DeadlyVision Posted June 2, 2003 Sin of a man Not showing how much he's carring, he commits it_ It being the sin and its commitment to reapear_ SIN Loving lacking emotion 4the next... Loving lacking connection 4the other party... Loving lacking attention 2release the stress from his chest, he focuses on the bottum and the breast, skips on what the windows 2da soul show, he aims 4da lips, grabs da hips, and lay his chips, one bye one, picking paste its like his mind is lazed with hormon maze, his sins gaze and take a rest on sin...now palm on left breast, lips on lips, body close 2match, sin of men attatch 2scratch her itch...get the B.S on a switch, only if the mind was rich enough to see through this desing..this rhyme would be in a form of a poetry in your mind..4sin of men I say this with a simple line---> In for love 2gain basic pleasure- In for love 2bond with the static of nature- no long term plans, just for the moment hold me. Feelin vexed, stressed in a mess, as the sin of a man takes a measure. No leisure to please her, a man is out to get his sin in a bundle_ sinnin', 1st,2nd,3rd,4th innin'... Home atlast_ but she aint feelin da vibe so he ends up as a munite man, shoot that wasn't his plan, so he takes her hand, tells her he loves, he adores, he knows and understands, but still a munite wasn't part of his plan...and sin says: Atleast am in it left with nothin but 2win it pin it spin it sin it Something something to life we speak sin of men Loveless he loves all, hates most... A creation from his left rib got his mind thinkin from coast2coast- lost with thoughts on froze_ Battling with the power between his toes, hungery for the opening between hers, so she knows_ He glows and throws lines of love even though_ Sin of men knows a woman is bound to say no no no no and end up with a yes action_ U do the fraction_ sin of men. woman sin of woman. evil lets get back 2our sequal, as the ONE created us equal we need not2be leathal it takes more than a man 2understand the sin of men My sin is about 2make its second U-turn... Let me get out of the way b4 I burn... .... ONE .... PME ~1~ Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haseena Posted June 2, 2003 If sin isn’t a man made then you would be consummated then committing a crime taped none can ever watch your smile, a lesson to uptight yours none will never fear if a heart’s raised coming to it will never bade, I made my mouth taste strawberry in fame, but all my days known it ever lasted that long, I felt I wanted Him to enter a place never mind forced but pleasant with thoughts, I had a hurry kept but not to mention a state, if all was man made then it would never last a second long and hideous a joy leaves the place to contemplate if prompting a wall raised then it would not vibrate if only a man knew how to harbor one tame , a fruit will never decade if shown persistent a hand if sin was given a chance ruling it would hit to mark a native and survey a spot a bottle to shrink good sheer eliminate fait in god ........If u can make something out of it....go ahead...but I really don't know what I wrote right now........................................ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hibo Posted June 3, 2003 The sin of a man is always in the center of attention Althou his mind might wonder But never out of comprehension His thoughts content body pleasure meausuring inch by inch undressing her with his mind, left to right right to left sweat dribbing body shaking Thinking of possibilities of this happening for real then he takes his thoughts in action approaches her without distraction on his mind, filled with body attraction... Wins her over by any means seduces her ¨, mind body and spirit he feels the thrill he can feel it It starts with an innocent kiss and they become longer more passionate going further with compassion reaching deeper to all the places he set his mind to going longer then she ever thought of they both feel the thrill the sin a forbidden fruit But he is a man with a goal And is on a half way out of control So forbidden so good so real uhhh done with the mission he cant stay No no he was just in it for the play He feels a lil repentful smiles and thinks althou it was joyful i wont do it again i will be legite stop this game of vain Til another body of sin lures me with deception and i willingly follow it with exception Couse the sin of a man will always be there to be mentioned Its always in the center of attention Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted June 4, 2003 S.I.N is dissaster all in Mind,Choices taken After hearing, what my 'Deadly Vission'told me, My head is spinning, My mind is loosing it, all I hear is whisper of"Someone Is Nervous, It's Abvious, Calmed insanity self war nausious Not really, I'm on the edge of right and wrong, Trying find my path of where i belong, allah, if ya can hear me Soul In Need. I proceed, fallow"your heart can lead", Not knowing the outcomes, I never walked in building not knowing how to get out, I move on cleverly and see what this all about, Can't keep my silence for long so i let all out These Secrets If Narrated, Truth be told, no respect is earned Just lessons learned, another state of mind, teen To brag is the necotine,fein for prob's sorry, no tear drop's Saida Idil Naima, did you bad, get ya pen and pad, note this feeling is sad, all is lost Self Insured No'more Mind locks sliff's hardcore Sweet talked you like kenny lattimore 1,2,3,4 had you on the floor rubbing against stairs and bathroom door is all in matter of choice Silic Iyo Naxariis Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted June 4, 2003 Some poetry up in here!. I am enjoying what'am reading fellas and cinderrellas. Keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muslim sis Posted June 6, 2003 Assalaama Alaykum W.W Well said bro and sisters' ----------------------------- Sin Of Main Please look at me I am a lost soul covered with dirt Will somebody still take me I am a sinner, low and filthy Will somebody accept me I have no penny nor health Will somebody look after me the only comfort I have is Allah Ya Allah, in You I believe and in You I give my life Ya Allah, I kneel before You, love me and accept me For I know You will for those who believes. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted June 10, 2003 My Personal Sin :rolleyes: .... I was born with out a sin... As the world spins... Am making lot of ends... Lossin lot of friends... Like loose change... My life's strange... Plottin' plans 2 rearrange... Painfully paintin a picture_ Wit' my blood stain... Sins makin me feel mug pain... Feelingless like thug tame... Phoc'Fame... Am the game u be da player wit no shame... With imaginative thoughts, like hell rain... U notice the way love leaves migrane* Behind the back of ur brain* Aw, since my sins I've been plain* Flyin' over the coocos nest like a plane* ....Sin me Away 4am a sinner..... Repent my sins, for the sake of Allahs 4giveness. ................................ ~1~ PME U'KNOW Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
