hey ppl...check out this poem i came across....it'll take your breath away!!!

[Fouzia_Bella]

You got me…

 

Contemplating

Reflecting

In my solitude

Accepting your suggestions

You ask questions

Questions: what it took

From then to the idea of the book

Sharing hopes and dreams

Possibly playing permanently for your team

On a real, girl you got me thinking

 

You got me feeling

My hearts screaming

For love

For your love

To embrace

To share

To care

To hold

Unconditionally

Let it come naturally

Love like this - so healthy

Bringing me back to reality

 

 

You got me guessing

Stressing

And even confessing

The truth

Even though things that seem uncouth

Just so you know

This, right here is something I can't let go

 

 

You got me wishing

Ending my thoughts without me finishing

Accepting

Respecting

Your whole being as it stands

Because I know you understand

And you embrace me too as I am

 

 

You got me open

Releasing thoughts never spoken

Girl your presence creating these notions

A crib by the ocean

Baby can my love by your body lotion?

Wondering if our hearts will beat together in motion

This moment is priceless - let's keep it frozen

Bottle it up and give it to you as a love token

 

 

You got me thinking seriously

Wifey

Celibacy

(Repeat)

Celibacy Wifey

Did you hear me?

I could do this slowly

Wait for matrimony

Your whole being is affecting me

And I'm loving that

 

 

You got me excited

I can't fight it

I can't describe it

Tried to deny it

Can't

Why hide it?

This is real

Girl this is how I feel

 

 

You got me buzzing

With energy

Ideas for my floetry

Questioning my mentality

Which is always healthy

Touching my soul

As we both grow

A feeling like this? I can't let go

 

 

You got me smiling

From deep within

Remembering the joy your voice brings

Or the look on your face when you sing

Ah!

When you sing?

It's such a beautiful thing.

 

Written by son_of_eve

[Complex Mind]

Assalamu Alaikum,

 

Wow, that was sweet masha'Allah. Some good lovin'.. Thanks for sharing Bella..

[SuRvIvEr]

WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL VERY DETAILED.

[LuCkY]

HEY FOUZIA_BELLA

 

THE POEM WAS EXPECTIONALLY WRITTEN-INDEED VERY BEAUTIFUL

 

THANK FOR SHARING

[silent-sistah]

wooow..true,,,it is great!

[Complex Mind]

Assalamu Alaikum,

 

Hey Fouzia, I wanted to ask you where you got that poem from. Hook a sista up insha'Allah...

[Mowgli]

Salaams...

 

I wanna know where you got it from too...it was really really good!!

[Fouzia_Bella]

where did i get it from????.....ummmmmmmm...shooooot, i forgot..but amma go right now and retrack ma steps...BRB!!

[Fouzia_Bella]

ok iam back ans yes...i did find the address....here it is

 

http://www.ctadams.com/

 

CLICK ON IT

[Hibo]

good-evening Fouzia_Bella,

 

nice of you to post this poem... yes SON_OF_EVE is a talented AFRICAN brother who is currently living in Australia...

 

 

Note: found this board via my WEB TRAFFIC LOGS...

 

much success... have a nice day everyone...

 

 

admin,

c.t.adams-///

mr. africa poetry lounge:

http://www.ctadams.com :cool:

[son_of_eve]

I heard about this page and had to come check it out....thank you for feeling my verse....much love....Her son

[Xafsa]

I think I just found a new love....the brotha is talented...dang...thank you all for sharing that web page.

peace and luv

[Fouzia_Bella]

WHOA!! this must be an extremly small world....i neva imagined i'd see you here on somaliaonline son of eve. well, if this is really you and it aint some low life who has extra tyme on his/her hands let me just say you are 1 hella talented brotha and i was feeling every single poem you wrote.....keep it up, stay positive!!!

[son_of_eve]

Tis me, son_of_eve...thank you for following my work. I am honoured. I will post here as well....

 

 

Originally posted by Fouzia_Bella:

WHOA!! this must be an extremly small world....i neva imagined i'd see you here on somaliaonline son of eve. well, if this is really you and it aint some low life who has extra tyme on his/her hands let me just say you are 1 hella talented brotha and i was feeling every single poem you wrote.....keep it up, stay positive!!!