Ariadne Posted May 30, 2003 A crater filled moon hung in the clouds Schools of stars Clustered in crowds Twilight Twinkling away The night sky Very quickly Transforms into day The sun halfway over the horizon Something spectacular Isn't it? That giant yellow Orb rising Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted May 30, 2003 Sun is setting behind the trees The hot weather keeps Producing a gentle breeze The colours from the sunset combine and intertwine Red, orange, yellow, gray and pink Absolutely gorgeous don't you think The sun goes down By tommarow it will come around The never-ending journey of day and night Some classify it as an old rite The sun will replace the moon The sunflowers will once again be in bloom The world quickly turns The sun no longer facing this way Its the other sides chance to burn As we fall asleep on this side The day animals from their night stalkers will hide Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted June 7, 2003 In a rainbow Splendid colours Unite Orange. Yellow, Purple and Red Every colour has an explanation that can't be said A definition of beauty A symbol of perfection A description of grace Just as beautiful in every place Every Rainbow has a story to tell And so have I Cause my love resembles the sky As the rainbow appears it's telling a divine story of you and I The colours blend in to my emotions Causing tremendous commotion The orange is the flame that will forever burn The yellow is the heat that I always yearn Purple is the peace I feel when we are at ease The passion so red You left prints on my heart wherever you tread Blue! Does that explain my love for you? Maybe green might resemble my love so keen So you see my love is like the rainbow As it appears happiness i'v been bestowed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 7, 2003 Originally posted by Starlight: Every Rainbow has a story to tell And so have I Cause my love resembles the sky I love the way you worked a love poem into a natural wonder as a poem. Very nice...very nice indeed! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted June 7, 2003 Thanks sis i appreciate indeed you have very beautiful poems yourself Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 9, 2003 ^^ thanks a million sis Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 9, 2003 Beautiful rays of light penetrate through the windows driving away the night The sun majestic In its corner in the sky The chariot of Helios on the freeway Way up high Its right after dawn Th rays of sunshine glistening On the flowers,plants and lawns The children laugh The lovers swoon The musician play upbeat tunes Aurora shines her many rays Brightes and Strongest At the beginning of each day Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 9, 2003 r u opossed with dawn? just an observation from your peoms. they refer mostly to early mornings! i prefer nites! where mistries can be hiding every corner! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 9, 2003 Its abstract poetry it has nothing to do with my feelings its all based on my observations. Watching a sunset or sunrise is so much prettier than watching night (how friggen dull and boring is that). Its only 3 poems on my part how can that be classifed as obsession. And my second poem had nothing to do with mornings it was a sunset poem (as in the sun is setting you know like going down... as in it will be night in a while) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 9, 2003 [as in the sun is setting you know like going down... as in it will be night in a while) it must be good! can u plz pass it! :cool: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted June 11, 2003 I like that abstract poetry thing.nice drop Pixie. You know when you're looking out the window or something, and you just stare for what seems like hours. you're just looking out like no one gives a shit until some asshole interupts everything. you had the best damn view of the setting sun and its kledscopic colors as it hits the grass. with the nice red flowers. when some jerk-off comes in with his what they call it. a damn lawn mower with a fancy seat. you know? then he comes in and kills all the damn grass. and the damn flowers. and the sky gets angry. it extends it's arms and strangles the jerk-off. and theres lightning. this gorgeous storm starts. the arms start to shake the guy back and forth. then finally, the arms throw him on the ground. gouge his eyes out you know? all the while he's trying to scream you know? his teeth are chattering and the screams come out as wisps. it's not even funny. it sounds like he's crying. almost made you turn around and think..but DAYUM! :mad: almost doesn't COUNT but the sunset sho' is Beautiful Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 11, 2003 Rudy: The second post in this topic is a sunset poem Ms Word: Good poem as always. I like how your poem is a narration (I can almost see myself there) Maybe I should change the name of this thread to abstract poetry... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 11, 2003 hmm! sorry what i can say,,, me have no artistic talents! i am a dweeb! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted June 11, 2003 ^^ its alright we can't be everything heres another of my abstract poems I call it a Box of Wonders The box in the isolated room blares The images flash on and off like temperamental flares Everything on seems to make you scowl or scoff Everything, nothing Everything, nothing You have everything before you And your watching nothing The gadget filled box With the images flashing is one of the Reasons why many things are crashing You think your getting educated But its just a gaping hole In the end That mechanical box Will steal a part of your soul Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rudy-Diiriye Posted June 11, 2003 is this about a computer! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
