COMPLEX :confused: ... Easily confused, mainly abused, woman I understand your pain with shame in the same way I feel the burn of ya flame, you close to my skin, but always pook me like a pin, Woman you got my mind runnin' on spin, Scratchin' other women to WIN Love, Special massage the perfect Rub, and That comfortable hug, runnin' away to get lil not 2Much...thats when I cheated_ Thats when you began 2hold me tight like a grudge... Asking too much like--------- ... Woman why must you be soo complex :confused: ... ~1~ PME Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted June 30, 2003 Very beautiful poem keep them comming bro Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted July 1, 2003 A woman soo beautiful A woman soo beautiful A woman soo beautiful Three times as I wish her in my mind. Wishing she soon be all mine. Wishing she takes off my blindfolds, so I wont be in the dark feeling blind- Like love Am on a emotional rollercoster But finally found stabability on my costar A eye candy for my puples, I say she belongs on a Perfect beauty poster Dip-Set I sweat gansta sweat when am close to her close to her I feel rich like Rocka'Fella But am not Jay-Z, am more of crazy Nomadically I maybe. Lazy! But, I skip a heartbeat for my Baby! 21Questions to test ya patience If I get blurry, would u maintain my focus? Would you...Cook me rice make me feel nice If I was zoned out from smokin' da Bogus* If I was ill tempered, would you... cool me down or heat me up like a thermos? 2days b4 marrage, if u heard... I popped a virgnity would you burts with insanity? Would u break us apart, if some otha chick decites to play smart-- an paints you lies on a chart? Would u feel like u on 8mile, if I let you read my past profile? Would u...play me out like a 50Cent track if we broke up an' I asked you back? Would you do it again? and again? Till ya face becomes a perminent picture in my brain... I bet you would love me if I was on TV If I had close encounter with death like Pac&50 But, u love me now, I ain't got shhhhhh Only U ma missssss U leave me with a wonderful joy inhailin' bliss I'll role you up keep you tight like a fist B2gether 4ever; so you I won't Miss_ Promise you no mistress Promise me no stress Promise to keep you the closest slow with motions, feel like emotions am costing Look at me an see a Moryaan posting With an R.P.G_ Feelin' more Powers than Austin And please dont think am pickin'&'pasting Cause am only writing, and am not errasing Is why you'll find typos in my flows cause I aint doin' this for shows jus' expressin far from impressin directly adressin Ahuh... To those who be vexing Am done! ~1~ PME Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 9, 2003 SALAAM DEADLYVISON AS ALWAYS I DONT KNOW HOW YOU DO IT! ORIGINALLY POSTED BY DEADLYVISON: Would u...play me out like a 50Cent track if we broke up an' I asked you back? Would you do it again? and again? Till ya face becomes a perminent picture in my brain... I bet you would love me if I was on TV If I had close encounter with death like Pac&50 But, u love me now, I ain't got shhhhhh Only U ma missssss U leave me with a wonderful joy inhailin' bliss I'll role you up keep you tight like a fist B2gether 4ever; so you I won't Miss_ Promise you no mistress Promise me no stress Promise to keep you the closest NICELY COMPOSED. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted July 9, 2003 Alrigt...MsSweet Lucky thanx a lot_ I apreciate your compliment, you got me to realize something...... (I dont accept Big-Ups too well) Am happy thanks to all the poets in here~ So I wanna take a time out and thank YOU ALL for boosting my poetry ego... ... I thank you deeply All ya Big-Ups breed me Let me flow easy Feelin soo lucky I wish unity 4my ppl Hope we all stick 2gether and build each others confidences ... I THANK ALL THOSE WHO LET ME RECOGNIZE MY WRITING I ONLY WROTE TO EXPRESS NOT TO __-__-_ ~1~ Visionary Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 11, 2003 SALAAM DEADLYVISION BRO YOU ARE MORE THAN WELCOME. ANYTHING TO HELP YOU FLOW YOUR POETRY SMOOTHLY. OUR COMPLIMENTS COME FROM THE WORK THAT YOU HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO COMPOSE AND SHARE WITH US. THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME TO THANK US. KEEP WRITING! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biG mOm Posted July 11, 2003 woooooooooow! D_v & I-Poet, You guys I like your poets . from my heart, you always posts best ones, much love Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 13, 2004 NotaGameButaMessyPlay! B'Careful'out'there! .. Not Again. But this time I felt the pain! .. Confess regardless how I been* Volgar when there's the two of us, sweet for the public vision* So it seems, you cook you clean~ I don't mean to be, when 'm upset-Mean* 4give me, excuse me_ I tell myself trillion times I must give you- My life or the 3rd digree_ Soo keen to have you in my dream. Utter sloppy (u ma'cookies 'n' cream)... Memories of being zoned out wich'u in da colosseum_ Da best seats (my darling do you see 'em?) Up close in person am left wit' cupid mocking me! "AM.PM." ticking on me_ And my boy stole my toy! Nevermind, he won't mess up what we enjoy! Read between each Line, when I promise you no more flickering ploy! Honesty me if I ever lie, when am on and on about how 'm layin' low! It's not in me to diss you, all in my power I force. Afcrouse am healed when I kiss you. Judge on what I under list to. Ganster or a wana be? Dress messy to see how u judge me. Dress complex and see how you intense me. Yee' u wantin'me- Gurrr.Please! Need a woman I rather please, grown from that babe-tease. Changing ya' steez'n makin' my motion freeze! Desease give u treets for treats* Get red and read u that same story in bed* My neck bone's connected to my! Hip bone* Hip bones connected to my! thigh bone* Connecting to the caps that connect my knees! ~tired~Yawnz* 'm Gonez! ...2typa-women indis post... ~1~ PME DV None Understand This, They've All Seem 2Gone Brandish! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xaawo_Xaaji Posted September 13, 2004 My neck bone's connected to my! Hip bone* Hip bones connected to my! thigh bone* Connecting to the caps that connect my knees! looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool...i almost felt outta ma chair laughin'... tru talent @ itz best, DV...ur kinda like ..a poetic treasure chest...(if dat makes sense.. ) keep'em comin'.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
