Ariadne Posted June 11, 2003 Dazed ad Dizzy Spinning with confusion Head,chest and stomach pangs fusion Sweaty and barely able to get out of bed Drooping eyelids And a light weight feeling body With a heavy head Tired and miserable An effort is made to get out of bed It's almost like your body was revolting against you This cold I've had for awhile Is long overdue Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 11, 2003 Rudy: no, its about a t.v Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 11, 2003 dang! that was my second choice.... hey all check this site if u need a radio to listen at work or home!! http://www.kvegas.com/# Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 20, 2003 One of my unrhyming absract poems...I call this one morphing stones Different shapes, but same objects Diverse as everybody on this earth Oval as the eggs served on Sunday mornings Uneven edges as blue mountains Cracked, but still whole Transforming colours like the sky From blue to black way up high Smooth as the silk top I slipped on last night The rocks and stones are crops Of the salt and sea Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Batuulo Posted June 20, 2003 woow nice one pixie, Loveee iT Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted June 25, 2003 I don't know why but I'm attracted to abstract poetry... Sunrise Traces of your love linger but only by a thread A conncection could be made if more from you was said Sunset Another night passes without a compliment or a smile But I wont give in yet...I'll try harder to work it out Sunrise This morning we didnt speak...we just went about our day How can two people live together and yet have nothing to say Sunset I've had enough of this abuse and neglection from you Im starting to wonder how I ever had love for you Sunrise Its so much about me that you dont even know I've made a decision...at Sunset our relationship must go......... Sunset Last night I ended everything we had.I took your life and even still I'm not glad. Now I'm in a place where love doesnt even exist...I just want to let you that our silence is missed... This is just to show that things are never as they seem...Look closely as to what this poem really means.The person referred to is neither a woman or a man...Its a reflection of a self...only one person...that never learns to understand Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites