DeadlyVision Posted June 6, 2003 This is 4da WOMEN I soo deeply adore~ Even though they may not understand When am hardcore... Love&Care is what women are FOR- ... ...... ... A woman holds with love, Tight like O.Js gluve* Lost in emotional moments, She thinks of a man* With a heart beats honesty, And a soulful modesty* A woman does all 2 lift her man up When his feelin down like a rug* She lifts his spirit, With a simple touch* Wondering if he will ever change* Wondering if he will 4ever make her feel strange* A woman is all, That it takes 4 a man 2fall... Or rise 2da top, none stop- she stands tall... Far from nothin, In her own lovable rang* A woman is truly somethin* Open'minded 2all blesses, She stresses when things go erroneous~* She feels WRONG. Cuddly holdin her pillow* In her mind she hears the same SONG* In a fantacy world. She wishes for that Right Fellow* Tellin' her self she gots to hold on* In a fantacy world. She swings moods, fixin' messes- She thinks smooth, Even when things seem hideous~* Its abvious, how am explainin this, That women are special* & And ama make it official* that each an every woman is a potential* Initial in a mans world... Sort of speak, I shift 2make the peak... And let u take a peek... At a woman, any woman, and let u tell me She is not steep... Lost in a mans wold... A woman succeeds, breeds, feeds a mans need... Only if a woman was given her credit* She would speak her better mind about men* Give a woman a pen... AND let her write her heart... However she means it, lettin u know she meant'it. Showin' me smart Am in love with women in every part Bright or Dark I'll park this poem in a perallel mark... LOVE 'EM AS THEY ARE, WOMEN ARE LIKE ART-- hate or love alteast speak ur part*.... .... Love U cause I need U Hate U cause I need U Can't live & Can't Live out.... ... Still need u 2see u like~ PME ~1~ Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted June 6, 2003 Assalamu Alaikum, Deadly, you know I'm your biggest fan. Lovin' the way you express yourself. I hope ALLAH (swt) blesses you with that special woman. Ameen... Quote: ____________________ A woman is truly somethin* Open'minded 2all blesses, She stresses when things go erroneous~* She feels WRONG. Cuddly holdin her pillow* In her mind she hears the same SONG* ________________________ Sweet...Masha'Allah Wa Billahi Tawfiq Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haseena Posted June 6, 2003 I liked it hjärtat...I thought I was the one who would post and surprise.. now u are the surpriser....once again I like it very much.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 7, 2003 My BAD_Heseena*thanx a lot_ .. lol.Complexmind amiin*amiin*amiin... Hover; Contribute ur 2sense of men_... ~Eye~~~Be~~~~~~So~ .......................................... Posting beauty-)_ Pasting immunity(%) Racing looming me~) Facing my community-)__ ~Eye~~~Be~~~~~~So~____))] Casing 'em by the bundle)) Phrasing from slavery* Rumbling with rubble) Anoy me when u twist and fumble-) Hate it when u dont listen* 2 in the nest an* Read between the lines_ Dont get lost in the rhymes_ ......................................... PME ~1~ Vision~101 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted June 7, 2003 lol @ deadly.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted June 7, 2003 wooow wee ur still at it Deadly_Vision..u still got it.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silent-sistah Posted June 7, 2003 hey,,,, complex ,,,,,dont try it,,,,,,im deadly's biggest fan....im newer and bigger!!! hehehe,,,,u joined a day or 2 b4 moi. @deadly MashaAllah...may Allah increase your talent ,,,,but i have to say,,,u move me more when you write the depressing, yet so very true, war stuff. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
La-y-La Posted June 8, 2003 okey, this aint right, i always thoght i was his biggest fan, i even got him a website for his fans, just kidding. but deadly, u got talent man, i wish i could put words together like u, mansha'allah, am so jeolous, just kidding there, seriously though i am,lol. anyway, ur poems wey fiican yihiin, keep it up. peace. