Complex Mind Posted May 21, 2003 The waves angrily crash into the rocks below as I take a seat next to you on the beach. My heart is beating uncontrollably but I keep my posture. You seem to feel my anxiety because you turn away from me. The waves retriet only to return with a more menacing encounter with the rocks. My heart starts to sign its song. So far yet so close. I close my eyes and imagine. So far yet so close. I smile and breathe in the ocean air. So far yet so close. I can hear the chorus before I even let it pass my mouth. So far yet so close. There's a deep sound then, not a part of my song but every bit as beautiful. So far yet so close. The sound. The voice. So deep. Enchanting. Mezmerizing. I raise my voice now, singing with all I've got. So far yet so close. The voice now seems to be competing with me. So far yet so close. Alluring. So far yet so close. The song comes to an end but the voice...it's still there. So far yet so close. I hear the chorus again. I open my eyes and remember where I am. You sit facing me, blocking the moonlight. The chorus is still playing. So far yet so close. I see your lips moving but I can't hear what you're saying. The song from the voice slowly comes to an end as I stare at your lips. So far yet so close. Your lips stop moving. The song is over. You look at me and ask if I'm ok. I smile and nod softly. You ask me if that's how I feel about you. I realize that I wasn't paying any attention and humiliatingly ask you to repeat yourself. So far yet so close, you say. You ask me again if that's how I feel about you. I take in a sharp breath as the voice returns. So far yet so close. The chorus is playing. Your lips are moving. You stare at me as you continue. So far yet so close. I suddenly realize that the voive was yours. A confused look overtakes my face and you quickly say that I was singing out loud so you just caught onto the chorus and sang with me. I realize that my mind has betrayed me. You ask if I'm upset with you. My imagination just opened all my closed doors. But as I gaze at your face I realize that these doors may be better off open. You're still staring at me but your expression is filled with question marks because I'm smiling from cheek to cheek. I did feel that way, I say, but not anymore. The waves move solfty now, almost as if they want to hug the rocks. Was far but now so close... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 21, 2003 ONE AT ONCE Tension in the room as you look at me We're finally alone, reality hitting me I can feel your body heat without you touching me You sit across from me, undressing me mentally A virgin's reality Swept away by a word Or two or three Resulting in a climax never felt Sexual ecstasy If I asked you to let tonight go Without you touching me Could you hold in your desire And pop me not, my sweet? On the contrary Can a thirsty man find water and resist drinking it? Can the sun set without the moon proceeding it? Get into it I know you've been waiting for this night Wishing it would come, faster than the speed of light That's quite alright You're a man I'm not expecting less from you I'm a woman An adornment, as the Book concludes All for you The clock tick-tock's, you're moving closer to me My heart's beat bops, perspiration all over my body This comes off, that comes off The lights turn off But something's glowing inside of me What happens in between is a hazed story You've become a part of me Ascending higher in the path leading to unity Mentally Physically Emotional conspiracy I am you, you are me This is WE....Freee... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted May 22, 2003 Beautiful sayin, exquisite poem and a lovely lines.....Am left with acomplement and a smile~ ...both of them writing are thundering..... ............ ....... .... .................... --- Causing Complications: ... Confusing my way of thinking Abusing the adavantages of living in a fantacy Hurt when I meet up with reality- breaking Palms Shaking Heart beat raising- aching Try to calm my self, I call my self to a prayer Two-Four-Four-Three-Four... Day one began to peel my sinfull onion- but only peeled through one layer Feel like another good player, out of a million... Hate and debate seem to relate straight Got me restless, developing insomnia Pass the stage of paranioa My thoughts are getting heavey- Another night waiting the sun 2come up, till I get my body laid in my bed- Fate fills up my plate with love, finds me a mate Greate... Hope we keep each other- Arguements to gain the upper hand, baby dont even bother Am the one who will become the father You, hopefully play ya part as a mother Long lasting in the future Sharing some thoughts---wont forget to say Inshallah... After a missed Inshallah, we break up- make up Shake up, and lose each other--sad case- a bad face shows ugly personality... I keep hopes high, stay away from a lie... I'll tell you the full story latter, just ask me WHY? ... Just some thoughts to keep through these aging years in our lives... Love Hate Good Bad This That Learn the difference...get mad, but dont 4get 2feel glad after feeling sad...thats that... .... ....... GoodLivin-LongLovin-NiceResting...peace .... PME PeaceMiddleEast ~1~ Deadly Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 22, 2003 Salaamz... Deadly Vision, thanks for the compliment. It feels good to know you liked it. Ur rhyme was nice. It made me think more than usual, but that's why I liked it. Finish the story....I'm asking you why.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted May 22, 2003 WOW :eek: ! Complex Mind Okay your first poem is nicely worded..it was written in a story format and It was on point like spear....Word the second one....Dang it was so Ill I got taste Digestion eeeeew! Can a thirsty man find water and resist drinking it? Can the sun set without the moon proceeding it? deeep DeadlyVision as usual you're a nice complementry to any poem you post on....I wonder how you start a new topic within a topic and you never go off point....SKILLS..... Day one began to peel my sinfull onion- but only peeled through one layer Feel like another good player, out of a million... Hate and debate seem to relate straight Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 22, 2003 Ms Word... Ur compliment is much appreciated. Hit us up with more of ur rhymes. I'm always looking forward to reading them... Deadly Vision...Still waiting for the rest of the story... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted May 22, 2003 "You're a man I'm not expecting less from you I'm a woman An adornment, as the Book concludes All for you The clock tick-tock's, you're moving closer to me" I am feeling the tension from here . I gotta say, these days we have talented poets in the poetry section. I think it is time we set-up the SOL poets-club. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted May 22, 2003 wow, wow, wow, Complex Mind...very nice...Loved this bit... My heart starts to sign its song. So far yet so close. I close my eyes and imagine. So far yet so close. I smile and breathe in the ocean air. So far yet so close. I can hear the chorus before I even let it pass my mouth. So far yet so close. There's a deep sound then, not a part of my song but every bit as beautiful. So far yet so close. The sound. The voice. So deep. Enchanting. Mezmerizing. I raise my voice now, singing with all I've got. So far yet so close. The voice now seems to be competing with me. So far yet so close. Alluring. So far yet so close. Amazingly done...keep up tha written word... ~harmonyangel~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 23, 2003 Salaamz to all, Jamaal, thanks bro. You know I got a thing for your rhymes too. Especially the ones on your homepage. A wiseman is not sure he's a wiseman so he calls himself a wiseman without knowing that he truly is a wiseman. What a wise man... Harmony Angel, lol, thanks girl. An appreciated compliment. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muslim sis Posted May 27, 2003 Intresting.............. Tonight when I am here watching T. V I couldn't pay attention to it, as I usually do. My Mom called me for dinner But I just couldn't eat tonight. My father took me for a walk after dinner. But tonight I wasn't able to enjoy. The wind blew my cufi (prayer cap) away I didn't care to run after it. After all we are going to leave everything here, The only thing we'll take are our good deeds. My friend died last night in his sleep. It could've been me! But am I ready? Ready to meet Allah? Am I ready to face the difficulties of qaber(grave) Will I ever be ready? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