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 8, 2003 Enjoy! Smiles & Joy..thanking all-... lol...Guess the room became a Fan Base...lol .... Yes Benevolent_Beauty am still at it~ Ahuh, I still got it~ I know u got ur own, so why dont u share it? Thnx for ur woow wee, Am all smiles. Like they really, really loving me... Am smiley thanking women in general like COMPLEX Lookin' an feelin good, with no vex- Living in my MIND like time- Feelin like am in dark stages, Reading through plank bages. In the park, in the dark, b4 I spark. Please suply me light am feelin a blind arc. In my mind like love I can't see much* But am holdin' the SILENT love I get from my SISTAH 'tight' like a grudge* Movin u with the depression in my vision~ Am left either 2be artificial or be real, in my lifes mission~ Reachin' my heart'soul Place my mind in my Religion~ Work rough 2be tough~ Teach my heart 2stop wishin' Am fishin missin one love- Have u seen her? She goes by the name of Haseena. Thats happy as if she flew down from above- Smiles an joy, I say: "no really, am ur biggest fan" With a powerful imagination, am good as a better plan. ... Nominating you to take my hand. Advicing you 2be a real woman. Not Just settling to be a Woe-man. Not being only4 Man. Analysing...Najma this last part if for u... 03 ..... Try to find ur name, and understand the metaphors ..... loool...please no more fans... Post ur poems...awana learn from ya'all~ ..... PME ~1~ Deadly ...Post ur part.... thnx- awana see some rhymes/poems/whatever u got2say...thnx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blessed Posted June 8, 2003 Not saying to get my name in your poem (honestly), but that was awsome. Seems like you've figured out what many men fail to do ~ Bless! Brothers .. hope your taking notes! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
La-y-La Posted June 9, 2003 hey, i seriously did not get what u were talking about, but anyway keep it up. peace. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted June 9, 2003 Word!nicely done....You had me feelin' that.simple yet worded, expressive as well as describtive... A woman succeeds, breeds, feeds a mans need... Only if a woman was given her credit* She would speak her better mind about men* Give a woman a pen... AND let her write her heart... I like that right thurr! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 10, 2003 Woooo she prety Hot!~ Ooooh ama take her 2da Spot!~ Maaan am bount to love her till she says Stop!~ Aaaah U never though I would make sense/cents~ Noooo U can't make me lack my confidence/since~ ... We been 2gether 4a munite. Thats a year long in my terms~ When I hear ya fire still burns~ Like hearin' niggas takin' turns~ Since I was gone~ I heard u been da one~ 2'Hop around town~ Jokin wit' every clown~ Provoking me from long disdance To flip my frown~ Get ya face outa my face, baby I aint DOWN. For the artificial vision* Am on a motivating mission* Constantly saying "I LOVE YOU"~ But, I hate the Devil In You~ I sense the peccadillo in You~ But still I want u on my menu~ ....Yeah'RIGHT..... Girl day dream on* am sweet & bitter_ Thanks to ur love letter_ I aint givin' half my emotion 4a a simply strokin, Am joking laughin! While ur chockin engulfing! Hell no I aint lovin* Am like cloudy like smokin* Triny 2over come this stalkin* Death! And still markin my steps. Lost with a foggy Breath! U left me in stealth. I got ya' heart 2melt, I left u by ur self, took my wealth* Built the base of ya' account b4 I left* For the sake of my kids health* What else. U need from my shelf? ...MOVE ON* I got2get. my groove on*.... ................................................. Losts of lovin* Losts of hattin* .................................................. KeepDaOneULoveClose.MakinSureTheyKeepUclose. .................................................. Warning!!TwoStoriesInOne... ~1~ PME ...RationalPoetry... Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Batuulo Posted June 12, 2003 MAASHA ALLAAH D-V YOU ARE SO WONDERFULL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My life was once empty And then you came along, I knew at that very instant By your side is where I belong. There were moments when I was lost And didn't know what to say, But you guided me down love's path To help me find my way. You've shown me such truth And taught me how to live, By the gentle words you speak With the perfect love you give. There are times in this world I'm not sure what to do, But I never have to wonder Since I've put my faith in you. You've proven to me that life Is much more than it seems, With you I've had the chance To live out all my dreams. If only I could express What you mean to me, And how you make me the woman I've always hoped to be. There is nothing I wouldn't do For the chance to see you smile, Knowing I make you happy, Makes my life worthwhile. You give the strength I need And let me know I can, Because you are by my side I've become a better woman Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 13, 2003 Batuulo, that was a beautiful piece~... U got the formaluty to over take ones mind with ur poetry, seemed real...LOVED IT! ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
